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### GUIDE ### [3][Background] [4][Synopsis] [5][Credits] [6][Episode
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_Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
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- [13]Notes - [14]JMS
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Overview
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Second season premiere. As a new commander assumes control of the
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station, a renegade Minbari warship arrives, threatening trouble.
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[15]Robert Foxworth as General Hague.
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(Originally titled "Chrysalis, Part II")
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Sub-genre: Intrigue
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[16]P5 Rating: [17]7.92
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Production number: 201
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Original air date: November 2, 1994
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Written by J. Michael Straczynski
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Directed by Janet Greek
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Backplot
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* During the Earth-Minbari War, Captain John Sheridan managed to
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score Earth's only real victory, destroying the Minbari flagship
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Black Star and several cruisers by mining the asteroid belt
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between Jupiter and Mars with fusion bombs. This earned him the
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name "Starkiller" among the Minbari warrior caste, as well as
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their continuing hatred.
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* The Minbari population has been slowly declining for two millenia.
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* The Grey Council ordered the end of the war after capturing
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Sinclair. He was the first human to have direct contact with the
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Council. Their original intent was to interrogate him and find out
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about Earth's defenses, but upon scanning him, they found that
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Minbari souls were somehow being reborn in human bodies. Since
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Minbari religion teaches that all the souls of the Minbari form a
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greater whole, continuing the war would mean, in effect, killing
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part of themselves. Realizing that the knowledge that this was
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happening to Minbari souls would prove destabilizing to society --
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presumably some would blame humans for the shrinking population,
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not to mention how the _humans_ would react to the news -- they
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decided to keep their discovery a secret, and protect it with
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lethal force if necessary.
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* After the suicide of the warleader Sineval (cf. [18]"Legacies") at
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the end of the war, the crew of his ship, the Trigati, defied the
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surrender order and vanished into exile for nearly twelve years.
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* Before her service on Babylon 5, Ivanova served under Sheridan at
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the transfer point on Io.
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Unanswered Questions
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* How did a scan reveal that Minbari souls were being reborn in
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humans?
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* Will the crew of the Trigati be considered martyrs by the warrior
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caste in spite of their death at Minbari hands?
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* Why did President Clark already know why the war ended? (see
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[19]jms speaks, and comic [20]"In Darkness Find Me")
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Analysis
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* The presence of the unnamed Grey Council member on Babylon 5
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implies that the Council knew Delenn would disobey its order, and
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further, that they know the purpose of the chrysalis. In fact,
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there seems to be more division within the Council than they want
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to admit (cf. [21]"Babylon Squared") since one of the
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Councilmembers gave Delenn the triluminary even though the council
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had advised her to wait.
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* Sinclair was the first human to have contact with the Grey
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Council, but there's still ample evidence that that's not the only
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thing unique about him. Delenn has hinted that she believes he has
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a great destiny (cf. [22]"Grail" and [23]"A Voice in the
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Wilderness, part 2") and even in this episode, Lennier says, "A
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change is coming. Sinclair was the first. There will be others,"
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implying that something has happened to him that hasn't yet
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happened to anyone else.
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* In fact, the Council may have identified a specific Minbari soul
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in Sinclair, perhaps the reincarnation of a great figure in their
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history; that would explain why they're so interested in him in
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particular.
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* It's possible that the information about Minbari souls isn't even
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known to all of the Grey Council. When Delenn visited the Council
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(in [24]"Babylon Squared") she spoke of the prophecy as the reason
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for ending the war, and some of the other Councilmembers weren't
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sure that humans were the ones the prophecy referred to. If they
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had seen whatever scan results convinced Delenn that humans had
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Minbari souls, they presumably would have argued with her about
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those results rather than a vague interpretation of the prophecy.
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* The only thing that looked remotely like a scan in Sinclair's
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recollection of his capture on the Line was when one of the
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Minbari held a triluminary up to him. (cf. [25]"And the Sky Full
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of Stars") It's at least plausible that the triluminary was
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instrumental in determining that Sinclair had a reincarnated
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Minbari soul. If its function is indeed on such a spiritual level,
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the fact that it was part of Delenn's machine (cf.
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[26]"Chrysalis") suggests that her transformation may be as much
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mental as physical. This interpretation of the triluminary's
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function is supported by the comic issue [27]"In Darkness Find
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Me."
