The Lurker's Guide to Babylon 5
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  4. _Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
  5. - [13]Notes - [14]JMS
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  7. Overview
  8. Second season premiere. As a new commander assumes control of the
  9. station, a renegade Minbari warship arrives, threatening trouble.
  10. [15]Robert Foxworth as General Hague.
  11. (Originally titled "Chrysalis, Part II")
  12. Sub-genre: Intrigue
  13. [16]P5 Rating: [17]7.92
  14. Production number: 201
  15. Original air date: November 2, 1994
  16. Written by J. Michael Straczynski
  17. Directed by Janet Greek
  18. _________________________________________________________________
  19. Backplot
  20. * During the Earth-Minbari War, Captain John Sheridan managed to
  21. score Earth's only real victory, destroying the Minbari flagship
  22. Black Star and several cruisers by mining the asteroid belt
  23. between Jupiter and Mars with fusion bombs. This earned him the
  24. name "Starkiller" among the Minbari warrior caste, as well as
  25. their continuing hatred.
  26. * The Minbari population has been slowly declining for two millenia.
  27. * The Grey Council ordered the end of the war after capturing
  28. Sinclair. He was the first human to have direct contact with the
  29. Council. Their original intent was to interrogate him and find out
  30. about Earth's defenses, but upon scanning him, they found that
  31. Minbari souls were somehow being reborn in human bodies. Since
  32. Minbari religion teaches that all the souls of the Minbari form a
  33. greater whole, continuing the war would mean, in effect, killing
  34. part of themselves. Realizing that the knowledge that this was
  35. happening to Minbari souls would prove destabilizing to society --
  36. presumably some would blame humans for the shrinking population,
  37. not to mention how the _humans_ would react to the news -- they
  38. decided to keep their discovery a secret, and protect it with
  39. lethal force if necessary.
  40. * After the suicide of the warleader Sineval (cf. [18]"Legacies") at
  41. the end of the war, the crew of his ship, the Trigati, defied the
  42. surrender order and vanished into exile for nearly twelve years.
  43. * Before her service on Babylon 5, Ivanova served under Sheridan at
  44. the transfer point on Io.
  45. Unanswered Questions
  46. * How did a scan reveal that Minbari souls were being reborn in
  47. humans?
  48. * Will the crew of the Trigati be considered martyrs by the warrior
  49. caste in spite of their death at Minbari hands?
  50. * Why did President Clark already know why the war ended? (see
  51. [19]jms speaks, and comic [20]"In Darkness Find Me")
  52. Analysis
  53. * The presence of the unnamed Grey Council member on Babylon 5
  54. implies that the Council knew Delenn would disobey its order, and
  55. further, that they know the purpose of the chrysalis. In fact,
  56. there seems to be more division within the Council than they want
  57. to admit (cf. [21]"Babylon Squared") since one of the
  58. Councilmembers gave Delenn the triluminary even though the council
  59. had advised her to wait.
  60. * Sinclair was the first human to have contact with the Grey
  61. Council, but there's still ample evidence that that's not the only
  62. thing unique about him. Delenn has hinted that she believes he has
  63. a great destiny (cf. [22]"Grail" and [23]"A Voice in the
  64. Wilderness, part 2") and even in this episode, Lennier says, "A
  65. change is coming. Sinclair was the first. There will be others,"
  66. implying that something has happened to him that hasn't yet
  67. happened to anyone else.
  68. * In fact, the Council may have identified a specific Minbari soul
  69. in Sinclair, perhaps the reincarnation of a great figure in their
  70. history; that would explain why they're so interested in him in
  71. particular.
  72. * It's possible that the information about Minbari souls isn't even
  73. known to all of the Grey Council. When Delenn visited the Council
  74. (in [24]"Babylon Squared") she spoke of the prophecy as the reason
  75. for ending the war, and some of the other Councilmembers weren't
  76. sure that humans were the ones the prophecy referred to. If they
  77. had seen whatever scan results convinced Delenn that humans had
  78. Minbari souls, they presumably would have argued with her about
  79. those results rather than a vague interpretation of the prophecy.
