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### GUIDE ### [3][Background] [4][Synopsis] [5][Credits] [6][Episode
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_Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
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- [13]Notes - [14]JMS
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Overview
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The Nightwatch orders its members on Babylon 5 to target Delenn in
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an attempt to undermine Minbari actions during the recent crisis.
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Londo presents Refa with an ultimatum. [15]William Forward as Refa.
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[16]Paul Perri as The Sniper. [17]Don Stroud as Boggs. Kim Strauss
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as Lenann.
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[18]P5 Rating: [19]8.30
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Production number: 311
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Original air week: April 8, 1996
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Written by J. Michael Straczynski
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Directed by John Flinn III
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Watch For
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* [20]A wet floor.
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Backplot
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* In the old days of the Centauri Republic, poison was a common
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political tool.
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* Some humans learned the Minbari language from POWs during the war.
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* The rebirth ceremony in [21]"The Parliament of Dreams" was just a
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small part of a much larger renewal ceremony, traditionally
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performed in response to, or in anticipation of, a great change.
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Lennier believes B5's inhabitants are currently between two such
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changes.
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* The Minbari prophecy foretells fire and darkness after the two
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halves of the Minbari soul unite to combat the ancient enemy.
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Unanswered Questions
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* How many more Nightwatch members are still on the station?
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* Did Garibaldi's people get rid of the artificial intelligence?
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* What else is buried in B5's computer system? (At least one
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unfriendly thing, as shown in [22]"A Spider In the Web.")
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* Who does Lennier believe Delenn is fated for? Sheridan? If so, is
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that due to his observation of the growing relationship between
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Delenn and Sheridan, or due to something in the prophecy?
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* What was Delenn planning to give up and to tell someone at the
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ceremony?
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Analysis
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* Londo is playing a dangerous game with Refa; Refa will no doubt
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not take kindly to having his life threatened, and may retaliate
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against Londo either overtly or behind the scenes. Refa seems to
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have much of the royal court in his pocket while Londo's influence
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has waned since he broke off his association with Morden. Londo
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may find that he's bitten off more than he can chew.
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* However, the extent of the risk he's taking is a good indication
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that his realization of the dark nature of his former pact with
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Morden is complete; after this it will be very hard to turn back.
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It's interesting to note, though, that his basic goal hasn't
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changed, only his methods; note that he tries to dissuade Refa by
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talking about how dangerous the current Centauri policies are to
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their people. Londo is still first and foremost a patriot, not
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unlike G'Kar (at least until Kosh's revelation in [23]"Dust to
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Dust.")
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* Londo and Sinclair have something in common; Londo's poisoning of
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Refa bears a passing resemblance to Sinclair planting a
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transmitter in G'Kar's intestinal tract. Or rather, claiming to --
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which raises the question, did Londo _really_ poison Refa, or just
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say so? Like Sinclair, Londo might figure that the poison that
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doesn't exist can't be flushed out by doctors.
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* How did the Nightwatch get so much information about the Minbari,
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especially the details of Delenn's means of getting the war
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cruisers to Babylon 5? It may be as simple as Earth's normal
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intelligence channels, which, under Clark, presumably make at
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least some of their findings available to the Nightwatch.
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* Boggs' claim that the Minbari "think [Delenn]'s the second
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coming!" indicates that many among the Minbari agree with Delenn's
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assessment of herself as the chosen one, the vehicle of prophecy
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(see also [24]"Comes the Inquisitor.") Marcus also hints at this
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when he tells Delenn that his brother believed in the Rangers and
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in her; apparently her involvement with them is richer in
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symbolism than has previously been hinted at. How, and whether,
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that relates to the nature of Sinclair's involvement remains to be
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seen.
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* This isn't the first time Delenn has been referred to as "the
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second coming," at least indirectly. G'Kar quoted a passage from
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the Yeats poem of the same name in [25]"Revelations," a passage
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visually accompanied by Delenn's first look at her new appearance.
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Ominously, _that_ Second Coming refers to the Antichrist.
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* The Army of Light is now dressed in black uniforms. Whether that's
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an intentional contrast on Delenn's part, or simply her fashion
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sense, only time will tell.
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Notes
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* The voice of Sparky the Computer, the artificial intelligence, is
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Harlan Ellison. Sparky's name is visible both in the ending
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credits and, very briefly, as the last line item in the computer's
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status messages when it reboots.
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* The recording Londo shows Refa is slightly wrong; Morden was
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sitting when he mentioned Refa's name ([26]"Matters of Honor.")
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* The station logo on the wall in C&C has changed. It used to be a 5
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with a pair of olive branches overlaid, presumably signifying
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peace; now it's a 5 over a sword. The new logo can also be seen on
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the top of the conference room table in the scene with Delenn and
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the officers from the Minbari ships.
