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								<p>

								<strong>Written by Jeanne Cavelos</strong><br>

								Release date: April 1997<br>

								ISBN: 0-440-22348-2 (US)<br>

								ISBN: 0-7522-2339-9 (UK)


								<br clear>


								<blockquote><cite>

								Anna Sheridan receives an assignment to study the ruins on Z'ha'dum.  John

								Sheridan takes command of the Agamemnon.  Babylon 5 goes online and sees

								the arrival of its first residents.

								</cite>

								</blockquote>


								<p>

								Reader reviews, and online ordering, can be found at

								<a href="http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0440223482/thelurkersguidet">Amazon.com</a>.


								<p>

								<hr>


								<h2><a name="BC">Back Cover</a></h2>


								<h3 align=center>The Darkening Light</h3>


								<p>

								Anna Sheridan has two passions-- her husband, John, and the mystery

								surrounding some intriguing artifacts found during a mission on a

								distant planet called Z'Ha'dum. Now she gets orders to become the

								science officer on the follow-up mission scheduled for the spaceship

								Icarus. Happy, young, beloved, and brilliant, never has a woman had

								so much to live for. Or so much to lose.


								<h3 align=center>The Shadow Within</h3>


								<p>

								While John, recently promoted to the rank of captain, struggles with

								his new command on the Agamemnon, Anna begins to assemble her science

								crew... and makes her first mistake. She signs on Dr. Morden, a highly

								credentialed translator whose heart hides a weakness that can cost

								Anna her life... or her soul. Her second mistake is to underestimate

								the danger on Z'ha'dum. What is awaiting the Icarus near the rim of

								known space is an unimaginable horror. What is awaiting Anna Sheridan

								is an explosive destiny... and a dark future that can crush her husband's

								dreams and a terror that can come back to haunt us all.


								<H2><A NAME="SY">Synopsis</A></H2>


								<p>

								The book begins with Anna Sheridan studying an artifact found on an

								Interplanetary Expeditions (IPX) dig at Theta Omega 2, a planet once

								inhabited by the J/Lai, an offshoot of the Brakiri. It appears to be

								a biomechanical device, halfway between machine and living organism. As

								she studies it, she briefly makes contact with a quasi-consciousness in

								the artifact. She tells Dr. Chang, the head the expedition, but is unable

								to duplicate the effect for him.


								<p>

								They hire Terence Hilliard, a commercial telepath, to make contact with the

								artifact. As soon as he tries, the artifact activates, overheats and

								explodes. Hilliard is seriously injured, and falls into a trance-like state,

								repeating over and over again, "I am the machine." Anna and Churlstein,

								another IPX scientist, take Hilliard to Geneva City Hospital. As he is being

								tended to, they are approached by Donne, a Psi Corps representative looking

								into the incident. Donne insists on speaking to Anna privately; Anna tells

								Churlstein to go back to the lab and make sure nothing is touched before

								she returns.


								<p>

								Donne takes Anna to Hilliard's bedside. His physical injuries are

								superficial, but his brain is locked into a rigid, cyclical pattern. Donne

								says that Hilliard will be moved to a Psi Corps facility and dismisses the

								doctor, then questions Anna about the incident. Donne indicates that nothing

								can be done for Hilliard.


								<p>

								Back at the lab, the remains of the explosion have been cleaned up and all

								of Anna's reports and test results are gone. Dr. Chang tells her he has been

								ordered to take over the testing of the remains of the J/Lai "mouse" and

								related artifacts. He allows her to take her computer, with her notes in it

								intact, and a fragment of the mouse. Anna has dinner with Liz Sheridan, her

								sister-in-law, before leaving for Station Prime, where she and her husband

								are planning to celebrate their anniversary.


								<p>

								Meanwhile, John Sheridan has been in command of the Agamemnon for one

								month, and is struggling with a badly disciplined crew. He chews out Lt.

								Spano, a weapons officer, for not following regulations. Corchoran, the

								first officer, tells him they will be inspected when they arrive at Station

								Prime. Later, Corchoran suggests that the crew is envious of Sheridan's war

								record; the previous commander of the Agamemnon, Capt. Best, humiliated

								them by retreating at the Battle of the Line.


								<p>

								At Station Prime, orbiting Centauri Prime, Anna checks into the honeymoon

								suite of the Imperial Hotel. John calls her there to tell her he'll be

								delayed by the inspection. Then Chang calls, saying that an IPX probe

								has discovered the remains of a new, unknown civilization on Alpha Omega

								3. An RNA scan of microorganisms there indicates they are related to the

								"mouse" from Theta Omega 2. Chang asks her to be on an expedition there,

								which begins in 10 days. Anna is surprised by the short preparation time

								but agrees to go.


								<p>

								General Lochschmanan's inspection of the Agamemnon goes well until the

								weapons bay, where the optical system has been left on line, creating a

								danger that the ship's laser cannons could fire if there were an explosion

								or fire on board. The Agamemnon fails the inspection, and Lochschmanan

								orders Sheridan to get the crew into shape as soon as possible. Sheridan

								cancels leave and institutes a heavy schedule of drills. The ship is also

								being outfitted with a new stealth technology.