  80. * The only thing that looked remotely like a scan in Sinclair's
  81. recollection of his capture on the Line was when one of the
  82. Minbari held a triluminary up to him. (cf. [25]"And the Sky Full
  83. of Stars") It's at least plausible that the triluminary was
  84. instrumental in determining that Sinclair had a reincarnated
  85. Minbari soul. If its function is indeed on such a spiritual level,
  86. the fact that it was part of Delenn's machine (cf.
  87. [26]"Chrysalis") suggests that her transformation may be as much
  88. mental as physical. This interpretation of the triluminary's
  89. function is supported by the comic issue [27]"In Darkness Find
  90. Me."
  91. * Sheridan's comment that he was the _late_ president's choice to
  92. replace Sinclair is odd; why would Santiago want someone who would
  93. be sure to anger the Minbari and increase tensions?
  94. Notes
  95. * The Agamemnon was also a ship in the British fleet, at one point
  96. commanded by Lord Nelson (best known for the Battle of Trafalgar.)
  97. * Possible factual error: Sheridan said the Dalai Lama ate dinner
  98. with him, implying an evening meal. But Buddhist monks, including
  99. the Dalai Lama, don't eat after noon. It is, of course, possible
  100. that Buddhist practices have changed between the twentieth and
  101. twenty-third centuries, or that "dinner" wasn't meant to imply an
  102. evening meal, but rather the last meal of the day.
  103. jms speaks
  104. * As for Chrysalis, there's about 8 to 10 days in "story time"
  105. between it and the events in "Points." The next few shows track in
  106. real-time.
  107. * _Why do the Minbari have a grudge against Sheridan? It was
  108. wartime, after all._
  109. They don't much like the way he did it, which was rather sneaky.
  110. My sense is that the Minbari have something of a superiority
  111. complex; the idea of being beaten, even briefly, by a technically
  112. inferior race is going to grate on them. Also, bear in mind, that
  113. the military caste has not been fully informed about WHY they were
  114. ordered to surrender...so there's a great deal of animosity just
  115. barely submerged there, which is pointed at the only real human
  116. they know from the war...because he cost them.
  117. * Heads definitely rolled (figuratively speaking) in the Minbari
  118. warrior caste after the Black Star incident. They allowed
  119. themselves to get cocky, and didn't do a proper job, which was
  120. more than an embarrassment to them.
  121. * It kinda bothered their sense of superiority; also, their sense of
  122. honor lies more in the direction of one-to-one combat, rather than
  123. mining something as a trap. Consider it the way British troops did
  124. toward American revolutionary fighters who hid behind trees and
  125. used guerilla tactics rather than fighting the way the British
  126. *wanted* them to fight, out in the open, in nice, easily shot-at
  127. rows....
  128. * We will be changing the main title sequence after "Revelations"
  129. airs to include the new version of Delenn. Would be silly of us to
  130. include the new version in episodes prior to her unveiling.
  131. * The fact that Minbari believe in souls does not make it so.
  132. If a story is rigorously SF, but some of the people who inhabit
  133. the story have belief systems, does that automatically invalidate
  134. it as SF?
  135. I don't think it's the position of this show to state whether or
  136. not a belief system is true but rather to explore the actions of
  137. those who THINK it's true; not to resolve arguments, but to start
  138. arguments. (See "Believers" for more on this one.)
  139. What the characters believe is subjective, and is their business.
  140. Or, as Sheridan says in a later episode, "I'm not saying what I'm
  141. saying. I'm not saying what I'm thinking. For that matter, I'm not
  142. even THINKING what I'm thinking."
  143. * This is correct. Sheridan did NOT tell President Clark about the
  144. Minbari soul situation. Clark already knew about it. Sheridan's
  145. line is, "I spoke with the president. He is the only other person
  146. who knows why the Minbari surrendered." Also, in the first issue
  147. of the comic, this prior knowledge on Clark's part is clear as
  148. well.
  149. * BTW, and just for the heck of it...the line about paying off karma
  150. at an accellerated rate is something Kathryn has been muttering
  151. for ages; I popped it into the script for fun.
  152. * Sheridan asked what kind of scanners the fighters were using
  153. because he couldn't figure out why they were picking up the
  154. Minbari fighters. He wanted to be sure nobody had snuck by some
  155. kind of new tech. Once he knew they were the same tech as before,
  156. he knew something screwy was up.
