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<p>
<strong>Written by Jeanne Cavelos</strong><br>
Release date: April 1997<br>
ISBN: 0-440-22348-2 (US)<br>
ISBN: 0-7522-2339-9 (UK)

<br clear>

<blockquote><cite>
Anna Sheridan receives an assignment to study the ruins on Z'ha'dum.  John
Sheridan takes command of the Agamemnon.  Babylon 5 goes online and sees
the arrival of its first residents.
</cite>
</blockquote>

<p>
Reader reviews, and online ordering, can be found at
<a href="http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0440223482/thelurkersguidet">Amazon.com</a>.

<p>
<hr>

<h2><a name="BC">Back Cover</a></h2>

<h3 align=center>The Darkening Light</h3>

<p>
Anna Sheridan has two passions-- her husband, John, and the mystery
surrounding some intriguing artifacts found during a mission on a
distant planet called Z'Ha'dum. Now she gets orders to become the
science officer on the follow-up mission scheduled for the spaceship
Icarus. Happy, young, beloved, and brilliant, never has a woman had
so much to live for. Or so much to lose.

<h3 align=center>The Shadow Within</h3>

<p>
While John, recently promoted to the rank of captain, struggles with
his new command on the Agamemnon, Anna begins to assemble her science
crew... and makes her first mistake. She signs on Dr. Morden, a highly
credentialed translator whose heart hides a weakness that can cost
Anna her life... or her soul. Her second mistake is to underestimate
the danger on Z'ha'dum. What is awaiting the Icarus near the rim of
known space is an unimaginable horror. What is awaiting Anna Sheridan
is an explosive destiny... and a dark future that can crush her husband's
dreams and a terror that can come back to haunt us all.

<H2><A NAME="SY">Synopsis</A></H2>

<p>
The book begins with Anna Sheridan studying an artifact found on an
Interplanetary Expeditions (IPX) dig at Theta Omega 2, a planet once
inhabited by the J/Lai, an offshoot of the Brakiri. It appears to be
a biomechanical device, halfway between machine and living organism. As
she studies it, she briefly makes contact with a quasi-consciousness in
the artifact. She tells Dr. Chang, the head the expedition, but is unable
to duplicate the effect for him.

<p>
They hire Terence Hilliard, a commercial telepath, to make contact with the
artifact. As soon as he tries, the artifact activates, overheats and
explodes. Hilliard is seriously injured, and falls into a trance-like state,
repeating over and over again, "I am the machine." Anna and Churlstein,
another IPX scientist, take Hilliard to Geneva City Hospital. As he is being
tended to, they are approached by Donne, a Psi Corps representative looking
into the incident. Donne insists on speaking to Anna privately; Anna tells
Churlstein to go back to the lab and make sure nothing is touched before
she returns.

<p>
Donne takes Anna to Hilliard's bedside. His physical injuries are
superficial, but his brain is locked into a rigid, cyclical pattern. Donne
says that Hilliard will be moved to a Psi Corps facility and dismisses the
doctor, then questions Anna about the incident. Donne indicates that nothing
can be done for Hilliard.

<p>
Back at the lab, the remains of the explosion have been cleaned up and all
of Anna's reports and test results are gone. Dr. Chang tells her he has been
ordered to take over the testing of the remains of the J/Lai "mouse" and
related artifacts. He allows her to take her computer, with her notes in it
intact, and a fragment of the mouse. Anna has dinner with Liz Sheridan, her
sister-in-law, before leaving for Station Prime, where she and her husband
are planning to celebrate their anniversary.

<p>
Meanwhile, John Sheridan has been in command of the Agamemnon for one
month, and is struggling with a badly disciplined crew. He chews out Lt.
Spano, a weapons officer, for not following regulations. Corchoran, the
first officer, tells him they will be inspected when they arrive at Station
Prime. Later, Corchoran suggests that the crew is envious of Sheridan's war
record; the previous commander of the Agamemnon, Capt. Best, humiliated
them by retreating at the Battle of the Line.

<p>
At Station Prime, orbiting Centauri Prime, Anna checks into the honeymoon
suite of the Imperial Hotel. John calls her there to tell her he'll be
delayed by the inspection. Then Chang calls, saying that an IPX probe
has discovered the remains of a new, unknown civilization on Alpha Omega
3. An RNA scan of microorganisms there indicates they are related to the
"mouse" from Theta Omega 2. Chang asks her to be on an expedition there,
which begins in 10 days. Anna is surprised by the short preparation time
but agrees to go.

<p>
General Lochschmanan's inspection of the Agamemnon goes well until the
weapons bay, where the optical system has been left on line, creating a
danger that the ship's laser cannons could fire if there were an explosion
or fire on board. The Agamemnon fails the inspection, and Lochschmanan
orders Sheridan to get the crew into shape as soon as possible. Sheridan
cancels leave and institutes a heavy schedule of drills. The ship is also
being outfitted with a new stealth technology.

