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- _Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
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- Overview
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- The Nightwatch orders its members on Babylon 5 to target Delenn in
- an attempt to undermine Minbari actions during the recent crisis.
- Londo presents Refa with an ultimatum. [15]William Forward as Refa.
- [16]Paul Perri as The Sniper. [17]Don Stroud as Boggs. Kim Strauss
- as Lenann.
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- [18]P5 Rating: [19]8.30
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- Production number: 311
- Original air week: April 8, 1996
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- Written by J. Michael Straczynski
- Directed by John Flinn III
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- * [20]A wet floor.
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- Backplot
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- * In the old days of the Centauri Republic, poison was a common
- political tool.
- * Some humans learned the Minbari language from POWs during the war.
- * The rebirth ceremony in [21]"The Parliament of Dreams" was just a
- small part of a much larger renewal ceremony, traditionally
- performed in response to, or in anticipation of, a great change.
- Lennier believes B5's inhabitants are currently between two such
- changes.
- * The Minbari prophecy foretells fire and darkness after the two
- halves of the Minbari soul unite to combat the ancient enemy.
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- Unanswered Questions
-
- * How many more Nightwatch members are still on the station?
- * Did Garibaldi's people get rid of the artificial intelligence?
- * What else is buried in B5's computer system? (At least one
- unfriendly thing, as shown in [22]"A Spider In the Web.")
- * Who does Lennier believe Delenn is fated for? Sheridan? If so, is
- that due to his observation of the growing relationship between
- Delenn and Sheridan, or due to something in the prophecy?
- * What was Delenn planning to give up and to tell someone at the
- ceremony?
-
- Analysis
-
- * Londo is playing a dangerous game with Refa; Refa will no doubt
- not take kindly to having his life threatened, and may retaliate
- against Londo either overtly or behind the scenes. Refa seems to
- have much of the royal court in his pocket while Londo's influence
- has waned since he broke off his association with Morden. Londo
- may find that he's bitten off more than he can chew.
- * However, the extent of the risk he's taking is a good indication
- that his realization of the dark nature of his former pact with
- Morden is complete; after this it will be very hard to turn back.
- It's interesting to note, though, that his basic goal hasn't
- changed, only his methods; note that he tries to dissuade Refa by
- talking about how dangerous the current Centauri policies are to
- their people. Londo is still first and foremost a patriot, not
- unlike G'Kar (at least until Kosh's revelation in [23]"Dust to
- Dust.")
- * Londo and Sinclair have something in common; Londo's poisoning of
- Refa bears a passing resemblance to Sinclair planting a
- transmitter in G'Kar's intestinal tract. Or rather, claiming to --
- which raises the question, did Londo _really_ poison Refa, or just
- say so? Like Sinclair, Londo might figure that the poison that
- doesn't exist can't be flushed out by doctors.
- * How did the Nightwatch get so much information about the Minbari,
- especially the details of Delenn's means of getting the war
- cruisers to Babylon 5? It may be as simple as Earth's normal
- intelligence channels, which, under Clark, presumably make at
- least some of their findings available to the Nightwatch.
- * Boggs' claim that the Minbari "think [Delenn]'s the second
- coming!" indicates that many among the Minbari agree with Delenn's
- assessment of herself as the chosen one, the vehicle of prophecy
- (see also [24]"Comes the Inquisitor.") Marcus also hints at this
- when he tells Delenn that his brother believed in the Rangers and
- in her; apparently her involvement with them is richer in
- symbolism than has previously been hinted at. How, and whether,
- that relates to the nature of Sinclair's involvement remains to be
- seen.
- * This isn't the first time Delenn has been referred to as "the
- second coming," at least indirectly. G'Kar quoted a passage from
- the Yeats poem of the same name in [25]"Revelations," a passage
- visually accompanied by Delenn's first look at her new appearance.
- Ominously, _that_ Second Coming refers to the Antichrist.
- * The Army of Light is now dressed in black uniforms. Whether that's
- an intentional contrast on Delenn's part, or simply her fashion
- sense, only time will tell.
-
- Notes
-
- * The voice of Sparky the Computer, the artificial intelligence, is
- Harlan Ellison. Sparky's name is visible both in the ending
- credits and, very briefly, as the last line item in the computer's
- status messages when it reboots.
- * The recording Londo shows Refa is slightly wrong; Morden was
- sitting when he mentioned Refa's name ([26]"Matters of Honor.")
- * The station logo on the wall in C&C has changed. It used to be a 5
- with a pair of olive branches overlaid, presumably signifying
- peace; now it's a 5 over a sword. The new logo can also be seen on
- the top of the conference room table in the scene with Delenn and
- the officers from the Minbari ships.
