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Date: 2 Oct 1995 02:20:19 -0400
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Subject: Re: B5 and ST: the men
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"...wearing the red silk dress, like we'd agreed...."
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Oh.
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YOU were supposed to be wearing the red silk dress.
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Then I definitely got the message confused. Most unfortunate, though
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several nice men *did* buy me drinks that night....
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jms
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Date: 3 Oct 1995 03:13:26 -0400
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Subject: attn: JMS after B5, Azimov?
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I think the rights to all Asimov's works are taken, alas.
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jms
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Date: 3 Oct 1995 03:13:29 -0400
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Subject: = ATTN. JMS: New Story Editor?
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No, there is no story editor currently on the show; nothing to do with
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ego, just not enough outside work to really merit it.
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jms
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Date: 3 Oct 1995 03:25:12 -0400
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Subject: Re: Space:Above&Beyond (Opinio
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Saw the second installment of "Space" the other day; very good, I
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thought. Vastly encouraging. Continued good luck to them.
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(One aspect of this general discussion...when the B5 area goes up on
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AOL, and then later on the web, it's designed to have sections dedicated
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to *other* SF shows as well, to encourage folks to check them out, on the
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theory that other shows in the genre are not a threat, but a bonus for
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everyone, healthy competition.)
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 03:43:50 -0400
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Subject: Delenn And Sherdian
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You're assuming, of course, that the Delenn/Sinclair relationship was
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based on romantic love...might be something just as deep, but very
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different....
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 17:56:29 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS:'Fall FX Question (TF
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A wire harness was used; and the effect you ask about was a mix of
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CGI, live action, and rotoscope.
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 17:58:48 -0400
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Subject: KBHK (San Francisco Ch 44) B5
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There must be an error in your transcription, because "Matters of
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Honor," season 3's debut, should be on the list between "Fall" and
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"Convictions."
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 17:59:01 -0400
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Subject: JMS:Re: Space:Above&Beyond (Op
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I agree; SPACE has a great deal of potential. I watched the second
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episode, and enjoyed it.
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 17:59:16 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Question on script w
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You have to write toward the act breaks, so that each act ends on a
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strong point or hook to bring the audience back after the commercial.
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jms
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Date: 5 Oct 1995 17:59:38 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Cards Illustrated gi
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Great news about the review; let me know when it appears.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 19:11:38 -0400
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Subject: Schedule in LA?
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The first of the final four airs next week in LA on Wednesday 9 p.m.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 19:36:07 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS on Compuserve: October
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Of course, bear in mind that there *is* no correct answer to
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Sebastian's question...because no matter what answer you give, the
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question will be repeated. It's a process, not a goal, designed to
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tear down the artifices we construct around ourselves until we're left
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facing ourselves, not our roles. At some point the "answer," such as it
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is, must transcend language.
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Since the episode aired, I've received many notes from philosophy
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teachers and religious instructors and those who ran the Synanon game
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noting that they've used that technique as well, or intend to do so from
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now on.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 19:36:17 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS : today ?
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Jeez...I've already forgotten much of what I've done today, it goes
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so fast, but....
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Grabbed a few hours sleep (dropped at 3 a.m., a bit early for me
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most days), came in for a production meeting, which is when we bring in
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all the department heads and go over the script page by page one more time
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before getting ready to shoot. Went over specifics on extras, types of
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wardrobe we're going to need, monitor playback stuff, endless details.
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Proofread the first issue of the B5 collector's magazine for error
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and revisions (should be out shortly from Sendai). Made last minute
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revisions to script for "Messages From Earth" prior to shooting. Viewed
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dailies. Returned calls to Warners and others. Spoke with PR person about
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series launch, getting copies of the first two year 3 eps to reviewers in
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time for print deadlines. Finalized outline for my next script, title not
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yet set. Lunch. Went over contracts for B5 fan club that have finally
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come in, making revisions on a couple of points, hope to announce this
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formally soon.
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Jumped to script 10 and made some revisions I'd been thinking about
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last night. Walked on set and spoke to the director, made sure the scene
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was going right, also checked with Jason Carter on a few things. Took
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care of some fan mail. Finalized casting on "Messages." Booked director
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for the two-parter, Adam Nimoy, whose first ep for us is dynamite, and
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checked on casting for several episodes down the road, to make sure the
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actors would be available.
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Made final changes to new main title, and met with Christopher Franke
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to go over his first pass at the new music, made some suggestions, and
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he'll get a new version to me over the weekend. Received and reviewed
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director's cut of "Dust to Dust," in preparation for going in next week to
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edit the producer's cut. Went over new costume designs for some cast
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members with wardrobe, made final suggestions. Approved some new patches
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for use down the road, and additional artwork for parts of the station.
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Gave interview for article.
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Called several actors to go over various things with them; met with
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the director for "Messages" again to go over some possible new EFX; ditto
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later with another EFX person. Got first draft of #10 "Severed Dreams"
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out the door to WB/PTEN.
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Approved casting breakdown so it could go out to casting agencies for
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#9, "Point of No Return."
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That's it for so far today; it's now 4:00 straight up, and I've still
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got another 3 and a half hours to go (I generally leave the studio about
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7:30 p.m., go home, grab a fast bite, and get to writing.) Oh, yeah, and
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took a moment to log on (big cluster of new messages finally, about 500 or
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so), and plow through some of them, including the one to which this is a
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response.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 20:01:29 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: your Foundation arti
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As I have not yet received my OWN copy of FOUNDATION that has my
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extensive B5 article in it (hello? Mr. Edward James, Editor and
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Publisher? are you out there?), I can't exactly help others finding the
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darned thing....
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 20:01:53 -0400
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Subject: How did Billy Mumy connect wit
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Bill Mumy came in to audition, same as everybody else. It was known
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then that it was a recurring role (contrary to his recollection of things),
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and when he walked in the door, I knew he was right.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 20:14:10 -0400
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Subject: Re: Majel Barrett-Rodenberry
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Patrick: at Toronto Trek, Majel told an assembled crowd that she
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felt badly about the misunderstanding, and wanted to call and apologize;
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she went to either Berman or Pillar to get my number (can't recall now
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(3v`Wr$dwhich she said)...and told a very funny story of what happened then.