<p>
John calls Anna and tells her that he won't be able to make it; Anna does
not tell him about the new expedition. She checks the roster for the
expedition and sees two non-IPX personnel listed on the archaeological
team: Donne, and a Dr. Morden, an Earthforce linguist who six months
previously took leave of his job and moved to Station Prime. Anna becomes
suspicious of Morden's credentials and visits him. He works for an Earthforce
division called New Technologies, and claims to have been called up by his
superiors and added to the mission out of the blue. She notices an Anfran
love stone in his collection of artifacts, and learns that it was given
to him by his wife. He moved to Station Prime after his wife and daughter
were killed in a terrorist attack on the Io jumpgate. Anna resolves to try
and help Morden get on with his life.

<p>
Spano arrives late for a drill and Sheridan confines him to quarters. After
the drill, Sheridan speaks angrily with Ross, the weapons chief, who is
about to punch him when Lochschmanan arrives. Corchoran routes in a call
from Anna. John speaks to her hurriedly, learning about the expedition, and
returns to speak to Lochschmanan.

<p>
At the IPX mission briefing, Chang introduces the members of the
archaeological team, then shows them pictures of the planet, including a
series of inscribed pillars and an egg-shaped biomechanical structure which
has biological similarities to the "mouse". Afterward, Anna learns that
Donne and Morden have a deep distrust of each others' organizations.
On the Agamemnon, John Sheridan gives Ross, Spano, and Watley, another
weapons officer, a choice between transferring off the ship or being
court-martialed if they continue to perform poorly.

<p>
As the Icarus leaves Station Prime, Donne asks Anna to try to make contact
with a fragment of the mouse. She does so, experiencing an impression that
it is still partly alive. Morden shares some preliminary translations with
Chang and Anna: the pillars appear to say, "every light casts a shadow," and
the largest inscription on the egg is "what is desired" or "all that is
desired."

<p>
John Sheridan is woken up by a message from Lochschmanan. Homeguard, the
group responsible for the Io jumpgate attack, is planning to blow up
Babylon 5 during its dedication ceremonies with nuclear devices obtained
from the Narn. The Agamemnon is ordered to intercept the Homeguard ship
carrying the bombs.

<p>
Twenty days from Alpha Omega 3, Anna uses the IPX probe's remote control
to explore a cave near the planned landing site, and finds two artifacts
similar to the "mouse". Meanwhile, the Agamemnon stages a mock battle
against the Hyperion. The Hyperion takes out the Agamemnon's targeting
system. When Sheridan orders the weapons officers to fire manually, Ross
does not fire, and the Hyperion goes on to "destroy" the Agamemnon.

<p>
Sheridan orders Ross arrested. He goes to Ross's quarters to see him
detained, and finds him drunk and threatening to shoot himself. Ross tells
Sheridan about his experience at the Battle of the Line. The Athena, Capt.
Best's previous command, where Ross was serving, had its automatic targeting
system knocked out. He fired at a fighter that appeared to be trying to ram
them, and realized a moment too late that it was one of their Starfuries,
trying to make an emergency landing. The resulting explosion disabled the
Athena and killed 35 crewmembers. Sheridan takes the PPG away from Ross and
gives him another chance.

<p>
The next day, Anna discovers that the IPX orbiter at Alpha Omega 3 has lost
contact with the surface probe. The orbiter's log indicates that Chang was
controlling the probe at the time. The probe logs have been erased back to
when he used the probe the previous day. Anna tells Chang about this, and
he orders her to give no indication that malfunction could have been anything
but an accident. He also gives her a PPG, telling her he has another for
his own defense.

<p>
Anna attempts to send a message to John on New Year's Eve, but the
communications system is unable to send it. Hidalgo, the captain of the
Icarus, tells her that the comm system just malfunctioned. Anna attempts to
remove her message from the outgoing queue, and discovers Chang has also just
tried to send a message, to Galovich, the mission's supervisor on Earth. She
copies the message and views it. Chang is reporting that Donne and Hidalgo
are planning to smuggle artifacts to Earth for Psi Corps to study. He also
refers to the Shadow ship found on Mars, and a hypothesis of Morden's, that
it returned on automatic.

<p>
Anna returns to the ship's New Year's party and tells Morden she has a
present for him. They leave the party and she gives him the Anfran love
stone, which she had taken from his quarters the day before and had put on
a necklace. Morden is shocked that he went an entire day without noticing
it was gone, and puts the necklace on to assure that he will never forget
it. Anna asks him what he knows about Mars. He tells her about the Shadow
ship discovered by IPX. When the ship was excavated and first exposed to
sunlight, it transmitted a message. Morden was on a team from Earthforce
New Technologies sent to study the ship at IPX's request. Anna tells him
what she knows about the probe problems, and the smuggling arrangement
between Donne and Hidalgo.

<p>
As B5's dedication ceremony approaches, the Agamemnon passes an inspection
and is dispatched to intercept the Homeguard ship. Kosh Naranek contacts
Delenn and tells her that a human expedition is going to Z'ha'dum, and it
must be stopped. He directs his own ship toward Z'ha'dum, expecting to
arrive just before the Icarus.