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* Sheridan's comment that he was the _late_ president's choice to
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replace Sinclair is odd; why would Santiago want someone who would
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be sure to anger the Minbari and increase tensions?
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Notes
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* The Agamemnon was also a ship in the British fleet, at one point
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commanded by Lord Nelson (best known for the Battle of Trafalgar.)
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* Possible factual error: Sheridan said the Dalai Lama ate dinner
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with him, implying an evening meal. But Buddhist monks, including
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the Dalai Lama, don't eat after noon. It is, of course, possible
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that Buddhist practices have changed between the twentieth and
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twenty-third centuries, or that "dinner" wasn't meant to imply an
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evening meal, but rather the last meal of the day.
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jms speaks
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* As for Chrysalis, there's about 8 to 10 days in "story time"
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between it and the events in "Points." The next few shows track in
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real-time.
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* _Why do the Minbari have a grudge against Sheridan? It was
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wartime, after all._
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They don't much like the way he did it, which was rather sneaky.
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My sense is that the Minbari have something of a superiority
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complex; the idea of being beaten, even briefly, by a technically
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inferior race is going to grate on them. Also, bear in mind, that
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the military caste has not been fully informed about WHY they were
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ordered to surrender...so there's a great deal of animosity just
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barely submerged there, which is pointed at the only real human
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they know from the war...because he cost them.
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* Heads definitely rolled (figuratively speaking) in the Minbari
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warrior caste after the Black Star incident. They allowed
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themselves to get cocky, and didn't do a proper job, which was
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more than an embarrassment to them.
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* It kinda bothered their sense of superiority; also, their sense of
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honor lies more in the direction of one-to-one combat, rather than
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mining something as a trap. Consider it the way British troops did
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toward American revolutionary fighters who hid behind trees and
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used guerilla tactics rather than fighting the way the British
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*wanted* them to fight, out in the open, in nice, easily shot-at
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rows....
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* We will be changing the main title sequence after "Revelations"
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airs to include the new version of Delenn. Would be silly of us to
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include the new version in episodes prior to her unveiling.
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* The fact that Minbari believe in souls does not make it so.
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If a story is rigorously SF, but some of the people who inhabit
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the story have belief systems, does that automatically invalidate
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it as SF?
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I don't think it's the position of this show to state whether or
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not a belief system is true but rather to explore the actions of
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those who THINK it's true; not to resolve arguments, but to start
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arguments. (See "Believers" for more on this one.)
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What the characters believe is subjective, and is their business.
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Or, as Sheridan says in a later episode, "I'm not saying what I'm
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saying. I'm not saying what I'm thinking. For that matter, I'm not
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even THINKING what I'm thinking."
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* This is correct. Sheridan did NOT tell President Clark about the
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Minbari soul situation. Clark already knew about it. Sheridan's
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line is, "I spoke with the president. He is the only other person
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who knows why the Minbari surrendered." Also, in the first issue
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of the comic, this prior knowledge on Clark's part is clear as
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well.
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* BTW, and just for the heck of it...the line about paying off karma
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at an accellerated rate is something Kathryn has been muttering
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for ages; I popped it into the script for fun.
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* Sheridan asked what kind of scanners the fighters were using
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because he couldn't figure out why they were picking up the
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Minbari fighters. He wanted to be sure nobody had snuck by some
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kind of new tech. Once he knew they were the same tech as before,
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he knew something screwy was up.
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* Correct above; Sheridan says, quite specifically, in the
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conference room with Ivanova after the Grey Council guy is gone,
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"they used some kind of stealth technology WE'VE NEVER BEEN ABLE
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TO BREAK." It's not a matter of old or cheaper tech; we just
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haven't broken their technology yet.
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* And yes, ships can sit in hyperspace (something also mentioned by
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Laurel Takashima in the pilot, "If I were the Vorlons, I'd have a
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warship standing by in hyperspace just waiting to attack."
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* Basically, I decided to name the EA Lounge "Earhart's" because she
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is an important figure in aviation history, and I wanted a 40s art
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deco style to the place, down to big band music, and it fit
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perfectly. There have been more women aviators, civilian and
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elsewhere, than we know, particularly during WW II at home, and
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they deserve recognition.
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* The Earthforce lounge (EA personnel only) is Earhart's, named
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after the famed aviator.
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(Consequently, as tradition, only swing or big-band music is ever
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played in Earhart's.)