								<p>

								John calls Anna and tells her that he won't be able to make it; Anna does

								not tell him about the new expedition. She checks the roster for the

								expedition and sees two non-IPX personnel listed on the archaeological

								team: Donne, and a Dr. Morden, an Earthforce linguist who six months

								previously took leave of his job and moved to Station Prime. Anna becomes

								suspicious of Morden's credentials and visits him. He works for an Earthforce

								division called New Technologies, and claims to have been called up by his

								superiors and added to the mission out of the blue. She notices an Anfran

								love stone in his collection of artifacts, and learns that it was given

								to him by his wife. He moved to Station Prime after his wife and daughter

								were killed in a terrorist attack on the Io jumpgate. Anna resolves to try

								and help Morden get on with his life.


								<p>

								Spano arrives late for a drill and Sheridan confines him to quarters. After

								the drill, Sheridan speaks angrily with Ross, the weapons chief, who is

								about to punch him when Lochschmanan arrives. Corchoran routes in a call

								from Anna. John speaks to her hurriedly, learning about the expedition, and

								returns to speak to Lochschmanan.


								<p>

								At the IPX mission briefing, Chang introduces the members of the

								archaeological team, then shows them pictures of the planet, including a

								series of inscribed pillars and an egg-shaped biomechanical structure which

								has biological similarities to the "mouse". Afterward, Anna learns that

								Donne and Morden have a deep distrust of each others' organizations.

								On the Agamemnon, John Sheridan gives Ross, Spano, and Watley, another

								weapons officer, a choice between transferring off the ship or being

								court-martialed if they continue to perform poorly.


								<p>

								As the Icarus leaves Station Prime, Donne asks Anna to try to make contact

								with a fragment of the mouse. She does so, experiencing an impression that

								it is still partly alive. Morden shares some preliminary translations with

								Chang and Anna: the pillars appear to say, "every light casts a shadow," and

								the largest inscription on the egg is "what is desired" or "all that is

								desired."


								<p>

								John Sheridan is woken up by a message from Lochschmanan. Homeguard, the

								group responsible for the Io jumpgate attack, is planning to blow up

								Babylon 5 during its dedication ceremonies with nuclear devices obtained

								from the Narn. The Agamemnon is ordered to intercept the Homeguard ship

								carrying the bombs.


								<p>

								Twenty days from Alpha Omega 3, Anna uses the IPX probe's remote control

								to explore a cave near the planned landing site, and finds two artifacts

								similar to the "mouse". Meanwhile, the Agamemnon stages a mock battle

								against the Hyperion. The Hyperion takes out the Agamemnon's targeting

								system. When Sheridan orders the weapons officers to fire manually, Ross

								does not fire, and the Hyperion goes on to "destroy" the Agamemnon.


								<p>

								Sheridan orders Ross arrested. He goes to Ross's quarters to see him

								detained, and finds him drunk and threatening to shoot himself. Ross tells

								Sheridan about his experience at the Battle of the Line. The Athena, Capt.

								Best's previous command, where Ross was serving, had its automatic targeting

								system knocked out. He fired at a fighter that appeared to be trying to ram

								them, and realized a moment too late that it was one of their Starfuries,

								trying to make an emergency landing. The resulting explosion disabled the

								Athena and killed 35 crewmembers. Sheridan takes the PPG away from Ross and

								gives him another chance.


								<p>

								The next day, Anna discovers that the IPX orbiter at Alpha Omega 3 has lost

								contact with the surface probe. The orbiter's log indicates that Chang was

								controlling the probe at the time. The probe logs have been erased back to

								when he used the probe the previous day. Anna tells Chang about this, and

								he orders her to give no indication that malfunction could have been anything

								but an accident. He also gives her a PPG, telling her he has another for

								his own defense.


								<p>

								Anna attempts to send a message to John on New Year's Eve, but the

								communications system is unable to send it. Hidalgo, the captain of the

								Icarus, tells her that the comm system just malfunctioned. Anna attempts to

								remove her message from the outgoing queue, and discovers Chang has also just

								tried to send a message, to Galovich, the mission's supervisor on Earth. She

								copies the message and views it. Chang is reporting that Donne and Hidalgo

								are planning to smuggle artifacts to Earth for Psi Corps to study. He also

								refers to the Shadow ship found on Mars, and a hypothesis of Morden's, that

								it returned on automatic.


								<p>

								Anna returns to the ship's New Year's party and tells Morden she has a

								present for him. They leave the party and she gives him the Anfran love

								stone, which she had taken from his quarters the day before and had put on

								a necklace. Morden is shocked that he went an entire day without noticing

								it was gone, and puts the necklace on to assure that he will never forget

								it. Anna asks him what he knows about Mars. He tells her about the Shadow

								ship discovered by IPX. When the ship was excavated and first exposed to

								sunlight, it transmitted a message. Morden was on a team from Earthforce

								New Technologies sent to study the ship at IPX's request. Anna tells him

								what she knows about the probe problems, and the smuggling arrangement

								between Donne and Hidalgo.