<p>
After planetfall on Alpha Omega 3, half the archaeological team, including
Chang and Donne, go to investigate the egg, while Anna, Morden, and the
others head for the cave where she found the mice. Morden has refined the
translation of the pillar inscriptions to "Every light carries a shadow."
Arriving at the cave, they find that the mice are gone and the hole they
were removed from has been partially filled in. Anna, Morden, and Dr.
Favorito explore deeper in the cave, and find a corpse that appears to be
a biological creature inside a biomechanical one. As far back in the cave
as they can go, they find a black sphere blocking a passageway. Anna tries
to take a sample of it, but find her hand passing inside it, and then feels
something waking up inside it. She jumps back and runs away, pulling the
others along with her.

<p>
Delenn, on authorization from the Grey Council, contacts Sinclair at Babylon
5 and tells him the expedition is in danger and must be recalled.

<p>
Anna, Morden, and Favorito emerge from the cave into a sudden storm. They
and their support crew head for the egg to rejoin Chang's group, but the egg
and the entire group have vanished. A scan shows one link nearby; heading
for it, they find Chang, who has been shot. Anna gives Chang's PPG to Morden.
The two of them find a crevasse underneath where the egg had been, but it
is too small for the egg to have gone through it.

<p>
At Babylon 5, Sinclair has contacted Senator Hidoshi about the expedition
and been referred to President Santiago's science adviser, Dr. LeBlanc.
LeBlanc is unaware of any expedition near the rim, but promises to check
on it. The Agamemnon observes the transfer of explosives from the Narns to
the Homeguard ship. Just before it comes out of hiding, Ross reports that the
weapons system is nonfunctional. A component has been removed from the
optics system.

<p>
On the Icarus, Hidalgo announces that communications have been restored.
Anna has taken charge of the archaeological team, and splits them up for a
search of landing area. She gives her PPG to Dr. Razor, who is on the
team that includes Hidalgo, and tells him about Hidalgo's plans for
smuggling artifacts. She sends a message to Gulovich, and then searches
Donne's quarters. Inside a roll of lingerie, she finds a collection of
small body parts and a Psi Corps badge with a black square in the center.
She recalls that a patch of Chang's hair was missing, and concludes that
Donne killed Chang and took the hair for her collection.

<p>
When Anna returns to her quarters, she finds Morden waiting for her. He
already believes that Donne killed Chang. When she wonders why Psi Corps
is going to such lengths, Morden tells her that not only was Hilliard
affected by the mouse, but every telepath at or below his P-rating within
a three-mile radius was left in the same state. Psi Corps covered it up,
but Earthforce-- or at least Morden's division-- quickly figured out what
had happened.

<p>
Dr. LeBlanc calls Sinclair back and tells him the expedition will not be
recalled. She suspects that it may discover something powerful that can
be used against the Minbari. Sinclair tells Delenn the news, and she
informs him that sending any further ships to Alpha Omega 3 will be
considered an act of war against the Minbari.

<p>
Sheridan orders Corchoran to interrogate the weapons officers about the
sabotage, but Spano is missing from the mess, where they had been ordered
to wait. Spano is tracked down in the gym. He complains that he was bored.
Ross reports that the primary mirror in the optics system has been
destroyed. Spano repeatedly denies sabotaging the system, but finally
admits that he left his post during his watch to get a snack. Sheridan
charges him with insubordination, desertion of post, and dereliction of
duty, and has him confined to the brig.

<p>
Anna decides to make contact with the creature inside the sphere. She and
Morden return to where it was, but it has vanished. In the passageway
beyond, they find a generator that could have come from the IPX probe. As
they talk, Morden suddenly reaches for his PPG. Anna knocks him down as
he fires, and the blast triggers a cave-in. Donne appears and tells Anna
that Morden destroyed the probe.

<p>
Ross tells Sheridan that the optics damage is worse than he thought, and
he can't repair it on his own before the Homeguard ship reaches Babylon 5.
Sheridan grits his teeth and assigns Watley and Spano to help him. Spano,
feeling chastened, suggests that Sheridan consider people who had previously
served as weapons officers. He specifically mentions Corchoran. Sheridan
asks Corchoran for information on officers who had been weapons officers,
but Corchoran does not send it. Sheridan orders security to detain Corchoran.

<p>
Anna realizes that Morden had been aiming at Donne. Donne says that Morden
hid the mice; Morden says that Psi Corps wouldn't have left anything for
Earthforce to study. The three of them search for another way out of the
caves, going through a section that appears to have been artificially
enlarged. Donne believes that the egg was sending out a telepathic
attraction, which she was able to block once she became aware of it. She 
says that when Chang's group reached the egg, some of them climbed into
openings in it, and the openings vanished. When everyone except Chang and
Donne had gone into the egg, it reached for Chang. Donne shot him, and it
lost interest. It didn't appear to notice her, possibly because of her
blocking. It then changed shape and oozed away down the crevasse.