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Yes, we brightened things up a notch, but only a notch, because we
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discovered that a lot of the good work being done on the sets and
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the costumes wasn't being seen because we were too dark. So we
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went up about one f-stop, but at the same time began using more
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shadows, textures and colors, so the show has a denser look to it.
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* As noted elsewhere...we have previously established that the Dome
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is periodically on Standby Mode, when the system is performing
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autmoated (automated) backups, routine maintenance, that sort of
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thing. It was in "Midnight," when Garibaldi informs Ivanova that
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that's where he likes to go, when it's on standby, and is quiet.
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It was in "Sky," when Ivanova asks Tech 1 if there are any more
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ships due in for a while, is told no, and she puts her feet up on
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the console, nobody else around.
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Also, B5 tends to run on human cycles of day and night, something
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we try to reflect in the sets and effects, showing the Garden
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bright during day times, and dark during night stuff (as around
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dinner time in the Fresh Air Restaurant). Maintaining such cycles
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has been found to be critical in these kinds of environments.
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The standby mode only happens every 36-48 hours, for about an
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hour. Most departments also have their own control areas, using
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C&C mainly when command personnel are required. In addition, there
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are folks monitoring C&C, and if anything *should* happen, someone
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could be there within seconds.
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* The Hyperion was built before the EM war, and survived.
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The Agamemnon, a much superior ship, was built afterward. Sheridan
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was not commanding the Aggy during the war. It's one of the best
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ships we've got, almost the equivilent of an aircraft carrier or
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battleship, and it took a lot of seniority and work to get it.
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* Yes, you will see the Agamemnon again.
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* Nothing has been dumbed down or simplified; in a first season
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episode (in other words, the first episode of any given season),
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you get a lot of sampling. If the show is obscure, or there's too
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much prior knowledge required to get into it...they go away fast.
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So there was a bit more straightforward exposition in this episode
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in order to avoid scaring off new viewers.
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And I stated, some time ago, that this was a lighter episode
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because it's sandwiched between two very intense episodes,
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"Chrysalis" and "Revelations," and I think you need some relief
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there.
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And as Walker noted, there are times when the dome is on standby,
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as noted in "Midnight." The systems every 36 hours or so go
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through a period of self-repair and maintainance for an hour or
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two; if anything comes out of the gate or into local space,
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someone's there within seconds.
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* I wouldn't look for too much of Garibaldi in the first episode; he
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was shot in the back...my feeling is that, TV logic to the
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contrary, it takes TIME to recover from that. Consequently, this
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will take a few episodes to get even remotely back on track.
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* Yes, the quote definitely comes from Lincoln. I hated the old
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Babcom logo, so we dumped it.
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* Re: yankeecentrism...we always strive for balance. Yes, he quoted
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Lincoln, but he also noted that on his 21st birthday, he flew to
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see the new Dalai Lama being sworn in.
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* Thanks. If you think PoD was a "wham," then I can't wait to see
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your reaction to "Revelations."
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Interestingly enough, I figured on giving Sheridan a tie to the
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Civil War through his ancestor, General Philip Sheridan (sometimes
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called "Little Phil" by Lincoln). Afterward, I discovered that
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Bruce is a big civil war buff, so the Lincoln stuff worked very
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well.
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One of my favorite sequences from this episode is the stuff aboard
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the Minbari cruiser during the Battle of the Line; the shots
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surrounding Delenn and the other Minbari gives it a very god-like
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aspect. Just wonderful.
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* Yes, Sheridan is descended from Gen. Philip John Sheridan of the
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Union Army.
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* Sheridan is a soldier. A soldier is told, in wartime, THIS is your
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enemy. You kill the enemy or your enemy kills you. Afterward,
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you're in the same position American soldiers were in after the
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end of WW II when it came time to reconcile with the Germans and
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the Japanese. It can sometimes be very awkward...and sometimes
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reconciliation takes a while.
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* For what it's worth, Sheridan is neither a "space cowboy" nor a
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"gung ho type." This description has nothing to do with the
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character, and I'm not quite sure where you got this. Certainly I
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never said or implied it.
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Captain John Sheridan is a war hero, of sorts; he squeaked out the
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only real victory of the Earth/Minbari War. (Which means the
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Minbari don't generally like him a lot.) He did what he did
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because that's his job. He's a professional soldier. For the last
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two years, he's been commanding the Agamemmnon, a high-visibility
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Earthforce starship on deep patrol. As such, he has had to learn
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to work with a number of different races and species.