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jms
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Date: 6 Oct 1995 20:14:21 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: "The Sky" as deliber
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Some references to the sky are just that and no more; other times
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it is a process of playing to archetypes and sensibilities. There are a
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number of recurring images and thematic elements in the series, which
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sometimes combine into new elements. This coming year we'll hit the
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topic of pride quite a bit, and loyalty, and what loyalty *means* when
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the house of cards begins to fall apart...my sense is that for all the
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stuff going on on the surface, there has to be an equal or larger amount
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of subtext, stuff going on sub rosa, like a shark gliding beneath the
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water. 'Cause that's where all the *really* interesting stuff happens.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 04:47:46 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS IS FULL OF SHIT!!! (Wa
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Since this has come up, I went back and checked the source, and did
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a verbatim quote of the article that appeared in a recent (this past week)
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edition of the Los Angeles Times. Because nobody should accept info minus
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attribution and provenance. The comments came from Kerry McCluggage, the
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head of the Paramount Television Group; other comments were from Berman.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 04:59:40 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS - Season 4: we'd all
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All you can do is make your voices heard at the local level; station
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programmers are required by FCC rules to operate "in the public's interest,
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necessity and convenience." So they have to be responsive to letters and
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petitions. Beyond that, it's all beyond my control; only local voices will
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make a difference.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:00:01 -0400
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Subject: JMS: 3rd Season Questions
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B5 does not get new 'furies in the premire; the Asimov will likely
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return, though not a big story point; the Aggy does have 'furies aboard,
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yes, and it's considerably more powerful than the Hyperion, though both are
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jump capable.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:25:37 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: dubbing of Delenn in
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Nothing was changed per se; I trimmed the scene by a few lines here
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and there for time, something that happens a lot, so that's probably what
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you're noticing, a bridge between snippets.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:25:40 -0400
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Subject: Two B5 movies coming?
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Formal reply: NO B5 movies are currently "in the pipeline," not one,
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let alone two. It's something Doug (my partner) has said he'd like to do
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someday, but then he'd also like to fly under his own power. There have
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been NO formal discussions on this at all.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:37:38 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS IS FULL OF SHIT!!! (Wa
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Dave Thomas: exactly...a rumor is exactly that, and sometimes it's
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a way of testing the waters. If DS9 fans want to make sure the show stays
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around, they need to support it. Right now, nothing's been decided, and
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I made that eminently clear in my original message about this. There's
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much still being discussed; even Berman in that LA Times article worried
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that they may have "gone to the well too often." I think they're going to
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wait until the 30th anniversary hoopla is over before making a final
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determination.
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Meanwhile, thanks for confirming what I said, that this stuff is out
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and in the streets around town, as well as being indicated in industry
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related articles.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:37:42 -0400
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Subject: ATTN: JMS Another scripting q
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Act Breaks: FADE OUT, [End Act One] - new page - [Act Two] FADE IN:
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B5 as teaser, acts 1-4, tag.
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Establishers aren't numbered in a treatment, or called out.
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Credits aren't listed in a script; and don't worry too much about
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the margins being *exactly* right; they vary considerably.
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:37:45 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS! Question from a tre
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Majel will appear in year 3 episode 9, "Point of No
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Return."
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jms
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Date: 8 Oct 1995 05:37:50 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS on Compuserve: October
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BTW, to Jeannette, Laura, JM Egolf, Sarah, all the others, thanks
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for openly discussing what are surely difficult issues; it's been very
|
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instructive, and helpful for the future. And the discussion itself has
|
|
been moving and insightful; thanks for risking and giving in this way.
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jms
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Date: 10 Oct 1995 22:01:47 -0400
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Subject: Re: WHY DID JMS POST THE RUMOR
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Why did I post it? Real simple. I was in the midst of an ongoing
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discussion on the STAR TREK forum on Compuserve. I wasn't in the B5
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area. The topic at hand was Voyager, and people wondering about it and
|
|
its relation to DS9, the latter not generally getting the respect that
|
|
they feel it deserves. Having just heard the story around town that the
|
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friendly folks at Paramount are worried about DS9 pulling viewers away
|
|
from Voyager/UPN for a second time in just a few days (from a high ranking
|
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person with Star Trek), a concern that others have confirmed here has been
|
|
floating around for a while now, that they too have heard...and having
|
|
just had a number of articles coming out in the mainstream press asking
|
|
very similar questions about whether or not there's too much ST around
|
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(including the LA Times and TV Guide), it was timely, it was of potential
|
|
interest to ST fans, it was in the ST area, so I mentioned it...the same
|
|
as I'd mention any other piece of news. No more, no less.
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There can be no agenda because there's nothing to achieve that would
|
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be to the detriment of ST or the elevation of B5. The implicit
|
|
assumption is that if ST folks want DS9 to continue, they should make that
|
|
eminently clear via continued support. That is the only possible result
|
|
of that information. Yes, indeedy, one can clearly see how that benefits
|
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B5, can't we?
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The other day, in a similar ST topic, I mentioned that I *very much*
|
|
liked the episode of VOYAGER that aired on Monday. Heaven only knows
|
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what dire conspiracies that comment will imply to some with no fucking
|
|
life (viz: Mr. Thaxton). I mentioned it on CIS for *exactly* the same
|
|
reason that I mentioned the bit on DS9...because I figured it might be
|
|
of interest to the readers, and because that's what was on my mind at
|
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that time.
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As opposed to the estimable Mr. Thaxton, who has been spreading all
|
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kinds of vicious rumors here which ARE destructive, which are and have
|
|
been hurtful, and which are without support. It seems to me more than
|
|
a little hypocritical that someone who does nothing but spread lies,
|
|
gossip, rumor, character assassination and innuendo would go into
|
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meltdown over a rather reliable story that has been picked up by major
|
|
newspapers, and confirme by others here.
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And then, when these facts come out, he falls back on the only tool
|
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he has left: to villify, impugn or otherwise call into question the
|
|
motives for doing so. Never mind that it's actually a Real Thing, why
|
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did you SAY it? For the reasons given. If that's not enough for some
|
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pinheads among us, tough.
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And haven't we all gotten tired of the game by now? Ford or one of
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his few netbuddies posts something outrageous, eliciting responses taht
|
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are justifiably angry, and then proceeds to make fun of the replies because
|
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their anger is perfectly in tune with the offense.
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This is the classic bully's tactic...hit you and hit you and hit you
|
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until he gets the reaction he wants, and then he makes fun of your
|
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reaction, hoping to get another one.
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How much longer does this have to go on before people catch wise to
|
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his game? How much longer can one justify falling for the old "pull my
|
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finger" gag?
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If you're doing this on my behalf...don't. Just *ignore* the man; I
|
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get FAR more upset when I see others being attacked for the simple crime
|
|
of defending me against baseless attacks than I ever would get over the
|
|
original attack, in large measure because I simply Do Not Read his posts
|
|
anymore. He is irrelevant to my life, to the life of anyone involved
|
|
with the show, and to the show itself, and to all of you.
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We all know that no matter what is said or done, somehow he or one
|
|
of his three or so ilk (and that's ALL THEY ARE), will attempt to twist
|
|
it around to make it sound somehow dubious. That's because they are
|
|
sick, lifeless, twisted individuals who have nothing else to do. So if
|
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we know this is always going to happen...why even bother reacting to it?
|
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|
I have 543 messages sitting in my mailbox right now; the majority of
|
|
them are the "SHIT" thread in one of its various incarnations. Is this
|
|
really the best use for this rec.arts area?