								<p>

								As B5's dedication ceremony approaches, the Agamemnon passes an inspection

								and is dispatched to intercept the Homeguard ship. Kosh Naranek contacts

								Delenn and tells her that a human expedition is going to Z'ha'dum, and it

								must be stopped. He directs his own ship toward Z'ha'dum, expecting to

								arrive just before the Icarus.


								<p>

								After planetfall on Alpha Omega 3, half the archaeological team, including

								Chang and Donne, go to investigate the egg, while Anna, Morden, and the

								others head for the cave where she found the mice. Morden has refined the

								translation of the pillar inscriptions to "Every light carries a shadow."

								Arriving at the cave, they find that the mice are gone and the hole they

								were removed from has been partially filled in. Anna, Morden, and Dr.

								Favorito explore deeper in the cave, and find a corpse that appears to be

								a biological creature inside a biomechanical one. As far back in the cave

								as they can go, they find a black sphere blocking a passageway. Anna tries

								to take a sample of it, but find her hand passing inside it, and then feels

								something waking up inside it. She jumps back and runs away, pulling the

								others along with her.


								<p>

								Delenn, on authorization from the Grey Council, contacts Sinclair at Babylon

								5 and tells him the expedition is in danger and must be recalled.


								<p>

								Anna, Morden, and Favorito emerge from the cave into a sudden storm. They

								and their support crew head for the egg to rejoin Chang's group, but the egg

								and the entire group have vanished. A scan shows one link nearby; heading

								for it, they find Chang, who has been shot. Anna gives Chang's PPG to Morden.

								The two of them find a crevasse underneath where the egg had been, but it

								is too small for the egg to have gone through it.


								<p>

								At Babylon 5, Sinclair has contacted Senator Hidoshi about the expedition

								and been referred to President Santiago's science adviser, Dr. LeBlanc.

								LeBlanc is unaware of any expedition near the rim, but promises to check

								on it. The Agamemnon observes the transfer of explosives from the Narns to

								the Homeguard ship. Just before it comes out of hiding, Ross reports that the

								weapons system is nonfunctional. A component has been removed from the

								optics system.


								<p>

								On the Icarus, Hidalgo announces that communications have been restored.

								Anna has taken charge of the archaeological team, and splits them up for a

								search of landing area. She gives her PPG to Dr. Razor, who is on the

								team that includes Hidalgo, and tells him about Hidalgo's plans for

								smuggling artifacts. She sends a message to Gulovich, and then searches

								Donne's quarters. Inside a roll of lingerie, she finds a collection of

								small body parts and a Psi Corps badge with a black square in the center.

								She recalls that a patch of Chang's hair was missing, and concludes that

								Donne killed Chang and took the hair for her collection.


								<p>

								When Anna returns to her quarters, she finds Morden waiting for her. He

								already believes that Donne killed Chang. When she wonders why Psi Corps

								is going to such lengths, Morden tells her that not only was Hilliard

								affected by the mouse, but every telepath at or below his P-rating within

								a three-mile radius was left in the same state. Psi Corps covered it up,

								but Earthforce-- or at least Morden's division-- quickly figured out what

								had happened.


								<p>

								Dr. LeBlanc calls Sinclair back and tells him the expedition will not be

								recalled. She suspects that it may discover something powerful that can

								be used against the Minbari. Sinclair tells Delenn the news, and she

								informs him that sending any further ships to Alpha Omega 3 will be

								considered an act of war against the Minbari.


								<p>

								Sheridan orders Corchoran to interrogate the weapons officers about the

								sabotage, but Spano is missing from the mess, where they had been ordered

								to wait. Spano is tracked down in the gym. He complains that he was bored.

								Ross reports that the primary mirror in the optics system has been

								destroyed. Spano repeatedly denies sabotaging the system, but finally

								admits that he left his post during his watch to get a snack. Sheridan

								charges him with insubordination, desertion of post, and dereliction of

								duty, and has him confined to the brig.


								<p>

								Anna decides to make contact with the creature inside the sphere. She and

								Morden return to where it was, but it has vanished. In the passageway

								beyond, they find a generator that could have come from the IPX probe. As

								they talk, Morden suddenly reaches for his PPG. Anna knocks him down as

								he fires, and the blast triggers a cave-in. Donne appears and tells Anna

								that Morden destroyed the probe.


								<p>

								Ross tells Sheridan that the optics damage is worse than he thought, and

								he can't repair it on his own before the Homeguard ship reaches Babylon 5.

								Sheridan grits his teeth and assigns Watley and Spano to help him. Spano,

								feeling chastened, suggests that Sheridan consider people who had previously

								served as weapons officers. He specifically mentions Corchoran. Sheridan

								asks Corchoran for information on officers who had been weapons officers,

								but Corchoran does not send it. Sheridan orders security to detain Corchoran.


								<p>

								Anna realizes that Morden had been aiming at Donne. Donne says that Morden

								hid the mice; Morden says that Psi Corps wouldn't have left anything for

								Earthforce to study. The three of them search for another way out of the

								caves, going through a section that appears to have been artificially

								enlarged. Donne believes that the egg was sending out a telepathic

								attraction, which she was able to block once she became aware of it. She

								says that when Chang's group reached the egg, some of them climbed into

								openings in it, and the openings vanished. When everyone except Chang and

								Donne had gone into the egg, it reached for Chang. Donne shot him, and it

								lost interest. It didn't appear to notice her, possibly because of her

								blocking. It then changed shape and oozed away down the crevasse.