<p>
With twenty minutes left before the Homeguard ship reaches the B5 jumpgate,
Ross reports that the optics are repaired. Sheridan orders Ross to engage
manual targeting; the automatic system won't let them fire on an Earth
ship. Sheridan transmits a warning to the Homeguard ship, which simply
accelerates and does not acknowledge the message. Sheridan orders Ross to
fire, but nothing happens and Ross does not respond. Then he hears Corchoran
on the link, taunting him.

<p>
Donne leads Anna and Morden to a chamber below the crevasse, where they
see what appear to be cryogenic chambers, one for each person on the Icarus,
and the egg. As they watch, the egg lets out Razor, who is taken away,
struggling, by three pale humanoid aliens. They hear a drill, and screams
from Razor. Anna sees some kind of wiring attached to the face of the
person in the nearest chamber and realizes the aliens are preparing the
humans to become part of the biomachines. Churlstein, apparently unharmed,
comes upon them and tries to take the PPGs away. Donne is immobilized by a
telepathic attack.

<p>
Sheridan orders all blast doors closed and the outer parts of the Agamemnon
evacuated. There is a struggle in the weapons bay, but Ross is able to
fire on the Homeguard ship's engines. The explosives are touched off, and
the Homeguard ship is destroyed. The Agamemnon suffers some damage, but no
casualties. As a reward for a job well done, Lochschmanan assigns the
Agamemnon to be part of the honor guard at the dedication of Babylon 5.

<p>
Churlstein says that he is now an emissary from the resident aliens, who
are willing to share all their technology if their existence is kept secret.
Anyone who serves them willingly will be rewarded with their greatest
desires; anyone else will be forced to serve unwillingly. New, spidery
aliens begin to materialize all around. Donne shoots Churlstein, then the
roof of the passage, creating a rockfall that buries Anna and Morden up to
their shoulders and kills Donne and the humanoids. The spidery aliens
continue to surround them. Anna and Morden try to set off one of the mice
to destroy them. As the mouse awakes, through a telepathic link, they
see an image of Morden's wife and daughter caught in a hyperspace vortex,
still alive and in pain. Morden breaks contact and tells the aliens he
will help them, if they can end his family's suffering. Anna is left to
become a part of the machine.

<p>
Above the planet, Kosh sees the Icarus take off, empty. It broadcasts a
distress signal and then explodes. At Babylon 5, the dedication ceremony
goes smoothly, except for Kosh not being able to be present. At the end
of the ceremony, Sheridan gets a call from Lochschmanan, telling him
about the loss of the Icarus. Anna has been installed in a Shadow ship.

<H2><A NAME="UQ">Unanswered Questions</A></H2>
<ul>

<li>
Homeguard must have massive resources to be able to destroy a jumpgate,
purchase enough explosives from the Narn to destroy a 5-mile-long space
station, and get a ship big enough to hold those explosives. Where is
that support coming from?

<li>
Was the mouse found on Theta Omega 2 meant to be used against J/Lai
telepaths?

<li>
Is the egg's attractive signal related to the Eye?

<li>
Morden mentioned having worked with IPX twice before. One time was when the
Shadow ship was found on Mars; what was the other?

<li>
How was Morden able to erase the probe's logs?

</ul>

<H2><A NAME="AN">Analysis</A></H2>
<ul>

<li>
The crew of the Icarus seen in the underground chamber was undergoing the
same procedure used on the telepaths in
<a href="/lurk/guide/058.html">"Ship of Tears."</a>

<li>
The image of the Icarus's crew entering the cave that Kosh shows Sheridan in
<a href="/lurk/guide/038.html">"In the Shadow of Z'ha'dum"</a>
may be genuine, since Kosh had presumably arrived at Z'ha'dum by then.

<li>
Kosh could also have sent the destruct signal that Lyta later sent in
<a href="/lurk/guide/073.html">"Epiphanies,"</a>
but as Sheridan pointed out in
<a href="/lurk/guide/072.html">"Into the Fire,"</a>
if the Shadows were simply destroyed, they would never know that the Vorlons
were right.

</ul>

<H2><A NAME="NO">Notes</A></H2>
<ul>

<li>
Sheridan's previous command was the Galatea, a heavy cruiser.

<li>
The snow globe Delenn dropped at the end of
<a href="/lurk/guide/065.html">"Shadow Dancing"</a>
was a souvenir
from John and Anna's honeymoon.

<li>
John and Anna Sheridan were married on December 3, 2249.

<li>
The Battle of the Line involved over 20,000 Terran ships; 200 survived.

<li>
The Vorlons discovered that the Shadows were awakening in late 2253 or
early 2254.

<li>
Both the egg on Z'ha'dum and Kosh's ship sing to their inhabitants.