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If you have killfiles...use them. Don't you understand that by
|
|
responding in any way, manner shape or form, you are giving him *exactly*
|
|
what he wants...and *encouraging* him to do more of it? You are creating
|
|
the problem by giving him validation...validation that only comes in the
|
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form of the echo caused by his voice. Stop being the echo.
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I don't read his posts anymore; if I see it come up on the header,
|
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I just delete it. The only way I know something's going on is when I
|
|
see a big thread, and sometimes run across an imbedded quote. And
|
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y'know, I'm much happier about it.
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You must understand that this is simply what he does. One of the
|
|
benefits of being one of his many targets is that you tend to hear from
|
|
others...people at record industry magazines, radio stations, other
|
|
composers and producers who have been targeted by Ford, harrassed and
|
|
stalked on the nets. HE STAYS UNTIL PEOPLE UNIFORMLY IGNORE HIM. The
|
|
more you ignore him initially, the more outrageous, defamatory, libelous,
|
|
smarmy and ultimately desperate his comments will become. But eventually
|
|
if he is frozen out, he will go away in search of new prey.
|
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|
This is how he gets off, people. Pure and simple. Some of the horror
|
|
stories I've heard from others similarly targeted would curl your hair.
|
|
And along the way, I've learned a lot about Mr. Thaxton, more than I
|
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really wanted to know. More, I suspect, than he would be happy to know
|
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that I know.
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We have new episodes beginning this week. Ignore the jerk. I ask
|
|
this as a personal favor; I get more upset by seeing this drag on, and
|
|
seeing others get hurt and insulted, than by *anything* Ford can ever say
|
|
to me.
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Because anything he has to say is a fiction, or simply irrelevant.
|
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So stop this. Please. As a personal favor.
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jms
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Date: 11 Oct 1995 05:30:21 -0400
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Subject: ATT: JMS -- WAS JMS on Cmpsrv:
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"What's the difference between 'having a Minbari soul' and 'having
|
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been a Minbari in a previous life'?"
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The difference, Jamie, is *huge*. And extremely significant.
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Here, I'll give you a freebie...there's something massively,
|
|
mind-bendingly significant in a throwaway line in one of the first three
|
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episodes of year three that seems to have little bearing on this, but in
|
|
fact is hugely involved in this *exact* issue.
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You'll know what it was much later in the season. But this heads-up
|
|
might point you in the right direction. Suffice to say there's a very
|
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definite reason I phrased that as I did.
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jms
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Date: 11 Oct 1995 05:42:45 -0400
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Subject: > ATTN. JMS: Ratings and Reru
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Franklin: I'm sure they still think it was a good idea.
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If you need me, I'll be on the roof....
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jms
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Date: 11 Oct 1995 05:55:13 -0400
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Subject: ATTN: JMS You Got Competition
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I'm quite happy to have competition. The more the merrier. As an SF
|
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fan myself, I love nothing more than seeing good SF on the air, and I have
|
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to say I *very* much enjoyed the last Voyager episode, I'm quite happy
|
|
with X-Files, I'm in love with a lot of the dialogue and camerawork on
|
|
American Gothic, I've enjoyed all the Space episodes to date...the more
|
|
voices, the more competition, the leaner and better the overall result.
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jms
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Date: 12 Oct 1995 03:59:34 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: (Spoilers) Divided L
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No, the Ivanova revelation in "Loyalties" has nothing to do with
|
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replacing Talia; that is a moot point in many ways, since Lyta is back,
|
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and since other things happen which take that issue off the table in
|
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any event.
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jms
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Date: 12 Oct 1995 03:59:44 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Inquisitor Question
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I'd say there's a very good chance that the Vorlons have more than
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one Inquisitor.
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jms
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Date: 12 Oct 1995 04:11:38 -0400
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Subject: Ellison CITY Note
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Harlan Ellison has requested that I post this in places where
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those likely to have ordered the forthcoming CITY ON THE EDGE
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OF FOREVER limited-edition hardcover can find it.
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Message begins:
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Here is the answer to the question of why a three-week delay in
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shipping THE CITY ON THE EDGE OF FOREVER became necessary.
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A minor production glitch.
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Nothing more mysterious or ominous than that.
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Once the book had gone to Thomson-Shore in Dexter, Michigan for
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printing, and was in production, it was discovered that more
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than 150 corrections to the text--some significant, others of a
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niggling nature--but all troublesome to a greater or lesser
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degree--had slipped past, and had not been integrated.
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Tom Monteleone of Borderlands Press was out of the country. But
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his concerns for shipping on time--we've been paying the price
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for a premature announcement of this title four years ago ever
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since that miscalculation was made--were preeminent. Nonetheless,
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because of my insistence that this book (a book of great personal
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importance to me) be as close to perfect as possible, I took
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the necessary action to hold the production at a pre-final stage
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till Tom returned and we could get the changes made.
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That has been accomplished. Tom Monteleone has been very
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gracious in accommodating my concerns, and the book is back in
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the tube at Thomson-Shore right now. Three weeks max is what
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Dave Raymond, Customer Services Manager, tells us. Three weeks
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and the book, a beautiful beautiful package, will be in the
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hands of those who've ordered it.
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It is unfortunate that Tom Monteleone's interim message on the
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Borderlands Press 800-order line has been misinterpreted by
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some people. All is well, and the CITY is on its way to waiting
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eyes and hands. Thank you for asking.
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Harlan Ellison
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Date: 12 Oct 1995 04:24:28 -0400
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Subject: Attn: JMS Bab5 Soundtrack Seas
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Actually, there is some year two music on the CD, on the last two
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suites. No schedule yet on disks.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 01:45:53 -0400
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Subject: Attn: JMS -- why were specific
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They tended to go from what photos and art was available from WB, and
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in large measure...that ain't a lot.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 06:06:32 -0400
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Subject: The Great War of rastb5
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"Somebody please tell me what the hellis going on?"
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Easy. Somebody accidentally let humanity in here.
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Noisy lot, aren't they?
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 06:18:58 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: B5 Comic #11 -- Mark
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There's nothing that I'm aware of in comic #11 that would place it
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after "Confessions." It's a general pamphlet prepared by Psi Corps some
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time before.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 06:33:41 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS' powers of prediction
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Actually, the plan to run TNG originally for just 5 years was
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specifically *stated by Paramount* to the news media, nothing to do with
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predicting anything. Also, at that time, I knew a lot of folks who were
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working over at TNG as writer/producers, and that was what they had all
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been told was the case. When the show finally began to kick into gear,
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ratings-wise, they decided to extend it to seven years, and it took quite
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a bit of finageling to get everyone back on board (that was why they did
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the Borg two-parter with Patrick Stewart...if he had decided not to sign,
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they would've used this as a means of getting rid of the character); you
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don't have to do this IF YOU HAVE OPTIONS ON THE ACTORS.