								<p>

								With twenty minutes left before the Homeguard ship reaches the B5 jumpgate,

								Ross reports that the optics are repaired. Sheridan orders Ross to engage

								manual targeting; the automatic system won't let them fire on an Earth

								ship. Sheridan transmits a warning to the Homeguard ship, which simply

								accelerates and does not acknowledge the message. Sheridan orders Ross to

								fire, but nothing happens and Ross does not respond. Then he hears Corchoran

								on the link, taunting him.


								<p>

								Donne leads Anna and Morden to a chamber below the crevasse, where they

								see what appear to be cryogenic chambers, one for each person on the Icarus,

								and the egg. As they watch, the egg lets out Razor, who is taken away,

								struggling, by three pale humanoid aliens. They hear a drill, and screams

								from Razor. Anna sees some kind of wiring attached to the face of the

								person in the nearest chamber and realizes the aliens are preparing the

								humans to become part of the biomachines. Churlstein, apparently unharmed,

								comes upon them and tries to take the PPGs away. Donne is immobilized by a

								telepathic attack.


								<p>

								Sheridan orders all blast doors closed and the outer parts of the Agamemnon

								evacuated. There is a struggle in the weapons bay, but Ross is able to

								fire on the Homeguard ship's engines. The explosives are touched off, and

								the Homeguard ship is destroyed. The Agamemnon suffers some damage, but no

								casualties. As a reward for a job well done, Lochschmanan assigns the

								Agamemnon to be part of the honor guard at the dedication of Babylon 5.


								<p>

								Churlstein says that he is now an emissary from the resident aliens, who

								are willing to share all their technology if their existence is kept secret.

								Anyone who serves them willingly will be rewarded with their greatest

								desires; anyone else will be forced to serve unwillingly. New, spidery

								aliens begin to materialize all around. Donne shoots Churlstein, then the

								roof of the passage, creating a rockfall that buries Anna and Morden up to

								their shoulders and kills Donne and the humanoids. The spidery aliens

								continue to surround them. Anna and Morden try to set off one of the mice

								to destroy them. As the mouse awakes, through a telepathic link, they

								see an image of Morden's wife and daughter caught in a hyperspace vortex,

								still alive and in pain. Morden breaks contact and tells the aliens he

								will help them, if they can end his family's suffering. Anna is left to

								become a part of the machine.


								<p>

								Above the planet, Kosh sees the Icarus take off, empty. It broadcasts a

								distress signal and then explodes. At Babylon 5, the dedication ceremony

								goes smoothly, except for Kosh not being able to be present. At the end

								of the ceremony, Sheridan gets a call from Lochschmanan, telling him

								about the loss of the Icarus. Anna has been installed in a Shadow ship.


								<H2><A NAME="UQ">Unanswered Questions</A></H2>

								<ul>


								<li>

								Homeguard must have massive resources to be able to destroy a jumpgate,

								purchase enough explosives from the Narn to destroy a 5-mile-long space

								station, and get a ship big enough to hold those explosives. Where is

								that support coming from?


								<li>

								Was the mouse found on Theta Omega 2 meant to be used against J/Lai

								telepaths?


								<li>

								Is the egg's attractive signal related to the Eye?


								<li>

								Morden mentioned having worked with IPX twice before. One time was when the

								Shadow ship was found on Mars; what was the other?


								<li>

								How was Morden able to erase the probe's logs?


								</ul>


								<H2><A NAME="AN">Analysis</A></H2>

								<ul>


								<li>

								The crew of the Icarus seen in the underground chamber was undergoing the

								same procedure used on the telepaths in

								<a href="/lurk/guide/058.html">"Ship of Tears."</a>


								<li>

								The image of the Icarus's crew entering the cave that Kosh shows Sheridan in

								<a href="/lurk/guide/038.html">"In the Shadow of Z'ha'dum"</a>

								may be genuine, since Kosh had presumably arrived at Z'ha'dum by then.


								<li>

								Kosh could also have sent the destruct signal that Lyta later sent in

								<a href="/lurk/guide/073.html">"Epiphanies,"</a>

								but as Sheridan pointed out in

								<a href="/lurk/guide/072.html">"Into the Fire,"</a>

								if the Shadows were simply destroyed, they would never know that the Vorlons

								were right.


								</ul>


								<H2><A NAME="NO">Notes</A></H2>

								<ul>


								<li>

								Sheridan's previous command was the Galatea, a heavy cruiser.


								<li>

								The snow globe Delenn dropped at the end of

								<a href="/lurk/guide/065.html">"Shadow Dancing"</a>

								was a souvenir

								from John and Anna's honeymoon.


								<li>

								John and Anna Sheridan were married on December 3, 2249.


								<li>

								The Battle of the Line involved over 20,000 Terran ships; 200 survived.


								<li>

								The Vorlons discovered that the Shadows were awakening in late 2253 or

								early 2254.