</ul>


<h2><a name="JS">The Author Speaks</h2>
<ul>

<li>
So, Allen Wilkins asked about my scheduled bookstore appearances, where 
I'll be reading from the book and answering questions.  Here's my schedule:

<p>
March 15, 3-5pm, Pandemonium Books & Games, Cambridge, MA<br>
March 29, 3-5pm, Space-Crime Continuum, Northampton, MA<br>
April 5, 1-3pm, Books & More, Marlborough, NH<br>
April 12, 2-4pm, Enchantments, Lexington, MA<br>
April 20, 2-4pm, Mystery Trek, Brattleboro, VT<br>
April 24, 7:30-8:30pm, Water Street Bookstore, Exeter, NH

<p>
If you plan on going to the Pandemonium appearance, or if you plan to run 
to your bookstore on March 11 to buy the book, BEWARE:  Dell has just 
informed me that all Bantam Doubleday Dell books for April (release date 
3/11) may be a week or more late in reaching the stores.  They have 
switched to a new production procedure, and this has thrown everything 
off.  I don't think this has ever happened in the history of BDD--release 
dates on books are very important.  So you may want to wait until the end 
of March or call your bookstore first.

<p>
Jay Denebeim and Bob P. both asked how messages could be addressed to 
me.  Since my name is often misspelled, I think it would be easiest to 
put in the subject line, "ATTN:  JC."  I will look for messages with that 
designation.

<p>
Eschel Hamel asked several questions about the book:<br>
WHAT WAS THE APPROVAL PROCESS LIKE TO GET YOUR NOVEL OUT?<br>
WHAT KIND OF RESEARCH DID YOU DO BEFORE AND WHILE WRITING IT?<br>
WHAT DIRT CAN YOU GIVE US ON JOE?

<p>
Here's what happened, as well as I can remember without digging through 
my records.  I wrote a synopsis of THE SHADOW WITHIN (actually called THE 
SHADOW AWAKES back then) around 11/95.  It was about 15-20 double-spaced 
pages.  I submitted it to Jacquie Miller, the in-house editor of the 
books at Dell.  She read it, liked it, and sent it on to JMS.  She 
reported back to me that JMS also liked it, but that he had 
already decided on authors for the current three B5 books under 
contract.  She also relayed several comments he'd made about my synopsis, 
areas where I had diverged from his view of the story of the ICARUS.  (I 
had just made the whole thing up, based on the little information we had 
from the series at that point.  So it was actually pretty amazing that 
only a few points troubled him.)  So my outline was held over to be 
considered when the next three books were being developed.

<p>
In 8/96 Jacquie contacted me and said JMS had approved my synopsis for 
the next batch of books.  Dell wanted a complete manuscript in 5 weeks.  
I was actually homeless when this occurred.  My husband and I had moved 
out of our rental home and our new house, which was still being built, 
wasn't going to be ready for three more weeks.  We were living at Motel 
6.  The idea of writing a novel in 5 weeks was terrifying enough; but the 
idea of writing it when my computer and my notes were all in boxes and I 
hadn't even thought about the synopsis in 9 months sounded like too much 
even to dream of.  I negotiated up to 8 weeks, and we made a deal.  
Jacquie returned my original synopsis to me with some comments on it from 
JMS.  He'd made maybe about ten notes on it, all fairly minor, a number 
of them filling in blanks I'd left (e.g., Sinclair calls Senator _____), 
others giving me a little information or pointing out something.  (I'll 
try to dig this up so I can tell you some of his notes.)  He also changed 
the title to THE SHADOW WITHIN, for reasons that became obvious to me as 
I did my B5 research into Shadow references. 

<p>
At that point I started trying to recreate what the HECK I had been 
thinking when I'd written this nine months ago.  I decided the only way I 
could be sure to have a finished manuscript in time was to write a 
detailed scene-by-scene outline that would tell me everything that had to 
happen in every scene, so there would be no surprises and no omissions.  
As I worked on that, I realized I still had a lot of questions about the 
arc and various aspects of the show that I needed answered to write a 
book consistent with these things.  I also heard a rumor around this time 
that an upcoming episode was going to feature Anna Sheridan, and that she 
was going to be played by Melissa Gilbert!  I pretty much flipped out at 
that point, since no one had told me, and here I was working on a novel 
with time ticking away.  I asked Jacquie at Dell to get a copy of this 
script for me.  She asked Warner Brothers.  There were delays.  I finally 
sent a panicked fax to JMS, swearing myself to secrecy if only he would 
send the script.  It came by overnight mail.  That helped a lot.  But I 
still had a number of unanswered questions.  I asked Jacquie if I could 
talk to JMS.  She asked, and he agreed.  (I believe I'm the first author 
to be able to ask JMS questions directly.  I think one other author may 
have asked a few questions through e-mail.)  We had a conference call 
that lasted maybe an hour, basically where I asked questions and he 
answered.  Most of my questions were of the variety of "Is it okay if I 
do this?"  And most of the time he said yes.  A few times he gave me a 
little information, explaining why something is or isn't true, but JMS 
plays these things pretty close to the vest.  I felt very lucky, though, 
that I had this opportunity, because it allowed me to get the doubt out 
of my mind that something or other was wrong and proceed.  It also 
corrected a few things that wouldn't have been consistent with the arc.  
(I'll see if I can dig out my notes on this phone conversation too, if 
you're interested.)  My biggest problem coming out of this phone call was 
with Morden.  I had asked JMS, "What is Morden's first name?  Or can I 
just make one up?"  JMS replied that he'd never given Morden a first 
name.  He'd always thought of the character simply as Morden, and wasn't 
really comfortable with the idea of giving him a first name.  This was 
tough for me, since Morden plays a large part in the book and he becomes 
fairly good friends with Anna.  So I had to find a way around it, which 
you'll see in the book.