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There was no predicting involved. I reported what was being said by
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those directly involved with ST:TNG at the time, what was in the press,
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and what was being told to agents. Nothing more, nothing less. Five
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years WAS the original plan; check the first newspaper articles about the
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show, it's all over the place.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 06:33:56 -0400
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Subject: Re: WHY DID JMS POST THE RUMOR
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I disagree with the term ego in this connection. (Big surprise,
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right?) On one level, anyone who is involved in any aspect of the arts
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has exercised ego in the sense of, "I am going to make little black marks
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on this piece of paper," or "I am going to make colored brushstrokes on
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this canvas, and they will be sufficiently impressive that you will want
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to pay money for them." That aspect is part and parcel of working in any
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form of the arts.
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But B5 specifically? I don't think so. First off, there's a great
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deal of misunderstanding in this discussion about how television works.
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In a TV series, the story editor *NEVER, EVER* rewrites the executive
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producer. It would be a hideous breach of protocol. On MURDER, SHE WROTE
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or JAKE, or other shows, I *never* touched my exec's scripts. The network
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puts an executive producer/writer on premises for one singular reason
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(not counting the one billion others): to set the tone for the writing for
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everyone else to follow. They rely on YOU to absolutely govern that
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aspect, or you're not doing your job, and betraying your commitment to the
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network.
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So when someone says "It's ego not to let the story editor revise the
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executive producer's scripts," that betrays a total lack of understanding
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of how television production works.
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Finally, working 5 years to get B5 produced had nothing to do with
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ego and everything to do with obsession. There's this story that I like,
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which I hope others will like. The ONLY way that this story will ever be
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told is if one person fights for it tooth and nail for every day of every
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year required to tell it. I have an obligation to this story to see it
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through. Getting doors slammed in your face for five years takes its toll
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on the ego; ego says, "Screw it, go find a nice cushy job on another show
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where nobody'll slam the door on you." Obsession says, "Keep going."
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Ego hates to fail. Obession *requires* that you fail from time to time,
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in striving for something greater.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 07:25:13 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Production Question
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Flashback scenes are usually part of a prior scene, and thus are
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shot in color, shown the first time, and transferred to black and white
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for flashback use.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 08:20:45 -0400
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Subject: Re: jms is anti-Trek?
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"JMS loves the fact that you worship him...."
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Yessir, boy-howdy, and there ain't nothin' like signing onto your
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account and seeing ten gazillion messages titled JMS IS SOMETIMES / ALWAYS
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/ GENERALLY / 99.9% FULL OF SHIT to make you feel like the living
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reincarnation of Thor hisownself.
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"you ain't never gonna be on the show" ... actually quite a few folks
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on the nets have come by the Babylon 5 stages, have been paid to edit music
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videos, have even come to *work* for us...PwdrdTstMan from AOL now works at
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the B5 stages, another internetter known to most folks here is now working
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at WB on the B5 AOL page, others have come here as well, even as extras a
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few times.
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"and you ain't havin' dinner at Master JMS' estate." As soon as
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Master JMS *gets* an estate instead of a fairly simple 3 bedroom house in
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a reasonably nice neighborhood, I'll let you know if this happens or not.
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In the interim, I've had dinner and lunches with folks from the nets for
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quite some time now.
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"thrill of a lifetime feeling that they are actually interacting with
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their 'god'" See paragraph 2 above. Amazing how if anyone does anything
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of merit, and some folks acknowledge that, others have to characterize
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that in Deity terms. Is there no in-between? Oh, silly me, it's just a
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rhetorical device to deride the issue at hand; sorry, for a moment there I
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thought you were interested in accuracy, Ross. My apologies.
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And frankly, if I were ANY kind of deity, I'd have a LOT more hair and
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a *MUCH* deeper voice.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 20:25:13 -0400
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Subject: ATTN: JMS Your opinion on comi
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I wasn't terribly pleased with the artwork on 9 and 10, I thought it
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could've been much better. As for the story, David Gerrold had proposed
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(and written) that as an outline for an episode; I said I didn't think it
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worked for our show. Which opened the door for DC to pick it up, and since
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he felt so strongly that it *did* work, I figured I'd let him proceed.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 20:37:22 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS- Peter David.
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I'm certainly open to his doing more for us.
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jms
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Date: 13 Oct 1995 20:37:35 -0400
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Subject: Re: jms is anti-Trek?
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To John Lawrence Morgan: no, I don't get to watch ST very often;
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that's because doing this job is a 25-hour-a-day responsibility. I'm at
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the B5 offices from early in the day until 7:30-8:00 at night, I grab a
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fast meal, sometimes just a sandwich, and charge into my home office and
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start writing. I try to break away for a very few shows; American Gothic,
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Space, the Simpsons, X-Files and 60 Minutes during the course of the week.
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I have no time for anything else. That's why I log on here often at 3 a.m.
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because that's the only time I have left after work. (Today's an
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exception; I get to work at home today since we've given the crew a couple
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days off to catch their breath.)
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And yeah...given the choice between spending those last couple of
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hours vegged out watching TeeVee, and coming on-line and hanging out with
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people, almost my last vestige of human (sorta) contact...I choose the
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latter. What in this do you have a problem?
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jms
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Date: 17 Oct 1995 04:15:18 -0400
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Subject: JMS: You did it to me again!
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Ben....we try.....
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jms
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Date: 17 Oct 1995 04:27:54 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Lyta's P Rating (Dis
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Didn't say Talia WAS a psi-cop, Talia said she *interned with* the
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PsiCops. Bear in mind that you're going to need support staff, lower
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level liaisons, and a bunch of other positions as well as the actual cops.
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jms
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Date: 18 Oct 1995 06:17:43 -0400
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Subject: Re: ATTN JMS: B5 Comic #11 --
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Tritium: you actually believe *anything* in a PsiCorps propaganda
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booklet? Only about 10% of what's recorded in that booklet is true, and
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even that's distorted. The character in the booklet is totally fictional.
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jms
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Date: 18 Oct 1995 06:18:05 -0400
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Subject: Re: JMS on Compuserve: October
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Jamie: I don't consider myself an "abuse survivor." I think that
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term has been so over-used, exploited and trivialized in some corners by
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application to the smallest of problems ("My father once hit me when I
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was 12 so now I'm an axe murderer/going through regression therapy in
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search of one more time when it might've happened") that it takes away
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from people who've had terrible, mind-bendingly awful backgrounds with
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serious personal violence, sexual violation, psychological torture and
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other aberrations. I'll probably get roasted for this, but it does seem
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to me that talking about one's "abusive childhood" has become the newest
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trend, and one more way of denying personal responsibility for who one is
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and what one does...and, ultimately, detracts from the attention and
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needs and real problems of those who *have* suffered terribly.