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* There's a minor continuity glitch involving the new logo. When the
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command staff walks into C&C in the final scene, the camera pans
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across the side of C&C to show the startled techs. The new logo is
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visible on the wall between two computer displays. But in the next
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shot of the same wall, there's no logo there.
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* "Dem Bones" was also sung in the final episode of "The Prisoner."
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* The formation in which one of the Starfuries peels away as the
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squadron performs a fly-by of the caskets is called the Missing
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Man formation. It is used today whenever a flyby is part of
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military honors at a funeral.
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* As Delenn and Marcus wait for Lenann, a "Wet Floor" sign can be
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seen in a corridor in the background.
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* Sheridan's closing line, "Babylon 5 is open for business," echoes
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Laurel Takashima's in [27]"The Gathering." In both cases it marked
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a new beginning for the station.
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* Sheridan's line to Ivanova, "My hypocrisy only goes so far," is a
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Mark Twain quote.
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* Don Stroud got his scar by jumping into a crowd of men with knives
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to stop a woman from being raped, according to former story editor
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Larry DiTillio.
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* The eulogy recited by Sheridan is the same one spoken by Ivanova
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in [28]"Soul Hunter."
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jms speaks
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* As it happens, episodes 8, 9 and 10 ("Messages," "Point of No
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Return," and "Severed Dreams") are kind of a triptych, linked at
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the hip and designed to pull together/blow out several major
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hanging plot threads once and for all, and send the show spinning
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off in an entirely different direction. The hardest one to write
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was 10, because it's a very emotional episode for the characters,
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and for me.
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And next is #11, which I begin to write this weekend...and #11,
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year three, is the *exact* midpoint of the 5 year story. This is
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the hump, the dead center of the journey. It took so long to get
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here, and suddenly we're halfway finished.
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* The episode is in the halfway mark, and that IS its significance,
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because it signals a major change.
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When we were midway through that episode, the halfway mark of the
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whole series, John, Doug and I were given these spiffy leather
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script books with silver inlaid initials by the crew, to
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commemmorate the event. It was really nifty.
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* _About Delenn and Lennier_
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As for Lennier...it's an unusual relationship, which you'll learn
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a LOT more about in "Ceremonies of Light and Dark." Which is all I
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can say for now.
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* I was kind of afraid that after the big Stuff Blowing Up Episode,
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anything afterward would be a let down because it couldn't have
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the same level of huge action (without killing everyone making the
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show). So the way to deal with that is to go in an entirely
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different direction; I was hoping that'd work, and glad that so
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far it has.
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* Earthgov sees B5 in much the way China now sees Taiwan. (Though on
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reflection that may not be the best metaphor....)
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* You only send an ambassador if you recognize something as
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legitimate, and EA will never recognize an independent B5.
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* _Why didn't G'Kar join in the ceremony?_
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Because he saw the actual co-running of security, and their
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duties, more important...that is physical, and concrete, and he
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feels is his surest way to win a seat in the new council. Actions,
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not ceremonies. He's very direct that way. (Which is pretty much
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what he said at the time.)
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* _Was this the same ceremony as in [29]"The Parliament of Dreams?"_
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Yes, it's the same ceremony; Delenn states as much in the episode.
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* _Was this one of Londo's chances for redemption?_
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No, this wasn't an opportunity for redemption. It would be flagged
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as much more important than this.
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* I don't think Londo feels he needs to be redeemed; his reasons as
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stated were quite sincere.
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* _Is Delenn being "destined for another" part of the prophecy?_
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It is now.
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* Certainly various sorts of love was at the core of the episode,
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and what we do for one another.
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But no, not all relationships have to end badly (despite my own
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general history in that regard).
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* _Is Lennier really satisfied with Delenn's destiny lying
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elsewhere?_
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Well, there was certainly that little catch in his voice, that
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hesitation, before he added "...in my heart."
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* "...note on Lennier: "a pure, higher love"? Pshaw, I've heard that
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before and seen the results in my own life. Are Minbari so
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different?"
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One would certainly hope so.
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And there are such different kinds of feelings even among humans;
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yes, you're right, often it doesn't work out that way...and
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sometimes it does.
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* I didn't see or intend any element of Lennier being racist; but
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there are definitely differences in culture and physiology between
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Minbari and humans. Minbari are very careful about personal space,
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and they don't like to be talked to a certain way. Marcus
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momentarily forgot himself, and acted inappropriately. Lennier
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corrected him.
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* _Delenn, Lenann, Lennier. What does "len" mean?_
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Basically, I went through and came up with common suffixes and
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prefixes for Minbari names, the way Russian names have
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combinations of certain letters (-ovna, -ova, -vich), and
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associated various backgrounds and castes and houses (fanes) to
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them. So you have Delenn, Rathenn, and others of similar name.