<p>
After that, I did a lot more research.  Lots of B5 research--watching 
videotapes repeatedly (many key episodes provided by Phil Farrand, the 
author of THE NITPICKER'S GUIDES to Star Trek, of which I edited the 
first two), referring to THE A-Z OF BABYLON 5 (I got a British edition 
from Dell), the Lurker's Guide (and the Lurker himself, Steven Grimm, who 
would answer my questions at any time of day), and calling other B5 
experts, like Michael A. Burstein and Nomi Burstein.  I'd have lists of 
questions, such as how many guns does the Agamemnon have, where, and what 
kind are they?  (John Sheridan is in command of the Agamemnon during the 
book.)  

<p>
I also did as much research as time would allow on other topics.  I read 
sections of about eight archaeology books, spoke to a UNH professor of 
archaeology, the New Hampshire State Geologist told me all about caves 
(important in this book), and an old friend from the Cornell astronomy 
program served as an expert on lasers.  I also had numerous people read 
the book and offer feedback on it.  Two were members of the military who 
read for accurate military procedures and conduct. 

<p>
I don't really have any "dirt" on Joe (and that is what people call him, 
though I've stuck to the conventional JMS here).  I've told you some of 
my experiences with him above, and perhaps can come up with some more if 
asked.  I think the way he worked with me on the book was just right, in 
that he guided me so that my book would fit into the B5 universe as a 
whole, but he gave me a lot of freedom to create the vision I had and 
write the story I wanted.  For example, when we were talking on the phone 
he mentioned that he'd always imagined Morden to be a low-level 
technician on the Icarus, who was jealous of Anna's education and success 
(or something to that effect).  This is significantly different than what 
I had in my synopsis.  But he never asked me to change Morden from the 
way I'd envisioned him.  

<p>
<li>
Rodent asked if I have watched B5 in its entirety.

<p>
As the freelance editor of the novels, it's kind of neat that watching 
B5 is something I must do for my job.  If only all jobs had such fun 
requirements.  That said, I can't swear I haven't missed any episodes.  
It took me a while to get used to the new episode/repeat schedule, which 
I deeply dislike.  A few times I've missed episodes.  I don't have any 
special access to a bank of videotapes or anything.  I try to catch the 
episodes I miss when they are rerun.  But I think a few may have 
slipped through the cracks.  I'm still waiting for one of the season 
4 episodes to be rerun that I missed earlier.  I'm not sure of the 
name of it, but we learned something major about the Vorlons in it.  
I have to admit that I'm not a trivia expert.  I love the show for 
its wonderful stories and characters, for its overall feel and 
themes, for its complex concepts.  I'm not one to memorize the name 
of every ship that appears on every episode.  That said, if I need 
to know a piece of trivia (and I needed to know a lot of it to write 
THE SHADOW WITHIN, hitting stores next week), I know who to call to 
find out (and I don't mean JMS, since he is too busy to deal with 
this stuff.  I have a network of B5 fans I call on to find the 
answers to continuity questions regarding the novels, and they 
usually know--or can find out--the answers).  I tape the episodes, but I 
do miss some, and I'm very bad about labelling things, so again, when I 
need to see an episode (several episodes were key to the writing of my 
novel), if I couldn't find it in my collection I called people to send me 
copies.  They were very nice about it.

<p>
Rodent's next question was whether I had any quick comments on the 5-year 
story arc.  

<p>
Really, my only comment is my personal reaction.  When I first heard 
about the arc, around the time the pilot aired, I became extremely 
excited.  It seemed as if this was an incredible development in sf 
television, one that allowed a series to be more like a great epic 
novel.  This is part of what fueled my love for the show and part of what 
motivated me to start the line of B5 novels at Dell Publishing.  As I 
watch B5, each year it seems to get better and better.  As the arc 
progresses and our understanding of events deepens (as it only could with 
an arc), the show seems to become more meaningful and enjoyable.  I was a 
bit disappointed with the quick end to the Shadow War, but other than 
that I felt the arc has more than lived up to its promise.

<p>
Rodent's third question was whether I had worked with JMS before.