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Yeah, I had a crummy childhood, followed by a crummy adolescence;
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vast sections of it were a nightmare. Fundamentally...so what? I never
|
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considered that anyone's had a Leave It To Beaver childhood. Some were
|
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better, some were worse. Doesn't mean I still don't get pissed about it,
|
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doesn't make me any more willing to have contact with my family, but I
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have never considered myself in the light of those two words. That, to
|
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me, is one more manifestation of the victim mentality that seems to be
|
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all OVER the place.
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People spend too much time finding other people to blame, too much
|
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energy finding excuses for not being what they are capable of being, and
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not enough energy putting themselves on the line, growing out of the past,
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and getting on with their lives.
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And, again, I *very carefully and specifically* exclude from this
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discussion, and the preceding paragraph, those who've gone through true,
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serious abuse in childhood, who must spend years rebuilding their lives
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and their trust and their emotional infrastructure.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 07:02:42 -0400
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Subject: TLTS: Opinion (no spoilers)
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Dennis: thanks, we're starting to get better at this stuff. It's a
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nifty episode.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 07:09:00 -0400
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Subject: To JMS: Congratulations!! <DL
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Christian: I quote Mark Twain: "The test of any good fiction is that
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you should care something for the characters; the good to succeed, the
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bad to fail. The trouble with most fiction is that you want them all to
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land in hell, together, as quickly as possible."
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:34:11 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS : Important KOSH ques
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The more people who have to *see* Kosh as one of their own, the
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greater the strain on Kosh, as you'll note in the first ep of year three.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:36:14 -0400
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Subject: JMS: dumb DL question (really
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What was the passwor? I'm hideously tempted to say, "Z'ha'dum."
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:36:48 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Murder1 & B5
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I for one would love nothing more than to claim that B5 "paved the
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way...for Murder One," but truth is...the network folks probably haven't
|
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even noticed. From all I hear, Murder 1 has more to do with the long
|
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term fascination with the OJ trial than anything B5.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:37:50 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Going to Loscon?
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I'll be at LosCon over Thanksgiving because, well, I have no life;
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if anyone else attends depends on their schedules.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:38:11 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS:Metaphysical question
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Nia: I'd say you're reading WAY too much into this.
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jms
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Date: 19 Oct 1995 19:38:39 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Back door into plot?
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Yeah, originally it was the Kosh-scan that would've gotten Lyta in
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trouble; the TK aspect was originally going to come in from another angle,
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but I was able to collapse the two in Talia, and then bring Lyta in from
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a different direction, as you'll see in one of the first batch of new
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year 3 eps.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 06:10:48 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Explain editing proc
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Film is shot on the stage, then transferred to video, which is then
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digitized onto the Avid computer editing system, which holds every take of
|
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every scene. A scene is shot many times from various angles: wide master
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shot, three-shots (3 people), two-shots, singles, raking twos, close
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ups, medium shots, extreme closeups and sometimes downshots (as well as
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CGI and composite shots).
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John Copeland and I then go in and work on the version of the episode
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edited by the director to do the producer's cut. We sit down with the
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editor, and go scene by scene. The usual construction is as follows: you
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get a wide master shot so we know the geography, where we are, and where
|
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everyone is in relation to that. Gradually you go closer, into threes or
|
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twos, then singles or closeups for dramatic emphasis, coming out into the
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master from time to time when someone has to move, or to break the sense
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of claustrophobia.
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When you get in close, you have over-the-shoulder shots, meaning
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you're shooting past one character's shoulder to the other. Then you do
|
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the same thing in reverse, so you see both sides of the conversation.
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You do these one at a time, for lighting purposes; you light one side of
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the room for the scenes looking left-right, then move the camera and the
|
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lighting around for the scenes when you're on the right side looking
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left (or, phrased differently, you light for Susan looking at Talia,
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then Talia looking at Susan). The actors then do the scene again, with
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the camera on the other side.
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The actor has to be very careful to always repeat each movement
|
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exactly; if he picks up a teacup on the word "quibble," he has to make
|
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absolutely sure he picks up the cup on exactly that same word, every
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time, in every take, in the same way, in the correct hand. If the
|
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actor slips (and this sometimes happens), when you go to show the other
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side of the scene, you suddenly find you have a matching problem; in
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the shot over Talia's shoulder to Susan, the actor raised a hand; in
|
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the shot over Susan's shoulder to Talia, the actor (generic term that
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includes women) *didn't* raise a hand. So when you edit the two, you
|
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have a matching problem. You can sometimes avoid this by just staying
|
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on one side of the shot, but then you can't get the other character's
|
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on-face reaction to what's being said. And in that scene in particular,
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we *needed* to see both sides.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 06:10:55 -0400
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Subject: Query: Will the Shadows attac
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Babylon 5 is still needed for their own purposes, as an easy way to
|
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keep an eye on things and get to the people they need to get to, so
|
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there's no need for them to attack B5. They certainly wouldn't do so
|
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just because Morden was busted...that's beneath their concern, as long
|
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as he keeps his mouth shut. Which he did. Doesn't mean, though, that
|
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in fairly short order they won't take steps to be as sure as they can be
|
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that, in fact, the secret *is* still secure....
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 09:31:04 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: You got some bad, BA
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Two things transcend all human understanding: the concept of god,
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and PTEN publicity.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 19:34:27 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: Question (& mild SPO
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In part it's John's take on the character, but what I indicated to him
|
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was that Draal's gone through some considerable changes by entering the
|
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heart of the machine; it's given him greater understanding, and the freeing
|
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aspects of greater humor. It's almost like -- and I hate to even use the
|
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reference because somebody'll say "Oh, that's what he's doing," and I ain't
|
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it's just a point of comparison -- Tom Bombadil in LoTR...quite funny, but
|
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also someone not to be trifled with.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 19:34:29 -0400
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Subject: ATTN: JMS - A few questions...
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Land armies, deliberating Shadows, probably not, for various reasons;
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gloss off CGI, 3D starmaps, new tech and better rendering, yes.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 19:57:37 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Internauts coming fo
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There's not much sense to it; it just happens with some folks.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 20:09:14 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: Scripted Facial Nuan
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Generally, you don't so much indicate the face (with some exceptions)
|
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as the mood...in parentheticals in dialogue (growing horror) (with
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meaning) (sotto voce) and in narrative description (his face fall as he
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sees Morden enter).
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 20:09:17 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: Rehearsals and Takes
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The number of scenes varies depending on the amount of action
|
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required. On balance, the average TV script has about 60-75 scenes or
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shots in it. From time to time, in B5, we've gone as high as 130 shots
|
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in episodes like "Twilight" or "Fall." I think we just blew out our
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record here with "Severed Dreams," which has close to 140.