								<li>

								Both the egg on Z'ha'dum and Kosh's ship sing to their inhabitants.


								</ul>


								<h2><a name="JS">The Author Speaks</h2>

								<ul>


								<li>

								So, Allen Wilkins asked about my scheduled bookstore appearances, where

								I'll be reading from the book and answering questions.  Here's my schedule:


								<p>

								March 15, 3-5pm, Pandemonium Books & Games, Cambridge, MA<br>

								March 29, 3-5pm, Space-Crime Continuum, Northampton, MA<br>

								April 5, 1-3pm, Books & More, Marlborough, NH<br>

								April 12, 2-4pm, Enchantments, Lexington, MA<br>

								April 20, 2-4pm, Mystery Trek, Brattleboro, VT<br>

								April 24, 7:30-8:30pm, Water Street Bookstore, Exeter, NH


								<p>

								If you plan on going to the Pandemonium appearance, or if you plan to run

								to your bookstore on March 11 to buy the book, BEWARE:  Dell has just

								informed me that all Bantam Doubleday Dell books for April (release date

								3/11) may be a week or more late in reaching the stores.  They have

								switched to a new production procedure, and this has thrown everything

								off.  I don't think this has ever happened in the history of BDD--release

								dates on books are very important.  So you may want to wait until the end

								of March or call your bookstore first.


								<p>

								Jay Denebeim and Bob P. both asked how messages could be addressed to

								me.  Since my name is often misspelled, I think it would be easiest to

								put in the subject line, "ATTN:  JC."  I will look for messages with that

								designation.


								<p>

								Eschel Hamel asked several questions about the book:<br>

								WHAT WAS THE APPROVAL PROCESS LIKE TO GET YOUR NOVEL OUT?<br>

								WHAT KIND OF RESEARCH DID YOU DO BEFORE AND WHILE WRITING IT?<br>

								WHAT DIRT CAN YOU GIVE US ON JOE?


								<p>

								Here's what happened, as well as I can remember without digging through

								my records.  I wrote a synopsis of THE SHADOW WITHIN (actually called THE

								SHADOW AWAKES back then) around 11/95.  It was about 15-20 double-spaced

								pages.  I submitted it to Jacquie Miller, the in-house editor of the

								books at Dell.  She read it, liked it, and sent it on to JMS.  She

								reported back to me that JMS also liked it, but that he had

								already decided on authors for the current three B5 books under

								contract.  She also relayed several comments he'd made about my synopsis,

								areas where I had diverged from his view of the story of the ICARUS.  (I

								had just made the whole thing up, based on the little information we had

								from the series at that point.  So it was actually pretty amazing that

								only a few points troubled him.)  So my outline was held over to be

								considered when the next three books were being developed.


								<p>

								In 8/96 Jacquie contacted me and said JMS had approved my synopsis for

								the next batch of books.  Dell wanted a complete manuscript in 5 weeks.

								I was actually homeless when this occurred.  My husband and I had moved

								out of our rental home and our new house, which was still being built,

								wasn't going to be ready for three more weeks.  We were living at Motel

								6.  The idea of writing a novel in 5 weeks was terrifying enough; but the

								idea of writing it when my computer and my notes were all in boxes and I

								hadn't even thought about the synopsis in 9 months sounded like too much

								even to dream of.  I negotiated up to 8 weeks, and we made a deal.

								Jacquie returned my original synopsis to me with some comments on it from

								JMS.  He'd made maybe about ten notes on it, all fairly minor, a number

								of them filling in blanks I'd left (e.g., Sinclair calls Senator _____),

								others giving me a little information or pointing out something.  (I'll

								try to dig this up so I can tell you some of his notes.)  He also changed

								the title to THE SHADOW WITHIN, for reasons that became obvious to me as

								I did my B5 research into Shadow references.


								<p>

								At that point I started trying to recreate what the HECK I had been

								thinking when I'd written this nine months ago.  I decided the only way I

								could be sure to have a finished manuscript in time was to write a

								detailed scene-by-scene outline that would tell me everything that had to

								happen in every scene, so there would be no surprises and no omissions.

								As I worked on that, I realized I still had a lot of questions about the

								arc and various aspects of the show that I needed answered to write a

								book consistent with these things.  I also heard a rumor around this time

								that an upcoming episode was going to feature Anna Sheridan, and that she

								was going to be played by Melissa Gilbert!  I pretty much flipped out at

								that point, since no one had told me, and here I was working on a novel

								with time ticking away.  I asked Jacquie at Dell to get a copy of this

								script for me.  She asked Warner Brothers.  There were delays.  I finally

								sent a panicked fax to JMS, swearing myself to secrecy if only he would

								send the script.  It came by overnight mail.  That helped a lot.  But I

								still had a number of unanswered questions.  I asked Jacquie if I could

								talk to JMS.  She asked, and he agreed.  (I believe I'm the first author

								to be able to ask JMS questions directly.  I think one other author may

								have asked a few questions through e-mail.)  We had a conference call

								that lasted maybe an hour, basically where I asked questions and he

								answered.  Most of my questions were of the variety of "Is it okay if I

								do this?"  And most of the time he said yes.  A few times he gave me a

								little information, explaining why something is or isn't true, but JMS

								plays these things pretty close to the vest.  I felt very lucky, though,

								that I had this opportunity, because it allowed me to get the doubt out

								of my mind that something or other was wrong and proceed.  It also

								corrected a few things that wouldn't have been consistent with the arc.