- * There's a minor continuity glitch involving the new logo. When the
- command staff walks into C&C in the final scene, the camera pans
- across the side of C&C to show the startled techs. The new logo is
- visible on the wall between two computer displays. But in the next
- shot of the same wall, there's no logo there.
- * "Dem Bones" was also sung in the final episode of "The Prisoner."
- * The formation in which one of the Starfuries peels away as the
- squadron performs a fly-by of the caskets is called the Missing
- Man formation. It is used today whenever a flyby is part of
- military honors at a funeral.
- * As Delenn and Marcus wait for Lenann, a "Wet Floor" sign can be
- seen in a corridor in the background.
- * Sheridan's closing line, "Babylon 5 is open for business," echoes
- Laurel Takashima's in [27]"The Gathering." In both cases it marked
- a new beginning for the station.
- * Sheridan's line to Ivanova, "My hypocrisy only goes so far," is a
- Mark Twain quote.
- * Don Stroud got his scar by jumping into a crowd of men with knives
- to stop a woman from being raped, according to former story editor
- Larry DiTillio.
- * The eulogy recited by Sheridan is the same one spoken by Ivanova
- in [28]"Soul Hunter."
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- jms speaks
-
- * As it happens, episodes 8, 9 and 10 ("Messages," "Point of No
- Return," and "Severed Dreams") are kind of a triptych, linked at
- the hip and designed to pull together/blow out several major
- hanging plot threads once and for all, and send the show spinning
- off in an entirely different direction. The hardest one to write
- was 10, because it's a very emotional episode for the characters,
- and for me.
- And next is #11, which I begin to write this weekend...and #11,
- year three, is the *exact* midpoint of the 5 year story. This is
- the hump, the dead center of the journey. It took so long to get
- here, and suddenly we're halfway finished.
- * The episode is in the halfway mark, and that IS its significance,
- because it signals a major change.
- When we were midway through that episode, the halfway mark of the
- whole series, John, Doug and I were given these spiffy leather
- script books with silver inlaid initials by the crew, to
- commemmorate the event. It was really nifty.
- * _About Delenn and Lennier_
- As for Lennier...it's an unusual relationship, which you'll learn
- a LOT more about in "Ceremonies of Light and Dark." Which is all I
- can say for now.
- * I was kind of afraid that after the big Stuff Blowing Up Episode,
- anything afterward would be a let down because it couldn't have
- the same level of huge action (without killing everyone making the
- show). So the way to deal with that is to go in an entirely
- different direction; I was hoping that'd work, and glad that so
- far it has.
- * Earthgov sees B5 in much the way China now sees Taiwan. (Though on
- reflection that may not be the best metaphor....)
- * You only send an ambassador if you recognize something as
- legitimate, and EA will never recognize an independent B5.
- * _Why didn't G'Kar join in the ceremony?_
- Because he saw the actual co-running of security, and their
- duties, more important...that is physical, and concrete, and he
- feels is his surest way to win a seat in the new council. Actions,
- not ceremonies. He's very direct that way. (Which is pretty much
- what he said at the time.)
- * _Was this the same ceremony as in [29]"The Parliament of Dreams?"_
- Yes, it's the same ceremony; Delenn states as much in the episode.
- * _Was this one of Londo's chances for redemption?_
- No, this wasn't an opportunity for redemption. It would be flagged
- as much more important than this.
- * I don't think Londo feels he needs to be redeemed; his reasons as
- stated were quite sincere.
- * _Is Delenn being "destined for another" part of the prophecy?_
- It is now.
- * Certainly various sorts of love was at the core of the episode,
- and what we do for one another.
- But no, not all relationships have to end badly (despite my own
- general history in that regard).
- * _Is Lennier really satisfied with Delenn's destiny lying
- elsewhere?_
- Well, there was certainly that little catch in his voice, that
- hesitation, before he added "...in my heart."
- * "...note on Lennier: "a pure, higher love"? Pshaw, I've heard that
- before and seen the results in my own life. Are Minbari so
- different?"
- One would certainly hope so.
- And there are such different kinds of feelings even among humans;
- yes, you're right, often it doesn't work out that way...and
- sometimes it does.
- * I didn't see or intend any element of Lennier being racist; but
- there are definitely differences in culture and physiology between
- Minbari and humans. Minbari are very careful about personal space,
- and they don't like to be talked to a certain way. Marcus
- momentarily forgot himself, and acted inappropriately. Lennier
- corrected him.
- * _Delenn, Lenann, Lennier. What does "len" mean?_
- Basically, I went through and came up with common suffixes and
- prefixes for Minbari names, the way Russian names have
- combinations of certain letters (-ovna, -ova, -vich), and
- associated various backgrounds and castes and houses (fanes) to
- them. So you have Delenn, Rathenn, and others of similar name.