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Number of scenes shot on any day depends on how long the scene; you
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can do 4 really long shots or 8 fairly short scenes. The amount of
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rehearsal varies depending on the scene, how many extras or what kind of
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action/stunts are required. The more action, the more you rehearse, to
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ensure nobody gets hurt.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 20:20:54 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Episodes 19 &20
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No, Divided precedes Twilight.
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jms
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Date: 21 Oct 1995 20:32:29 -0400
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Subject: Attn:jms authorship of B5?
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For starters, I have problem with the auteur term. What most folks
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forget is that this term originated with the Cahiers du Cinema (I think I
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may have hideously misspelled that) which actually began a series of
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screenings/presentations on each aspect of film-making, the writer, the
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director, the cinematographer...started with the director...and basically
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got so caught up in that aspect that they dropped the rest.
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So let's stick with "author" for the moment. To that question, yes,
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I do consider myself the author of the B5 story, the creator of itsz
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characters and universe. Insofar as we enter other areas, my position is
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that of navigator...I point to a spot on the horizon, and say "That's
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where we're all going." Each department/artistic aspect of the show,
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from props, to costumes, to the director, works to most accurately create
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what I see in my head. The most common question is, "Is this what you had
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in mind when you wrote it?"
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I keep an eye on every aspect of the show, to make sure it's what I
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see in my head. If something isn't right, it's redone until it *is*
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right. Nonetheless, I try to provide as much latitude as possible to my
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people, to let them be as creative as they have the potential to be.
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Sometimes there's some irony in the situation; in "And the Sky Full
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of Stars," for instance, Janet is noted for the notion of having Sinclair
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standing facing these lights that go out, one by one, except for the one
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that spotlights him, when he's confronted by Knight Two, people say, "Oh
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what a great directorial idea," but that's spelled out to the smallest
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detail in the script. Ditto for the intercutting of scenes in the fall
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of the emperor in "Coming." That's often attributed to the director, but
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it was specifically scripted that way, right down to the use of slow-mo
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for some shots, the way in which he falls, all of it.
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This is because of that nutty auteur theory that many directors have
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wrapped around themselves like a flag. With the obvious exception of
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writer/directors, I've never seen any director do much with the auteur
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theory and 100 blank pages.
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jms
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Date: 23 Oct 1995 21:56:55 -0400
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Subject: JMS: Talia and Ivanova *spoile
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I didn't show a kiss because, in my experience, it's easier on all
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around if one steps into the shallow end of the pool first, and walks
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into the deep end rather than diving in and splashing everybody in the
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process.
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jms
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Date: 25 Oct 1995 03:39:32 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: RAVES and KUDOS for
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Cecil: my deepest thanks for that.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 00:58:49 -0400
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Subject: Re: DS9's life or death
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To the inquiry about TV contracts...when an actor gets a contract on
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a show, it's not a guarantee of anything; it's all one season at a time.
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ALL TV series are like this: you (the producer/studio) have an OPTION on
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the actor, by contract. Meaning you own the actor for that period of time
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AT YOUR DISCRETION. In other words, if you're renewed for a given season,
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you have the option of hiring (or not hiring) the actor back for the
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next season. The actor does *not* have the option. If you then hire the
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actor, it's pay-or-play for that season, meaning if you decide to let the
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actor go mid-season, you must still pay him for the balance of episodes
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committed for.
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So an actor's contract is not a guarantee of *anything*.
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As for the budget on the two-parter...DS9's ratings have been on a
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steady decline for the last several seasons, according to the trades and
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newspaper articles. Paramount sells advertising based on the ratings; if
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they drop below the promised level, they have to start giving money back
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to the advertisers (not a good thing). So regardless of a series
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projected duration, they *must* start improving the ratings...hence you
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spend a little more up front, grab some ratings, give the show a boost,
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and maybe make it up here and there later in other shows, or simply write
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off the additional shooting costs against the benefit of not giving money
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back to advertisers.
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No judgment here, no predictions, just answering the questions that
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came up about how things work in TV.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 00:59:17 -0400
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Subject: Kosh's appearance (Spoilers_)
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This is not a bad assessment, Nicholas. And yes, I remember that
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quote from CS Lewis, very evocative. (Have read the Screwtape Letters,
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Perelandra, That Hideous Strength and others. He sometimes indulged in
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straw-man logic, but always written entertainingly.)
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 19:57:32 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: A couple of question
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Actually, what's been referred to is the Jump Gate off Io; we saw
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this colony facility before, in Chrysalis...it isn't *on* Io as much as
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in orbit near it.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 19:59:15 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: What did the actors
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I try avoiding telling the actors anything more than what is needed
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for each episode as it comes, otherwise you risk them subconsciously
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playing the result rather than the process.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 19:59:52 -0400
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Subject: Attn Jms: More PKD in B5, wha
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Nope, sorry. "Garibaldi" comes from the Italian war hero of the
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same name. Have never read Dick's "Exegenis," and that has nothing to
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do with "Exogenesis" the episode. Don't know anything about any row
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between PKD and HE.
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I'm chagrined to say that I've read *very* little of Dick's work,
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though I did read "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep," which of course
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became Blade Runner. He just got a wee bit weird, even for me.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 20:00:27 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Influences?
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Have not read Rice's "The Adding Machine" or seen it, but from the
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apparent time period, it's likely of the school of playwriting that has
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most influenced my work in general, mainly in terms of style.
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I somewhat tend to moderate my writing style between the fairly
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straightforward and simple to slightly more theatrical in nature, more of
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the Serling/Chayefsky/Corwin mode. I like playing with language, and
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English is a terrific language to play with. There was a time in this
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country when literate syntactical construction was something honored; now
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everything tends to be more toward the y'know, I was, you know, hanging
|
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around the corner store, y'know, and Bob comes up to me, and he says....
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If you look at the original Twilight Zone, some episodes of the
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original Star Trek, the Outer Limits...you see a kind of reflective
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writing that delights in slamming nouns and verbs together to see what
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kind of explosion you get when the syntax hits critical mass.
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It saddens me a bit now that anybody who sounds too literate is
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often put down as showy or being theatrical. Listen to the speeches of
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Kennedy and Churchill and FDR, look to the great orators of our long
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history of a nation, from Lincoln to Jefferson. Their use of language,
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of an idea well formed and delivered, propelled this nation toward its
|
|
current destiny, forged one country out of dozens of squabbling states.
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I listen now to politicians, hoping and waiting for the one who
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understands that the words have to dig into our souls and take root,
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must have power and the purity of language well-used. And I just don't
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hear it anymore...which is perhaps why we have consensus takers and not
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leaders these days.