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* _About the slow buildup of the Delenn/Sheridan relationship_
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What you say about relationships is quite true. The slow process
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of getting to know somebody, the courtship, the parries and feints
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and false starts are 85% of the fun. It's the process of getting
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into somebody's mind, discovering who they are. And that's what
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these two are doing. It's an awful lot of fun.
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* The "romance angles" aren't "late additions," but you don't just
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leap into a romance right off. You couldn't have had the
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Delenn/Sheridan thing right in the beginning of year two, it had
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to be built, and grow gradually. Things are introduced as it is
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time for them to be introduced. The shadows weren't even named
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until season two, and didn't make their first appearance until
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late in season one. Is that a late addition?
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* I'm doing a lot to deepen up Marcus and Lennier, to let people see
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parts of them we might not have seen before. Everyone grows on the
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show; even at this point, compare Lennier to the wide-eyed
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innocent who first arrived at the station and couldn't even bring
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himself to look Delenn in the eyes.
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The computer voice, Sparky, wasn't really a nod of any kind to
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Hitchhiker's. (And 2001's HAL beat them to the punch a long time
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before that in any event.) No, I just figured, if the computer
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system had a glitch, what would it sound like? Answer...Harlan.
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* Actually, we had 3 more quickie scenes with the computer voice,
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but the ep ran long over time, and we were locked into some
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walk-and-talks where we couldn't make other trims.
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* _Is the name Sparky a reference to anything?_
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No, just figured it'd be a great name.
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* I also like the look between Marcus and Delenn as they stand in
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the customs area...he looks like he desperately wants to say more,
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and she like she desperately wants to hear it...but he turns and
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walks away, the moment lost.
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* _About female fans' reaction to Marcus_
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It's okay...so are most of the women who work in the editing bays
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at B5. The first few days of this season, as his stuff started
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coming in, one of them pulled me aside, and with hand firmly on my
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arm, to let me know she meant business, said, "Listen very
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carefully: I want to see a LOT more of Marcus."
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* _Was Marcus' beard different before?_
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Your memory is correct. Just before he did the first episode, he
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had to shave his full beard for some commercial audition. It
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hadn't grown all the way back, and we had to darken it down a bit
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to make it work. It's all back now.
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* _The Nightwatch members looked a lot more sinister than in the
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past. _
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I went just a little here for a kind of metaphorical approach;
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prior to this, Nightwatch folks have always been presented as
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starched, scrubbed, visually appealing...the face they wanted
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others to see. Now we see their true face, the scarred, dark,
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empty eyes, no longer pretending to hide. So we kinda cast in that
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direction.
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* _Boggs' scar wouldn't have moved like it did._
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The physical dynamics of the scar *would* have worked as seen,
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actually, mainly because that wasn't a piece of makeup, that's a
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real scar, and it does work that way.
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* The scar is real. He had some rough times a few years ago.
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(Actually, he also appeared with the scar as it's seen here in
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"TKO," as Garibaldi's corner man, though there it was hidden a
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bit.) He's still doing a lot of work though.
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(The funny thing was seeing the occasional comment on the nets
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saying how fake they thought the makeup looked, and why couldn't
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we manage to do something a bit more realistic looking?)
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* Actually, no, the song in "Ceremonies" was not intended as a
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Prisoner riff or homage of any kind. If the song originated with
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The Prisoner, that'd be one thing, but the song goes back a long,
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LONG ways before The Prisoner was even thought of.
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What happened, actually, was this...I'm a big fan of the Red Clay
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Ramblers, a terrific group that does sort of bluegrass but very
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offbeat. I was writing that episode, and I was playing with the
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torture aspect, and had one of their albums on. At just the moment
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I got to that scene, up came their rendition of "Ezekiel in the
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Valley of the Dry Bones." The notion was perfect, so I went back
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to the original version of the song, which is public domain
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(rather than their variation on it), and used it. Synchronicity.
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* _About the uniforms_
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I wanted it to have a crossed look, certain Minbari elements and
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textures, lines that are reminiscent of the Rangers, but also of
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Earthforce. Hence, the result.
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* There's a certain perverseness in making those on the side of
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light wear black uniforms. It reverses our expectations.
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* In general, it's my understanding that the cast really like the
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new uniforms. They're lighter, easier to move around in, cooler
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under the lights, and they like the styling, the rogue element to
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it, and the Minbari aspect.
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* _Couldn't Refa just have all his food and drink tested?_
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Of course the flip side of this is that you'd have to check every
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single thing you ate or drank every day, every week, for the rest
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of your natural life. Not the kind of life *I'd* like to live.
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[36]Last update: June 3, 1997
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