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In some ways, his character is somewhat more well-rounded than was
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the case with Sinclair, over whom a general sense of doom often
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seemed to hang. Sheridan is often very thoughtful and
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introspective; at other times, he can be just a bit eccentric; he
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leads by respecting those who work under him, and givingthem room
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to grow; like any career officer, he HATES the bureaucracy with a
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passion, and this is the one thing that can drive him nuts; he
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knows that commanding B5 is a great opportunity, but he also knows
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that his presence brings certain complications with it, and he's
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very ambivilant about that aspect; he's the son of a diplomatic
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envoy who disappeared on his 21st birthday, running off to see (of
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all things) the new Dali Lama being installed; he has a very
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easygoing manner, and a great sense of humor. He quickly re-forms
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a friendship with Ivanova, for whom he has great respect and
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professional admiration. (For a time she served under him at Io.)
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He is, actually, a fascinating and intriguing character with a lot
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of different shadings...none of which have *anything* to do with
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being a "space cowboy" or "gung-ho type."
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Anyway...point being...when it was announced that there was going
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to be a new Lieutenant-Commander, a number of folks went ballistic
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and said the show would now be ruined. I said, in essence,
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look...I created Takashima; I can create an interesting character
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to replace her. And I thunk up Ivanova, who according to the
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rec.arts.b5 poll is the most popular character on the show. When
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it was announced that Sinclair would be STAYING with the show,
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after the pilot, a number of folks said this was bad, he was
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wooden, he stunk, get him off...and ended up being very enamored
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of him. My only reply now about Bruce...give him, and me, a
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chance. I genuinely think you will like what you see a *lot*.
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In the course of the first season, Ivanova, Garibaldi, G'Kar,
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Londo, Delenn, others...they've exploded into strong characters.
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You need an equally strong character designed to hold his own, and
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be memorable, in that august company. Sheridan was designed
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knowing we had a much elevated playing field around the character.
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Obviously, clearly, and irrefutably, an actor brings a *lot* to
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any role. No question. But it tends to begin with what is created.
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I've seen it said here, repeatedly, that none of the characters
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are uninteresting; they all have lives, and agendas, that make
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them fascinating to watch: Londo, Morden, G'Kar, Delenn,
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Garibaldi, Ivanova...what those characters are came out of my
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head, in terms of who tey are, what they say, what they believe,
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where they came from and where they're going. Why would I invent a
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new character that was any less involving, or interesting, or
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multifaceted? Particularly knowing that he's going to be a central
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character?
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Speaking as someone who's been in fandom a long, long time, I know
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there is always a tendency for panic, to assume the apocalpse is
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upon us, that something is never going to be the same again. I
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heard this after the Enterprise was destroyed in "The Search for
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Spock." I've heard this a lot over the years. It's generally
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over-reaction and worry before anyone has even seen a frame of
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film.
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Bottom line being...wait and see, then judge. I've tried very hard
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not to let you down, and I think so far I haven't done so...I have
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no intention of starting now. Bruce is doing an absolutely
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*brilliant* job as Captain Sheridan, bringing a thoughtfulness and
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intensity and charm and intensity to the part that is a joy to
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behold. Give him a chance.
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* Alas, I wrote my note about Bruce around 1 or 2 in the morning,
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and I meant to balance out *intensity* with *intelligence*, but my
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brain saw the first letters i-n-t-e, and vapor-locked.
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* _How important to the Arc is Sheridan?_
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How critical was Aragorn to the storyline of Lord of the Rings?
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* The way in which Sheridan comes into the storyline is *absolutely*
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consistent with everything that has come before, and everything
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that follows.
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* Sheridan was never on the original list [to command B5] because at
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that time when the EA needed Minbari financing for B5, they knew
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it'd piss off the Minbari to have it there, so he was never
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considered for the post at that time.
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* "Sounds like a formula to really PO the Minbari."
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Yup.
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* Just to clarify: in Soul Hunter we set in place the question of
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what these things are, and do not resolve that question. Dr.
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Franklin offers that with the correct technology, it might be
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possible to make (for lack of a better term) a clone of someone's
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neural patterns, copy his personality and memories into a storage
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device...but also dismisses the notion of soul stealing.