<p>
My relationship with JMS began around the time the pilot aired.  I was 
then a senior editor at Dell Publishing.  I saw the pilot and felt 
something exciting was starting.  I called Warner Brothers, asked for 
JMS, and told him Dell was interested in doing a line of B5 novels.  
We've had a number of phone conversations and discussions since then, and 
I perhaps can tell you a little about those, but I can't claim to be a 
close friend or anything like that.  When I left Dell in 1994 to escape 
NYC and become a freelance editor/teacher/writer, Dell asked me to 
continue editing the B5 novels as a freelancer, so my relationship with 
JMS continued, though we had little direct contact.  Working on this 
novel, asking him questions about what I could do, was my most extended 
contact with him.

<p>
Rodent asked, "How much did JMS 'get in the way' of your writing THE 
SHADOW WITHIN?"

<p>
As discussed earlier, JMS didn't really "get in the way" at all.  He 
mainly okayed ideas I had for the book and pointed out minor areas where 
I wasn't consistent with the show.  Really only two significant points 
were changed from the outline due to his feedback.  First, I wanted to 
work the nuking of San Diego into the book, having it occur around 2255.  
JMS said no, this occurred 40 years ago.  Interesting.  It slightly 
inconvenienced me, but it was easy enough to think of another 
catastrophe.  The other point was that I wanted Dr. Chang to arrive at 
Z'ha'dum in one ship, and then have Anna Sheridan come in another, 
follow-up ship.  JMS said they all came in one ship.  This again was only 
a minor inconvenience, and I agreed that he was right to make me stick to 
one ship.  

<p>
Really the thing that gave me the most trouble was when I asked JMS what 
Morden's first name was.  JMS said that he'd never given Morden a first 
name and that he wasn't really comfortable with the idea of giving one.  
He'd always thought of Morden as just Morden.  This ticked me off for a 
while, since I figured Morden had to have a first name, and how was I 
going to present him in informal, social scenes without his first name?  
I finally thought of a solution to the problem, as you'll see in the book.

<p>
JMS did also change the title of the book.  I had called it THE SHADOW 
AWAKES.  He changed it to THE SHADOW WITHIN.  After I got heavily into 
research with my trivia experts, I realized why he had done this.

<p>
<li>
I'm responding to the debate over how to check for scientific accuracy in 
an sf novel.  The best way to check most of these things is to speak to 
an expert.  Asking people on the net or sf readers is not a reliable 
method.  Someone will always think they know the answer when they don't.  
In writing THE SHADOW WITHIN, I consulted archaeology, geology, and laser 
experts, among others.  Hopefully this has prevented any glaring 
scientific errors from getting into the book.

<p>
I'm sure I'll get flamed again for this, but I have to say that when I 
edit a B5 novel (through the rushed process I described in another post), 
spotting scientific inaccuracies is very far down my list of concerns.  
In my opinion, B5 is not a scientifically accurate show.  And I don't 
think that being scientifically accurate is one of the show's main 
concerns.  It is a story about people (and aliens), about how we get 
along with each other and what it all means.  I'm much more concerned 
with the issues that are most important to B5.

<p>
<li>
As I've said before, I wish I had had 
more time to do a better job with all the B5 novels.  I did the best I 
could, and contrary to popular belief, I am good at my job, according to 
publishers, editors, agents, authors, and readers of sf and other 
genres.  And according to the people who gave me the World Fantasy 
Award.  And according to JMS.  

<p>
I certainly wish that all errors, inconsistencies, weak spots, etc. had 
been fixed and the books made perfect before they were published, but 
there simply wasn't time.  Doing a job that takes a minimum of 4 months 
with regular books in 3 days just doesn't allow for much.

<p>
The truth is some scientific errors didn't get removed from books I 
edited.  I'm human.  Amazing!  I think we could have more constructive 
discussion here.

<p>
On the topic of educating sf writers in science, I had an interesting 
experience with my Odyssey class.  I run Odyssey, a six-week summer 
writing workshop for writers of fantasy, science fiction, and horror.  
The first week I had Hal Clement come in to talk about creating a 
scientifically realistic setting.  He talked about the various concerns 
when creating a planet for a story, and how the setting could actually 
inspire the story and control the plot.  He knows his stuff backwards and 
forwards, and the session was fascinating.  But after he left, many of my 
students came up to me and said, "I loved Hal Clement.  He really knows 
his stuff.  But I had no idea what he was talking about after the first 
half hour."  

<p>
Many people interested in writing sf don't have a very strong knowledge 
of science, and this is a problem.  But there are books on how to create 
realistic sf settings as well as many other resources, as Neil points 
out.  This is the gruntwork (or the fun work, as your mindset goes) that 
sf writers (and ALL writers, for that matter) have to do.

<p>
ON THE TOPIC OF THE NOVEL...

<p>
I found my notes from my phone conversation with JMS, which I thought 
might interest you.  This conversation occurred while I was fleshing out 
the synopsis JMS had approved into a detailed, scene-by-scene outline.  
Mainly JMS okayed various things I wanted to have in the book, but he 
also gave out a little information.  He told me that IPX headquarters 
were in Geneva, that Anna was a freelancer for IPX, and that he didn't 
want Morden to have a first name.  