- * _About the slow buildup of the Delenn/Sheridan relationship_
- What you say about relationships is quite true. The slow process
- of getting to know somebody, the courtship, the parries and feints
- and false starts are 85% of the fun. It's the process of getting
- into somebody's mind, discovering who they are. And that's what
- these two are doing. It's an awful lot of fun.
- * The "romance angles" aren't "late additions," but you don't just
- leap into a romance right off. You couldn't have had the
- Delenn/Sheridan thing right in the beginning of year two, it had
- to be built, and grow gradually. Things are introduced as it is
- time for them to be introduced. The shadows weren't even named
- until season two, and didn't make their first appearance until
- late in season one. Is that a late addition?
- * I'm doing a lot to deepen up Marcus and Lennier, to let people see
- parts of them we might not have seen before. Everyone grows on the
- show; even at this point, compare Lennier to the wide-eyed
- innocent who first arrived at the station and couldn't even bring
- himself to look Delenn in the eyes.
- The computer voice, Sparky, wasn't really a nod of any kind to
- Hitchhiker's. (And 2001's HAL beat them to the punch a long time
- before that in any event.) No, I just figured, if the computer
- system had a glitch, what would it sound like? Answer...Harlan.
- * Actually, we had 3 more quickie scenes with the computer voice,
- but the ep ran long over time, and we were locked into some
- walk-and-talks where we couldn't make other trims.
- * _Is the name Sparky a reference to anything?_
- No, just figured it'd be a great name.
- * I also like the look between Marcus and Delenn as they stand in
- the customs area...he looks like he desperately wants to say more,
- and she like she desperately wants to hear it...but he turns and
- walks away, the moment lost.
- * _About female fans' reaction to Marcus_
- It's okay...so are most of the women who work in the editing bays
- at B5. The first few days of this season, as his stuff started
- coming in, one of them pulled me aside, and with hand firmly on my
- arm, to let me know she meant business, said, "Listen very
- carefully: I want to see a LOT more of Marcus."
- * _Was Marcus' beard different before?_
- Your memory is correct. Just before he did the first episode, he
- had to shave his full beard for some commercial audition. It
- hadn't grown all the way back, and we had to darken it down a bit
- to make it work. It's all back now.
- * _The Nightwatch members looked a lot more sinister than in the
- past. _
- I went just a little here for a kind of metaphorical approach;
- prior to this, Nightwatch folks have always been presented as
- starched, scrubbed, visually appealing...the face they wanted
- others to see. Now we see their true face, the scarred, dark,
- empty eyes, no longer pretending to hide. So we kinda cast in that
- direction.
- * _Boggs' scar wouldn't have moved like it did._
- The physical dynamics of the scar *would* have worked as seen,
- actually, mainly because that wasn't a piece of makeup, that's a
- real scar, and it does work that way.
- * The scar is real. He had some rough times a few years ago.
- (Actually, he also appeared with the scar as it's seen here in
- "TKO," as Garibaldi's corner man, though there it was hidden a
- bit.) He's still doing a lot of work though.
- (The funny thing was seeing the occasional comment on the nets
- saying how fake they thought the makeup looked, and why couldn't
- we manage to do something a bit more realistic looking?)
- * Actually, no, the song in "Ceremonies" was not intended as a
- Prisoner riff or homage of any kind. If the song originated with
- The Prisoner, that'd be one thing, but the song goes back a long,
- LONG ways before The Prisoner was even thought of.
- What happened, actually, was this...I'm a big fan of the Red Clay
- Ramblers, a terrific group that does sort of bluegrass but very
- offbeat. I was writing that episode, and I was playing with the
- torture aspect, and had one of their albums on. At just the moment
- I got to that scene, up came their rendition of "Ezekiel in the
- Valley of the Dry Bones." The notion was perfect, so I went back
- to the original version of the song, which is public domain
- (rather than their variation on it), and used it. Synchronicity.
- * _About the uniforms_
- I wanted it to have a crossed look, certain Minbari elements and
- textures, lines that are reminiscent of the Rangers, but also of
- Earthforce. Hence, the result.
- * There's a certain perverseness in making those on the side of
- light wear black uniforms. It reverses our expectations.
- * In general, it's my understanding that the cast really like the
- new uniforms. They're lighter, easier to move around in, cooler
- under the lights, and they like the styling, the rogue element to
- it, and the Minbari aspect.
- * _Couldn't Refa just have all his food and drink tested?_
- Of course the flip side of this is that you'd have to check every
- single thing you ate or drank every day, every week, for the rest
- of your natural life. Not the kind of life *I'd* like to live.
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