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I traffic in ambiguity.
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* In a sense, yes, "Believers" now enters the arc...but so does
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"Soul Hunter," in a big way. Replay Lennier's talk to Sheridan and
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Ivanova, then play Delenn's conversation with Sinclair and the
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Soul Hunter in that episode, and suddenly a lot of elements begin
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to intersect.
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* Re: you're noticing the line, "You talk like a Minbari" from
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Neroon to Sinclair in "Legacies"....yup. Sometimes this stuff is
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in broad strokes, sometimes in teeny little things like that. Also
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ties in even further with where Sinclair goes.
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* Note that Lennier says he wishes he could have told them (us) the
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*rest* of the prophecy...and there's definitely more to Sinclair,
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as will be seen later in the season. Remember, the Grey Council
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never tells anyone the whole truth (note how Kalain asks that
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question upon being told that Sinclair is just an ambassador).
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* There really wasn't/isn't time in PoD to get into the angst
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everyone has over Sinclair leaving (though some of that is given
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to Sheridan, oddly enough). But it WILL get brought up in
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subsequent episodes, especially from Garibaldi.
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* Sinclair was the first human the Minbari (or at least the Grey
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Council) had ever met, having come this far for the final victory.
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The Earth Explorer vessel was part of a military fleet that
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encountered a Minbari convoy, there was a miscommunication, a
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misperceived threat, and our ships opened fire. There was no
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person-to-person contact.
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* Sure, you could blind-fire at a Minbari cruiser, but it's pretty
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heavily armored. And while you're shooting at it, you're not only
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being hit by cruiser blasts, but the several dozen Minbari
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fighters coming in behind you. And shooting at a sublight
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traveling fighter by eye would absolutely never work. It *has* to
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be computer guided.
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(BTW, for the sharp of eye...if you go back and sill-step through
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some of the cockpit screen shots in "Sky," you'll note that on the
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tac screen in Sinclair's cockpit it says something to the effect
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of "Unable to lock-onto target.")
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* Yes, you can go in and shoot at a Minbari *cruiser* visually...but
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the reality is that any long-range weapon will be intercepted by
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targeting fire, and if you get up real close and personal...well,
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actually, you *can't* get up real close and personal because, as
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Mitchell learned in "Sky," you get shot by the fighters.
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What the fighters tend to remain engaged with are the Minbari
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fighters, which are *incredibly* fast...much too fast to target
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visually.
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And believe me, as Sheridan stated, Earth's been *trying* to break
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the stealth tech for a while, just hasn't been able to.
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* Re: [Robert] Foxworth...he was someone we spoke to in case Bruce
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turned out not to be available, and we liked him instantly, and he
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liked the show. So for good luck, we had him come in for this
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role, which may appear again. He's a terrific actor.
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* _What were all those ribbons on General Hague's chest awarded for?_
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I'll have to check, but probably most of those medals are for
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actions during the Earth/Minbari War, and during the Dilgar War.
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I'll have to check to get anything more specific than that.
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* Well, my thought at the time, and I probably should've put this
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into dialogue in retrospect, was that there's a window about every
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36 hours when the entire C&C system goes through self-maintainance
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for about half an hour, backing things up, doing self-repair,
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filing logs with Earth Central, that sort of thing. They normally
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pick a slow period in docking, and any other routine stuff is
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handled through the backup C&C on the other side of the station
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axis (you can see it directly above the docking bay when the
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normal C&C is directly below it).
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At first I'd considered putting that in Ivanova's mouth when she
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says "Of all the time he could've picked," but then the reveal of
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where he was and what he was doing fell flat; it needed to be a
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surprise or it lost its impact and the humor. Ah, well....
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* It has been established, in prior episodes, that there are brief
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periods when C&C is in "standby mode," during which time no ships
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are due, the station is in "night" cycle, and the operational
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equipment in C&C goes through routine backup and maintenance. In
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"Midnight on the Firing Line," our first episode, Ivanova is told
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by Garibaldi that Sinclair is in C&C when it's in standby mode
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because he likes the quiet during those brief periods (usually
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only about an hour or so); in "Chrysalis," Ivanova asks Tech 1 if
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any more ships are due in for a while, is told no, and she puts
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her feet up on the console, watching the news, with the place
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pretty much deserted.