  157. * Correct above; Sheridan says, quite specifically, in the
  158. conference room with Ivanova after the Grey Council guy is gone,
  159. "they used some kind of stealth technology WE'VE NEVER BEEN ABLE
  160. TO BREAK." It's not a matter of old or cheaper tech; we just
  161. haven't broken their technology yet.
  162. * And yes, ships can sit in hyperspace (something also mentioned by
  163. Laurel Takashima in the pilot, "If I were the Vorlons, I'd have a
  164. warship standing by in hyperspace just waiting to attack."
  165. * Basically, I decided to name the EA Lounge "Earhart's" because she
  166. is an important figure in aviation history, and I wanted a 40s art
  167. deco style to the place, down to big band music, and it fit
  168. perfectly. There have been more women aviators, civilian and
  169. elsewhere, than we know, particularly during WW II at home, and
  170. they deserve recognition.
  171. * The Earthforce lounge (EA personnel only) is Earhart's, named
  172. after the famed aviator.
  173. (Consequently, as tradition, only swing or big-band music is ever
  174. played in Earhart's.)
  175. Yes, we brightened things up a notch, but only a notch, because we
  176. discovered that a lot of the good work being done on the sets and
  177. the costumes wasn't being seen because we were too dark. So we
  178. went up about one f-stop, but at the same time began using more
  179. shadows, textures and colors, so the show has a denser look to it.
  180. * As noted elsewhere...we have previously established that the Dome
  181. is periodically on Standby Mode, when the system is performing
  182. autmoated (automated) backups, routine maintenance, that sort of
  183. thing. It was in "Midnight," when Garibaldi informs Ivanova that
  184. that's where he likes to go, when it's on standby, and is quiet.
  185. It was in "Sky," when Ivanova asks Tech 1 if there are any more
  186. ships due in for a while, is told no, and she puts her feet up on
  187. the console, nobody else around.
  188. Also, B5 tends to run on human cycles of day and night, something
  189. we try to reflect in the sets and effects, showing the Garden
  190. bright during day times, and dark during night stuff (as around
  191. dinner time in the Fresh Air Restaurant). Maintaining such cycles
  192. has been found to be critical in these kinds of environments.
  193. The standby mode only happens every 36-48 hours, for about an
  194. hour. Most departments also have their own control areas, using
  195. C&C mainly when command personnel are required. In addition, there
  196. are folks monitoring C&C, and if anything *should* happen, someone
  197. could be there within seconds.
  198. * The Hyperion was built before the EM war, and survived.
  199. The Agamemnon, a much superior ship, was built afterward. Sheridan
  200. was not commanding the Aggy during the war. It's one of the best
  201. ships we've got, almost the equivilent of an aircraft carrier or
  202. battleship, and it took a lot of seniority and work to get it.
  203. * Yes, you will see the Agamemnon again.
  204. * Nothing has been dumbed down or simplified; in a first season
  205. episode (in other words, the first episode of any given season),
  206. you get a lot of sampling. If the show is obscure, or there's too
  207. much prior knowledge required to get into it...they go away fast.
  208. So there was a bit more straightforward exposition in this episode
  209. in order to avoid scaring off new viewers.
  210. And I stated, some time ago, that this was a lighter episode
  211. because it's sandwiched between two very intense episodes,
  212. "Chrysalis" and "Revelations," and I think you need some relief
  213. there.
  214. And as Walker noted, there are times when the dome is on standby,
  215. as noted in "Midnight." The systems every 36 hours or so go
  216. through a period of self-repair and maintainance for an hour or
  217. two; if anything comes out of the gate or into local space,
  218. someone's there within seconds.
  219. * I wouldn't look for too much of Garibaldi in the first episode; he
  220. was shot in the back...my feeling is that, TV logic to the
  221. contrary, it takes TIME to recover from that. Consequently, this
  222. will take a few episodes to get even remotely back on track.