								(I'll see if I can dig out my notes on this phone conversation too, if

								you're interested.)  My biggest problem coming out of this phone call was

								with Morden.  I had asked JMS, "What is Morden's first name?  Or can I

								just make one up?"  JMS replied that he'd never given Morden a first

								name.  He'd always thought of the character simply as Morden, and wasn't

								really comfortable with the idea of giving him a first name.  This was

								tough for me, since Morden plays a large part in the book and he becomes

								fairly good friends with Anna.  So I had to find a way around it, which

								you'll see in the book.


								<p>

								After that, I did a lot more research.  Lots of B5 research--watching

								videotapes repeatedly (many key episodes provided by Phil Farrand, the

								author of THE NITPICKER'S GUIDES to Star Trek, of which I edited the

								first two), referring to THE A-Z OF BABYLON 5 (I got a British edition

								from Dell), the Lurker's Guide (and the Lurker himself, Steven Grimm, who

								would answer my questions at any time of day), and calling other B5

								experts, like Michael A. Burstein and Nomi Burstein.  I'd have lists of

								questions, such as how many guns does the Agamemnon have, where, and what

								kind are they?  (John Sheridan is in command of the Agamemnon during the

								book.)


								<p>

								I also did as much research as time would allow on other topics.  I read

								sections of about eight archaeology books, spoke to a UNH professor of

								archaeology, the New Hampshire State Geologist told me all about caves

								(important in this book), and an old friend from the Cornell astronomy

								program served as an expert on lasers.  I also had numerous people read

								the book and offer feedback on it.  Two were members of the military who

								read for accurate military procedures and conduct.


								<p>

								I don't really have any "dirt" on Joe (and that is what people call him,

								though I've stuck to the conventional JMS here).  I've told you some of

								my experiences with him above, and perhaps can come up with some more if

								asked.  I think the way he worked with me on the book was just right, in

								that he guided me so that my book would fit into the B5 universe as a

								whole, but he gave me a lot of freedom to create the vision I had and

								write the story I wanted.  For example, when we were talking on the phone

								he mentioned that he'd always imagined Morden to be a low-level

								technician on the Icarus, who was jealous of Anna's education and success

								(or something to that effect).  This is significantly different than what

								I had in my synopsis.  But he never asked me to change Morden from the

								way I'd envisioned him.


								<p>

								<li>

								Rodent asked if I have watched B5 in its entirety.


								<p>

								As the freelance editor of the novels, it's kind of neat that watching

								B5 is something I must do for my job.  If only all jobs had such fun

								requirements.  That said, I can't swear I haven't missed any episodes.

								It took me a while to get used to the new episode/repeat schedule, which

								I deeply dislike.  A few times I've missed episodes.  I don't have any

								special access to a bank of videotapes or anything.  I try to catch the

								episodes I miss when they are rerun.  But I think a few may have

								slipped through the cracks.  I'm still waiting for one of the season

								4 episodes to be rerun that I missed earlier.  I'm not sure of the

								name of it, but we learned something major about the Vorlons in it.

								I have to admit that I'm not a trivia expert.  I love the show for

								its wonderful stories and characters, for its overall feel and

								themes, for its complex concepts.  I'm not one to memorize the name

								of every ship that appears on every episode.  That said, if I need

								to know a piece of trivia (and I needed to know a lot of it to write

								THE SHADOW WITHIN, hitting stores next week), I know who to call to

								find out (and I don't mean JMS, since he is too busy to deal with

								this stuff.  I have a network of B5 fans I call on to find the

								answers to continuity questions regarding the novels, and they

								usually know--or can find out--the answers).  I tape the episodes, but I

								do miss some, and I'm very bad about labelling things, so again, when I

								need to see an episode (several episodes were key to the writing of my

								novel), if I couldn't find it in my collection I called people to send me

								copies.  They were very nice about it.


								<p>

								Rodent's next question was whether I had any quick comments on the 5-year

								story arc.


								<p>

								Really, my only comment is my personal reaction.  When I first heard

								about the arc, around the time the pilot aired, I became extremely

								excited.  It seemed as if this was an incredible development in sf

								television, one that allowed a series to be more like a great epic

								novel.  This is part of what fueled my love for the show and part of what

								motivated me to start the line of B5 novels at Dell Publishing.  As I

								watch B5, each year it seems to get better and better.  As the arc

								progresses and our understanding of events deepens (as it only could with

								an arc), the show seems to become more meaningful and enjoyable.  I was a

								bit disappointed with the quick end to the Shadow War, but other than

								that I felt the arc has more than lived up to its promise.


								<p>

								Rodent's third question was whether I had worked with JMS before.


								<p>

								My relationship with JMS began around the time the pilot aired.  I was

								then a senior editor at Dell Publishing.  I saw the pilot and felt

								something exciting was starting.  I called Warner Brothers, asked for

								JMS, and told him Dell was interested in doing a line of B5 novels.