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This isn't the bridge of a starship; this is mainly a center of
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operations for docking and other station activities requiring
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command personnel. Every separate department -- environmental,
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other resources -- has its own separate control center, with lots
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of redundency.
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In addition, there's always somebody monitoring stuff as it comes
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through, so if there *were* any kind of problem, there'd be
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somebody on site in C&C in thirty seconds. Basically, we're
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talking an hour or so once every 36 to 48 hours. I could've
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explained this in dialogue, but it would've taken the edge off the
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revelation and humor, and I figured we'd done this before enough
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times that it wouldn't be an issue.
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* Just as an advisory...the woman who spoke up in PoD (the tech who
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told Sheridan that Security wanted him) is not a Tech 1
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replacement; she was there just for that one episode. We have a
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number of folks floating through that area now, because logically
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you would have rotating crews.
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* A vibe shower would theoretically use sonic waves (in combination
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with other elements, like disinfecting lighting, as seen in
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"Signs") to remove dirt and kill bacteria.
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That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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* Delenn staying while Sinclair goes is part of WHY Sinclair goes
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and Delenn stays. It's absolutely part and parcel.
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* Delenn had intended to tell Sinclair much about the soul issue
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before entering the chrysalis.
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* It's always interesting, if you have one character upon whom
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everyone else leans, even depends, to *remove* that character for
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a time. Because then those characters have to *react*...to either
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stand or fall on their own. It shakes things up a little...and
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vastly intensifies the characters.
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* I'm going to test myself, and see how much I can say without
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saying too much.
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You have X-number of characters. They're all in the same place.
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You're trying to tell a story that has a great deal of scale, and
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covers all kinds of worlds, changing politics, alliances, on and
|
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on. The question becomes, how do you *illustrate* that? To use a
|
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line from the original Trek, when a mob guy is brought aboard the
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Enterprise, he says later, "All I saw was a room and five guys."
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So now you start saying, "Hmmm...what if I remove Character A from
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the chessboard, and move him over *here* for a while? He wasn't
|
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going to be doing much for the next little bit anyway. And we
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won't just "deal" with that change, it's part of the story...it
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broadens out the story to include Place A *and* Place B. It has
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repercussions down the road. It comes up again in the future.
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Elements from Place B now become known on Place A. Character A may
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even make an occasional reappearance to keep us even more closely
|
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connected with Place B, which is necessary because Place B is
|
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very, very important."
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What we have in mind here isn't quite comparable to anything
|
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that's been done before. The character will still be alive. The
|
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character will continue to have an impact on the story. The
|
|
character will be spotted from time to time. The character will
|
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continue to show up in the comic and the novels. And through this
|
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move, you have the benefit of substantially opening up the B5
|
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universe, you help create the realignment of characters and
|
|
loyalties that was anticipated for this season, and it helps kick
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over the tables, as we did in Chrysalis.
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Just a slight refinement on the argument.
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* I can probably answer your question a little better after you've
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seen the second episode of this season. For now, let's just say
|
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this: in working out the story for year two, Sinclair's main line
|
|
of connection was to the Minbari. But the Minbari storyline was
|
|
diminishing in ways onnected to the war in year two; obviously we
|
|
all know what is on the upswing in year two, certain dark forces.
|
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I needed someone who has a connection to *that* side of the story
|
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to personalize it, and Sheridan brings that connection to the mix,
|
|
although he doesn't know it yet.
|
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* The Battle of the Line and the hole in Sinclair's mind was always
|
|
intended as the entry point or trigger to the story. It's like
|
|
Frodo being given the Ring in LoTR. The story isn't about that,
|
|
that's how we get INTO it. Frankly, there's no way you can sustain
|
|
that one element for five years, nor did we ever intend to do so.
|
|
The only difference in the resolution of that aspect is this: we
|
|
had originally intended to resolve the missing 24 hours, and the
|
|
Battle of the Line, by episode four, season two. We've simply
|
|
moved it up 3 eps to the first episode. Because new players are
|
|
coming onto the field, in the form of the Shadowmen, and other
|
|
forces, and we now have to begin turning our attention to new
|
|
mysteries.
|
|
* "Changes are coming; Sinclair was the first, there will be
|
|
others." He was referring to more changes coming.