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It saddens me that literacy has become suspect, and degraded, given
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how many millions of years of evolution spent developing the ability to
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create language. The quality of our thoughts is bordered on all sides by
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our facility with language. The less precise the useage, the less clear
|
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the process of language, the less you can achieve what you want to
|
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achieve when you open you mouth to say something. We have slowly
|
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bastardized and degraded and weakened the language, abetted and abided
|
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by a growing cultural disdain for literacy, a cyclical trend toward
|
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anti-intellectualism.
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So I write my characters as sharp, and as witty, and as intelligent,
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and as literate as I wish I would be under those sorts of circumstances,
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which of course I never am. Maybe to remind people of the power of
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language...mainly because I just love the sound of words carefully
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stitched together. My dramatic conceit is that in 2259, we have had a
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moderate rebirth of formality, and the kind of literacy you would often
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see in letters from the turn of the century, and the 1930s. Because it
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allows me to write it the way I want.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 04:42:12 -0400
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Subject: Re: ATTN JMS: Explain editing
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Sometimes we do use two cameras, yes, usually for big scenes with
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crowds and lots of action. If you're in tight, it's hard to light for
|
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both sides; the light generally goes just one way, then you relight for
|
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each new angle. Even so, we run two cameras often, but not always, as
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the cost is prohibitive.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 04:42:37 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: Q's not asked from
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What's been happening the last few days? Well, we're now shooting
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episode #9, "Point of No Return," and today was Majel Barrett's second
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day of shooting on the show; she has two more days to shoot. So far the
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episode looks very good. We're finishing the last EFX shots on "Voices
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of Authority," episode #4, which will air after episode #5, "Passing
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Through Gethsemane" because the latter requires almost zip EFX, and is a
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better cap to the Novemer sweeps.
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I just finished writing episode #12, "A Late Delivery From Avalon,"
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and we're in pre-production on #10, "Severed Dreams." I'm currently
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breaking out the story for #13 (not titled yet), which I'll probably start
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writing this weekend. We should get the director's cut on "Messages From
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Earth" (#8) sometime middle of next week.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 04:43:07 -0400
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Subject: Attn JMS: I (think I) got it!
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Shadows weren't trolling, just passing through; the Narn fall is not
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in the best interests of the army of light.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 21:51:25 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS : expression
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There have been many explanations for where this phrase comes
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from. SoMost of them are obviN%=yously spook etymology, but the first one I
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heard -- and who knows if this is right -- comes from WW I, where just
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before one side would go into battle, they'd send one man up in a hot
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air balloon to scout the enemy's location. If you saw the balloon
|
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going up, you knew combat wasn't far behind.
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Wherever it comes from, though, that's the general meaning of
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the phrase.
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jms
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Date: 27 Oct 1995 22:04:38 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Notes to actors abou
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No, I don't believe I gave any voice direction on that one.
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But certainly, the most trouble is always caused by people who are
|
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sure they know what they're doing.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 17:41:18 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Caitlin Brown in CtI
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No, no Caitlin.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 17:41:22 -0400
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Subject: Who is Norman Corwin?
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He is only one of the finest writers this country has ever produced.
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Go to your local library and look up his work. Take it home and read it
|
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(or listen to it). In addition to being one of our preeminent essayists,
|
|
and a primary influence on such notables as Edward R. Murrow, Charles
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|
Kuralt, Walter Cronkite, Stan Freberg, Rod Serling, and is possibly *the*
|
|
primary reason Ray Bradbury decided to become a writer in the first place,
|
|
he was this nation's finest and most regarded radio drama writer of his
|
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time, moreso than Arch Oboler or Orson Welles. He write the radio drama
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"On A Note of Triumph" aired on *all three* radio networks on VE day,
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wrote cantatas for the UN, was a contemporary and friend of Carl
|
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Sandburg, wrote the feature film "Lust For Life" about Van Gogh...look
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into any copy of "Who's Who." The listing goes on forever.
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Unfortunately, at the height of his career, he was one of many who
|
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ended up grey-listed, because one little creep who owned a chain of
|
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supermarkets published a rag called Red Channels, which one day listed
|
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Norman's name because some of what he'd written struck this jerk as being
|
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maybe sympathetic to the Reds (never mind that this was stuff he had been
|
|
commissioned by the government to write during WW 2 to demonstrate
|
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solidarity during the war). Despite this, his niche remains secure, and
|
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he is what's known in the biz as a *writer's writer*. He has been a
|
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friend and a mentor for over 15 years, and I've learned much from him
|
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about what it is to be a writer, and a human being.
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I'm serious. Go to your local library and look up his work. Or to
|
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your local bookstore and track down a copy of his latest book, a collection
|
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of his letters (cunningly entitled Norman Corwin's Letters), published in
|
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hardcover by Barricade Books, containing his correspondence to friends,
|
|
family, and such notable long-term friends as Ray Bradbury, William
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Shatner, Rod Serling, Robert Altman, Ken Burns, Philip Dunne, Charles
|
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Kuralt, Walter Cronkite, Burgess Meredith, Philip Roth, Gregory Peck,
|
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Eric Sevareid, Bill Moyers, Erik Barnouw, Groucho Marx, Carl Sandburg,
|
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Leonard Bernstein, Bette Davis, Edward R. Murrow...well, you get the
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idea.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 17:41:26 -0400
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Subject: Video Video I want it on VIDEO
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If someone wants to pull out the address I listed on Compuserve,
|
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there's the name and address of the person who makes the decision on
|
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video releases, B5's in particular.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 17:41:30 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: ISN question - How c
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There are other networks, but the cost of a hyperspace/tachyon link
|
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to places like B5 is prohibitive, so they're fairly local. ISN has
|
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relays and branches in lots of places. It would be fair to say that ISN
|
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is taking heat from the EA gov't to portray things a certain way, yes.
|
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Where this leads, we'll have to see.
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jms
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Date: 28 Oct 1995 17:41:38 -0400
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Patrick McGoohan?
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We'll go after Patrick when we get another script suited for him.
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:41:49 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS, Vorlon singing & mis
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Peter David wants to re-use the teddy bear in his new series, Space
|
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Cases...so we'll see.
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:54:19 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Could you clear some
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I could address those issues here, but I'd rather do them in the
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show...otherwise it kinda defeats the purpose in making it.
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:17:40 -0500
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Subject: JMS and Coincidences
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It's real simple. Ron Thornton showed me three variations on the
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Great Machine shot. Because you're looking at a composite shot, you have
|
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to shoot either sharply angled down, or dead across, and full-figured,
|
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since you have to put them into another piece. That meant either a
|
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horizontal shot, or a 3/4's vertical shot.
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Two of the shots on the storyboards were horizontal; one showed our
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characters way off in the distance on a ribboned path lined by crystals.