								We've had a number of phone conversations and discussions since then, and

								I perhaps can tell you a little about those, but I can't claim to be a

								close friend or anything like that.  When I left Dell in 1994 to escape

								NYC and become a freelance editor/teacher/writer, Dell asked me to

								continue editing the B5 novels as a freelancer, so my relationship with

								JMS continued, though we had little direct contact.  Working on this

								novel, asking him questions about what I could do, was my most extended

								contact with him.


								<p>

								Rodent asked, "How much did JMS 'get in the way' of your writing THE

								SHADOW WITHIN?"


								<p>

								As discussed earlier, JMS didn't really "get in the way" at all.  He

								mainly okayed ideas I had for the book and pointed out minor areas where

								I wasn't consistent with the show.  Really only two significant points

								were changed from the outline due to his feedback.  First, I wanted to

								work the nuking of San Diego into the book, having it occur around 2255.

								JMS said no, this occurred 40 years ago.  Interesting.  It slightly

								inconvenienced me, but it was easy enough to think of another

								catastrophe.  The other point was that I wanted Dr. Chang to arrive at

								Z'ha'dum in one ship, and then have Anna Sheridan come in another,

								follow-up ship.  JMS said they all came in one ship.  This again was only

								a minor inconvenience, and I agreed that he was right to make me stick to

								one ship.


								<p>

								Really the thing that gave me the most trouble was when I asked JMS what

								Morden's first name was.  JMS said that he'd never given Morden a first

								name and that he wasn't really comfortable with the idea of giving one.

								He'd always thought of Morden as just Morden.  This ticked me off for a

								while, since I figured Morden had to have a first name, and how was I

								going to present him in informal, social scenes without his first name?

								I finally thought of a solution to the problem, as you'll see in the book.


								<p>

								JMS did also change the title of the book.  I had called it THE SHADOW

								AWAKES.  He changed it to THE SHADOW WITHIN.  After I got heavily into

								research with my trivia experts, I realized why he had done this.


								<p>

								<li>

								I'm responding to the debate over how to check for scientific accuracy in

								an sf novel.  The best way to check most of these things is to speak to

								an expert.  Asking people on the net or sf readers is not a reliable

								method.  Someone will always think they know the answer when they don't.

								In writing THE SHADOW WITHIN, I consulted archaeology, geology, and laser

								experts, among others.  Hopefully this has prevented any glaring

								scientific errors from getting into the book.


								<p>

								I'm sure I'll get flamed again for this, but I have to say that when I

								edit a B5 novel (through the rushed process I described in another post),

								spotting scientific inaccuracies is very far down my list of concerns.

								In my opinion, B5 is not a scientifically accurate show.  And I don't

								think that being scientifically accurate is one of the show's main

								concerns.  It is a story about people (and aliens), about how we get

								along with each other and what it all means.  I'm much more concerned

								with the issues that are most important to B5.


								<p>

								<li>

								As I've said before, I wish I had had

								more time to do a better job with all the B5 novels.  I did the best I

								could, and contrary to popular belief, I am good at my job, according to

								publishers, editors, agents, authors, and readers of sf and other

								genres.  And according to the people who gave me the World Fantasy

								Award.  And according to JMS.


								<p>

								I certainly wish that all errors, inconsistencies, weak spots, etc. had

								been fixed and the books made perfect before they were published, but

								there simply wasn't time.  Doing a job that takes a minimum of 4 months

								with regular books in 3 days just doesn't allow for much.


								<p>

								The truth is some scientific errors didn't get removed from books I

								edited.  I'm human.  Amazing!  I think we could have more constructive

								discussion here.


								<p>

								On the topic of educating sf writers in science, I had an interesting

								experience with my Odyssey class.  I run Odyssey, a six-week summer

								writing workshop for writers of fantasy, science fiction, and horror.

								The first week I had Hal Clement come in to talk about creating a

								scientifically realistic setting.  He talked about the various concerns

								when creating a planet for a story, and how the setting could actually

								inspire the story and control the plot.  He knows his stuff backwards and

								forwards, and the session was fascinating.  But after he left, many of my

								students came up to me and said, "I loved Hal Clement.  He really knows

								his stuff.  But I had no idea what he was talking about after the first

								half hour."


								<p>

								Many people interested in writing sf don't have a very strong knowledge

								of science, and this is a problem.  But there are books on how to create

								realistic sf settings as well as many other resources, as Neil points

								out.  This is the gruntwork (or the fun work, as your mindset goes) that

								sf writers (and ALL writers, for that matter) have to do.


								<p>

								ON THE TOPIC OF THE NOVEL...


								<p>

								I found my notes from my phone conversation with JMS, which I thought

								might interest you.  This conversation occurred while I was fleshing out

								the synopsis JMS had approved into a detailed, scene-by-scene outline.

								Mainly JMS okayed various things I wanted to have in the book, but he

								also gave out a little information.  He told me that IPX headquarters

								were in Geneva, that Anna was a freelancer for IPX, and that he didn't

								want Morden to have a first name.