<p>
I think I may have caught JMS on one point:
I asked him why, in the footage of the scientists from the Icarus finding 
the Shadows on Z'ha'dum, the scientists were wearing EVA suits.  While in 
the episode Z'ha'dum, Sheridan and Anna only needed to wear breathers 
(this episode had not yet aired, but JMS had sent me the script and it 
specified breathers).  There was a long pause at the other end of the 
line.  Finally, in a halting way, JMS said something like this:  
"Well...when the Icarus went there...they didn't know a lot about the 
planet...they weren't sure...if there were hazards....  You can say...it 
was standard procedure...for a new planet.  That's it.  Call it standard 
first contact protocol."  His voice gradually picked up speed as he went, 
figuring his way out of the problem.  That was kind of fun.

<p>
<li>
<em>Why were the B5 regulars included in the story?</em><br>
I chose to include those other characters, for several reasons.  First, JMS 
had said at one point in history that a B5 novel should not be about a minor 
character (this was a general comment, not about my book).  I agreed with 
that idea.  It would limit the number of readers who could enjoy the 
book, and lose the flavor of the series.  Second, it seemed I had to 
bring John in to some extent, and it seemed like a copout to say he was 
busy and not explain why.  Third, I wanted a sense of history in the 
making, of Anna's fate being tied to larger events in the universe, and 
of the impact of the past on the future.   Bringing in John, Sinclair, 
Delenn, and Kosh did that, I thought.

<p>
<em>Were the two storylines written at the same time?</em><br>
I wrote them one at a time.

<p>
<em>In "In the Shadow of Z'ha'dum," Delenn said she asked Kosh whether
the Shadows had returned to Z'ha'dum, and he said yes.  Why are the Shadows
there already?</em><br>
This confused me also, which is why I had originally titled the book THE 
SHADOW AWAKES.  When JMS changed the title, at the synopsis stage, I 
started looking into the issues you raise.  They led me to believe that 
the Shadows were awake before Anna arrived (there's their attempted 
destruction of B4 also).  It seems as if some of them have been there a 
while when Anna arrives.  More could definitely have come from 
*somewhere* at some point.  When Delenn asks that question, they could 
already have been occupying Z'ha'dum for a while.  I don't believe they 
were in hibernation.

<p>
<li>
<em>Why did Morden speculate that the Shadow vessel that excavated the
buried ship on Mars might have been on automatic?</em><br>
It was because they were guessing that Alpha Omega 3 was uninhabited, 
from data sent by the probe.  I don't know if the ship was on automatic 
or not. . . 

<p>
<li>
<em>Do Shadows fly their own ships?</em><br>
I don't know.  I kind of thought that at least one Shadow was aboard 
every Shadow vessel.  I didn't think of the telepaths as pilots, but as 
part of the ship.

<P>
<li>
I'd like to respond to just a few points.  Gharlane mentioned that the 
plot of my novel could not be praised since it was "prescribed in a 
provided outline."  This is inaccurate.  I had no outline.  Nothing was 
provided.  All I knew was how Anna's story had to end.  I don't believe 
that's an outline.

<p>
The RNA thing came from a biology professor.  I wondered why he didn't 
mention DNA, but I figured he had his reasons.

<p>
The question of why I used first names for three characters and last 
names for others is simply answered.  Point of view.  I used first names 
for the point of view characters (Anna Sheridan, John Sheridan, and 
Jeffrey Sinclair) to help the reader feel closer to them, and last names 
for everyone else.  Another reason for this was to differentiate between 
Anna Sheridan and John Sheridan.  If I'd called them both Sheridan, that 
would have been a bit confusing.  One person who read an early draft 
didn't understand why I didn't called John Sheridan "Sheridan" and Anna 
Sheridan "Anna."  To him, this seemed the obvious way this issue should 
be handled.  This, unfortunately, has been the standard for a long time.  
The man is known by his last name while the woman is known by her first.  
I found this totally inappropriate.  Anna and John are equals, and should 
be dealt with on an equal level.  This left me with first names, which I 
felt gave a nice feeling of intimacy to the story and made both Anna and 
John seem more like real people.  

</ul>

<h2>JMS Speaks</h2>
<ul>

   <li> The first book is by Jeanne Cavellos, following Anna Sheridan and the
	Icarus to Z'ha'dum; the second follows Vir and Londo to Centauri Prime
	at the time of the events in these first six [season-four] episodes; and
	the third follows Sinclair to Minbar after leaving B5 and setting up the
	rangers.  This time out, I decided to assign out the stories, to make
	sure they were accurate and in continuity.  The first one up may be the
	best to date, I'm 2/3rds through it and haven't made a note yet.

   <li> The other books...in broad strokes, I accept they happened, but
	in the details, and how they're treated, and some incidentals...they
	haven't hit all the right cylinders.  This time, with this batch, I got
	more directly involved and I think they're definitely improved...though
	the Cavelos novel had the least need for input, since she *really* knew
	the show.

   <li> The story of the Icarus as presented in this book is considered
	canon.

</ul>