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It'd be pretty, but it looked like another tunnel shot, and I wanted to
|
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show something that wasn't claustrophobic. Also, we'd be limited in the
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camera move, and our characters would look kinda like peanuts. Not
|
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terribly dramatic. The second shot just didn't work for me, I don't
|
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entirely recall the reason now. The third possibility seemed the most
|
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dramatic...it was a high angle shot, it had depth, it would let us start
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on our characters and do a camera move/pullback in post production, it
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worked on every level.
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My second thought was, "Shit, somebody's going to gig us on the
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Forbidden Planet thing." Nonetheless, it was the right shot, for the
|
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right reasons, and we chose to go with it.
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:17:45 -0500
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Subject: Attn JMS: CTI Thoughts/Feeling
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Will: thanks, and you're quite right; it does say something about the
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Vorlons that they'd use Jack for this purpose. Now we just have to further
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define what that is.
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BTW, just to append it here, not strictly appropos of your message...
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I've noted a number of people say, in essence, "Boy, was I disappointed
|
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that he said Jack at the end, what does he think we are, morons?" And I've
|
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seen plenty of comments from people who didn't know it was Jack until that
|
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very last moment, for whom it was a revelation.
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It's pretty clear, to lots of folks, that the test was in some ways
|
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(most, actually) more for Delenn's benefit than Kosh's...lots of folks got
|
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this...and then others have said, "Well, if that's what he meant, why
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didn't he just have one of them come out and SAY this, say what was learned
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or that this was for THEIR benefit?"
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So frankly, whether one comes out and says something, or does not come
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out and say something, someone on one side or the other is going to give
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you a hard time about it.
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:17:49 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS: To whom would we wri
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I'll try to post the address later, but in the interim, I gave the
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address of the person at WB video over on CIS, so somebody'd probably
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already got it here. ('s)
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jms
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Date: 29 Oct 1995 23:17:52 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS : Theo & his Brothers
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No, these are not the monks Sheridan met earlier.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 16:13:22 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Maybe setting recor
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Actually, it was pointed out to me recently that as far as can be
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determined (and if there's any solid info to the contrary, I'll gladly
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take it) that no one has ever single-handedly written a full season of
|
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a dramatic, one-hour series. Even David Kelley often uses co-writers on
|
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many of his episodes of ER and Picket Fences. I have not yet set this out
|
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as a personal challenge, because I think you have to be open to what may
|
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come your way from other places. But it's something I'm keeping a vaguely
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interested eye on....
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 23:20:16 -0500
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Subject: Re: Attn Jms: More PKD in B5,
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Okay, I've just read a bunch more of these...okay, I admit it, you
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got me...I'm doing Philip K. Dick right down the line...and I'm also
|
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doing George Orwell right down the line...and I'm doing Lord of the
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Rings beat for beat...and Chalker...and...and Cherryh...and I'm doing
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a variation on the Bible, and King Arthur, and the history of Babylon,
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and the Idylls of the King....
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What? What's that you say? You can't be doing all of these right
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down the line, all at the same time? Sure I can. Because there IS no
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B5. There's a blank signal that registers in your brain, triggering the
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last thing you read, or the most important thing you read. It's a
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carefully rigged US Government psychological warfare experiment.
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I give up.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 23:20:37 -0500
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Subject: JMS: Alice Cooper influence o
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No, no nod there. (Again, same thing as my last note.) It's a
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longstanding device, used by therapists, it's a big part of the Synanon
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game (for those who know what that is)...Alice Cooper used that kind of
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structure, but so did Meatloaf in "Life Is A Lemon And I want My Money
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Back." (What about your childhood? What about love?) It's in many
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poems from the Beat Poetry period...it's a device with a long tradition.
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(Heck, read the book of Job sometime.)
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 21:36:46 -0500
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Subject: "Comes The Inquisitor" SPOILE
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There have been a great number of films and TV programs with one sort
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of interrogation scene or other; I'd commend "Closetland" for something
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else on this order.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 21:36:50 -0500
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Subject: Attn. JMS: AOL B5 site - SHIP1
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I believe that's an alien probe from "A Day in the Strife."
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 21:36:55 -0500
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Subject: Re: ATTN JMS: Explain editing
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Cameras don't run themselves; along with the cost of renting a second
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camera (we don't own them), there's the cost of the crew to operate it,
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camera operator per se, you double the cost of your people on the floorl.
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Er, floor.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 21:37:02 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS:The Quintara Marathon
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No, I've never read them. "I am wondering if they had any relation
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to B5." No, because that is called plagiarism.
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I'm not yelling at you, James, I'm just taking a moment here to make
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a general comment.
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Ahem. To everyone looking on.
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STOP ASKING ME IF I AM DOING ONE BOOK OR ANOTHER BY ANOTHER WRITER.
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That is called plagiarism. It's called theft. It's not a question
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that novel writers get, only TV writers. I know that's not your intent,
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but that's what it is. I didn't fight for five years to make this show to
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do somebody else's story. This is its own story. Nobody else's. It may
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not occur to you -- likely does not -- but this is a *supremely* offensive
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comment to any writer. It implies that one cannot come up with one's own
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story, one has to borrow or rip off from somebody else...again, a comment
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usually directed toward TV writers. I've never seen a novelist asked if
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he was doing somebody else's novel.
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I may sometimes nod in tribute to those works that have come before,
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but that's all it ever is.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 22:55:11 -0500
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Subject: ATTN JMS: Childhood -How was i
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Without going on overlong, as some of this has already been covered,
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it wasn't terrific as a kid. We moved every 6 months to a year, blowing
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from town to town (economic reasons), always the new kid, hence very few
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friends at any time. None that lasted more than that 6-12 months. No
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one town that constituted a home town. So I read a lot...novels, comics,
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you name it.
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Wasn't a nerd in high school; I just passed through their ranks
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unnoticed, like some kind of translucent Eisenglass figurine at the back
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of the room. I went back to the 20th reunion...to find that only one
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person sorta kinda remembered me. No one else.
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As for writing...I always knew that I'd be a writer, for as long as
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I can remember. Even as a kid I collected pens, had an interest in all
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things writing. The second that I was old enough to take typing classes,
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I did. Ended up taking 4 semesters of it, until by the time I left I was
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the fastest typist they'd ever produced, 'cause I knew full well I'd need
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that skill when I got going. In my senior year, having studied the style
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and structure of most of my favorite writers (I can do a lethal imitation
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of just about any writer's style), I decided, at 17, that I'd prepared
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enough...time to start Writing, and selling. And I did, right then.
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And I've never looked back.
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jms
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Date: 30 Oct 1995 22:55:17 -0500
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Subject: ATT JMS: Shorter episodes?
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I don't believe the length of the show has changed much more than a
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few seconds; if there are minutes missing, it's something happening at
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your end of the signal.
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jms
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Date: 31 Oct 1995 02:05:20 -0500
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Subject: JMS: A Opening Naration Quest
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If one simply makes up a costume for one's own use, I can't see any
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problem with that.
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jms
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