								<p>

								I think I may have caught JMS on one point:

								I asked him why, in the footage of the scientists from the Icarus finding

								the Shadows on Z'ha'dum, the scientists were wearing EVA suits.  While in

								the episode Z'ha'dum, Sheridan and Anna only needed to wear breathers

								(this episode had not yet aired, but JMS had sent me the script and it

								specified breathers).  There was a long pause at the other end of the

								line.  Finally, in a halting way, JMS said something like this:

								"Well...when the Icarus went there...they didn't know a lot about the

								planet...they weren't sure...if there were hazards....  You can say...it

								was standard procedure...for a new planet.  That's it.  Call it standard

								first contact protocol."  His voice gradually picked up speed as he went,

								figuring his way out of the problem.  That was kind of fun.


								<p>

								<li>

								<em>Why were the B5 regulars included in the story?</em><br>

								I chose to include those other characters, for several reasons.  First, JMS

								had said at one point in history that a B5 novel should not be about a minor

								character (this was a general comment, not about my book).  I agreed with

								that idea.  It would limit the number of readers who could enjoy the

								book, and lose the flavor of the series.  Second, it seemed I had to

								bring John in to some extent, and it seemed like a copout to say he was

								busy and not explain why.  Third, I wanted a sense of history in the

								making, of Anna's fate being tied to larger events in the universe, and

								of the impact of the past on the future.   Bringing in John, Sinclair,

								Delenn, and Kosh did that, I thought.


								<p>

								<em>Were the two storylines written at the same time?</em><br>

								I wrote them one at a time.


								<p>

								<em>In "In the Shadow of Z'ha'dum," Delenn said she asked Kosh whether

								the Shadows had returned to Z'ha'dum, and he said yes.  Why are the Shadows

								there already?</em><br>

								This confused me also, which is why I had originally titled the book THE

								SHADOW AWAKES.  When JMS changed the title, at the synopsis stage, I

								started looking into the issues you raise.  They led me to believe that

								the Shadows were awake before Anna arrived (there's their attempted

								destruction of B4 also).  It seems as if some of them have been there a

								while when Anna arrives.  More could definitely have come from

								*somewhere* at some point.  When Delenn asks that question, they could

								already have been occupying Z'ha'dum for a while.  I don't believe they

								were in hibernation.


								<p>

								<li>

								<em>Why did Morden speculate that the Shadow vessel that excavated the

								buried ship on Mars might have been on automatic?</em><br>

								It was because they were guessing that Alpha Omega 3 was uninhabited,

								from data sent by the probe.  I don't know if the ship was on automatic

								or not. . .


								<p>

								<li>

								<em>Do Shadows fly their own ships?</em><br>

								I don't know.  I kind of thought that at least one Shadow was aboard

								every Shadow vessel.  I didn't think of the telepaths as pilots, but as

								part of the ship.


								<P>

								<li>

								I'd like to respond to just a few points.  Gharlane mentioned that the

								plot of my novel could not be praised since it was "prescribed in a

								provided outline."  This is inaccurate.  I had no outline.  Nothing was

								provided.  All I knew was how Anna's story had to end.  I don't believe

								that's an outline.


								<p>

								The RNA thing came from a biology professor.  I wondered why he didn't

								mention DNA, but I figured he had his reasons.


								<p>

								The question of why I used first names for three characters and last

								names for others is simply answered.  Point of view.  I used first names

								for the point of view characters (Anna Sheridan, John Sheridan, and

								Jeffrey Sinclair) to help the reader feel closer to them, and last names

								for everyone else.  Another reason for this was to differentiate between

								Anna Sheridan and John Sheridan.  If I'd called them both Sheridan, that

								would have been a bit confusing.  One person who read an early draft

								didn't understand why I didn't called John Sheridan "Sheridan" and Anna

								Sheridan "Anna."  To him, this seemed the obvious way this issue should

								be handled.  This, unfortunately, has been the standard for a long time.

								The man is known by his last name while the woman is known by her first.

								I found this totally inappropriate.  Anna and John are equals, and should

								be dealt with on an equal level.  This left me with first names, which I

								felt gave a nice feeling of intimacy to the story and made both Anna and

								John seem more like real people.


								</ul>


								<h2>JMS Speaks</h2>

								<ul>


								   <li> The first book is by Jeanne Cavellos, following Anna Sheridan and the

									Icarus to Z'ha'dum; the second follows Vir and Londo to Centauri Prime

									at the time of the events in these first six [season-four] episodes; and

									the third follows Sinclair to Minbar after leaving B5 and setting up the

									rangers.  This time out, I decided to assign out the stories, to make

									sure they were accurate and in continuity.  The first one up may be the

									best to date, I'm 2/3rds through it and haven't made a note yet.


								   <li> The other books...in broad strokes, I accept they happened, but

									in the details, and how they're treated, and some incidentals...they

									haven't hit all the right cylinders.  This time, with this batch, I got

									more directly involved and I think they're definitely improved...though

									the Cavelos novel had the least need for input, since she *really* knew

									the show.


								   <li> The story of the Icarus as presented in this book is considered

									canon.


								</ul>