|
|
* Sheridan, or more specifically the need for someone *like*
|
|
Sheridan began to get through clearly toward the latter part of
|
|
last season, as I began planning out season two's progression, and
|
|
kept looking at elements of the story and trying to find ways to
|
|
get Sinclair into the heart of them. They felt contrived, for the
|
|
most part; and the other characters, like Londo and G'Kar and
|
|
Delenn, were *really* moving forward in a big way. The role of
|
|
Sinclair was becoming primarily that of a "problem solver," and
|
|
when that happens, a sort of glass bell falls down around the
|
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character, and you can't do much with him.
|
|
So what the writer has to do is break that bell in one way or
|
|
another; do something totally unexpected to him, and bring in
|
|
someone who has a direct, personal connection with the storyline
|
|
emerging in season two, so it's not contrived or forced.
|
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* All the characters are unique; there seems to be this bone-headed
|
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notion, that I frequently run into, of "Well, Ivanova's just
|
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Takashima renamed," or "Sheridan's story is just the same as
|
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Sinclair's, same guy just renamed." They're *not* and never have
|
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been. The story of one does not devlove automatically upon the
|
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other. If you make a change, it's because you have something
|
|
better in mind...otherwise why make it?
|
|
* I said, from the very beginning, that once the series got rolling,
|
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no single primary question could be allowed to go more than about
|
|
one season before answering it, otherwise you get into a
|
|
frustrating Twin Peaks situation where *nothing* is resolved.
|
|
Basically, the events begun in "Chrysalis" bleed over into three
|
|
episodes; the Battle of the Line answers were initially only a
|
|
couple of episodes further down in my outline, about episode #3.
|
|
Making the change, for one thing, allowed me to move that
|
|
storyline forward to episode #1, blow through it and get the story
|
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moving in year two faster, rather than delaying further with loose
|
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threads from season one.
|
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* The idea of a Chrysalis II went by the boards once I really got
|
|
into the script, and realized that C1 had tipped over too many
|
|
tables to even HOPE to resolve them in one follow-up episode. So
|
|
the threads yanked in C1 will be paid off over several episodes,
|
|
hence no C2; the first episode of year two is "Points of
|
|
Departure."
|
|
* _What about Catherine Sakai?_
|
|
This is the one thread that I'm still trying to decide about.
|
|
* They didn't get married. Wasn't time, and his new posting
|
|
precluded that.
|
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* We're dedicated to improving all of these elements on a regular
|
|
basis; CGI, sets, directing, lighting, name it.
|
|
The music will change every year, to get in sync with where the
|
|
season is going; the tone and tenor and mood will shift.
|
|
Re: the narration...last year, Michael had the benefit of being
|
|
able to see the sequence prior to reading the narration, and
|
|
reading with the images. That was when we were shooting in July to
|
|
air in January. In this case, shooting in August to air in
|
|
November, Bruce had to wing it, without any images for reference,
|
|
just text. Now that we've got the opening completed (and we
|
|
weren't satisfied with it or done tinkering with it until a few
|
|
days before delivery), we'll probably let him do it again with the
|
|
visuals before him, so he knows what he's reading to, since it'll
|
|
have a *big* impact on how he delivers the stuff.
|
|
* There's a reason for this: due to time constraints, we have to get
|
|
Bruce to do the narration *without* having the images in front of
|
|
him; he had no way of knowing where beats would go with the
|
|
images, or what would be under it (since we were still putting the
|
|
new opening together), so we had to artifically build in pauses
|
|
when we did the final transfer (as opposed to year one, where we
|
|
had the images assembled long before we had Michael do the
|
|
narration). What took forever was that 5 fade/dissolve/wipe, which
|
|
just killed us time-wise, but is spiffy to look at.
|
|
Now that it's all together, we plan to have Bruce re-do the
|
|
narration with the images in front of him, so he can respond
|
|
naturally and make it flow, the way he would've been able to do
|
|
had we had the material ready in time.
|
|
* Re: the theme music...to me, one is neither worse nor better than
|
|
the other. They're *different*, and meant to convey different
|
|
moods and themes. Each year it'll change. This year was heavy on
|
|
strings and brass; next year it'll be heavy on percussion. The
|
|
main theme will be reinterpreted and interpolated in different
|
|
ways. In the B5 universe, change is the only constant.
|
|
* Promoting Ivanova to running the station would not be logical,
|
|
since from a military and diplomatic standpoint she has nowhere
|
|
*near* the level of experience required. It wouldn't be done in
|
|
real life.
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