  223. * Yes, the quote definitely comes from Lincoln. I hated the old
  224. Babcom logo, so we dumped it.
  225. * Re: yankeecentrism...we always strive for balance. Yes, he quoted
  226. Lincoln, but he also noted that on his 21st birthday, he flew to
  227. see the new Dalai Lama being sworn in.
  228. * Thanks. If you think PoD was a "wham," then I can't wait to see
  229. your reaction to "Revelations."
  230. Interestingly enough, I figured on giving Sheridan a tie to the
  231. Civil War through his ancestor, General Philip Sheridan (sometimes
  232. called "Little Phil" by Lincoln). Afterward, I discovered that
  233. Bruce is a big civil war buff, so the Lincoln stuff worked very
  234. well.
  235. One of my favorite sequences from this episode is the stuff aboard
  236. the Minbari cruiser during the Battle of the Line; the shots
  237. surrounding Delenn and the other Minbari gives it a very god-like
  238. aspect. Just wonderful.
  239. * Yes, Sheridan is descended from Gen. Philip John Sheridan of the
  240. Union Army.
  241. * Sheridan is a soldier. A soldier is told, in wartime, THIS is your
  242. enemy. You kill the enemy or your enemy kills you. Afterward,
  243. you're in the same position American soldiers were in after the
  244. end of WW II when it came time to reconcile with the Germans and
  245. the Japanese. It can sometimes be very awkward...and sometimes
  246. reconciliation takes a while.
  247. * For what it's worth, Sheridan is neither a "space cowboy" nor a
  248. "gung ho type." This description has nothing to do with the
  249. character, and I'm not quite sure where you got this. Certainly I
  250. never said or implied it.
  251. Captain John Sheridan is a war hero, of sorts; he squeaked out the
  252. only real victory of the Earth/Minbari War. (Which means the
  253. Minbari don't generally like him a lot.) He did what he did
  254. because that's his job. He's a professional soldier. For the last
  255. two years, he's been commanding the Agamemmnon, a high-visibility
  256. Earthforce starship on deep patrol. As such, he has had to learn
  257. to work with a number of different races and species.
  258. In some ways, his character is somewhat more well-rounded than was
  259. the case with Sinclair, over whom a general sense of doom often
  260. seemed to hang. Sheridan is often very thoughtful and
  261. introspective; at other times, he can be just a bit eccentric; he
  262. leads by respecting those who work under him, and givingthem room
  263. to grow; like any career officer, he HATES the bureaucracy with a
  264. passion, and this is the one thing that can drive him nuts; he
  265. knows that commanding B5 is a great opportunity, but he also knows
  266. that his presence brings certain complications with it, and he's
  267. very ambivilant about that aspect; he's the son of a diplomatic
  268. envoy who disappeared on his 21st birthday, running off to see (of
  269. all things) the new Dali Lama being installed; he has a very
  270. easygoing manner, and a great sense of humor. He quickly re-forms
  271. a friendship with Ivanova, for whom he has great respect and
  272. professional admiration. (For a time she served under him at Io.)
  273. He is, actually, a fascinating and intriguing character with a lot
  274. of different shadings...none of which have *anything* to do with
  275. being a "space cowboy" or "gung-ho type."
  276. Anyway...point being...when it was announced that there was going
  277. to be a new Lieutenant-Commander, a number of folks went ballistic
  278. and said the show would now be ruined. I said, in essence,
  279. look...I created Takashima; I can create an interesting character
  280. to replace her. And I thunk up Ivanova, who according to the
  281. rec.arts.b5 poll is the most popular character on the show. When
  282. it was announced that Sinclair would be STAYING with the show,
  283. after the pilot, a number of folks said this was bad, he was
  284. wooden, he stunk, get him off...and ended up being very enamored
  285. of him. My only reply now about Bruce...give him, and me, a
  286. chance. I genuinely think you will like what you see a *lot*.
  287. In the course of the first season, Ivanova, Garibaldi, G'Kar,
  288. Londo, Delenn, others...they've exploded into strong characters.
  289. You need an equally strong character designed to hold his own, and
  290. be memorable, in that august company. Sheridan was designed
  291. knowing we had a much elevated playing field around the character.
  292. Obviously, clearly, and irrefutably, an actor brings a *lot* to
  293. any role. No question. But it tends to begin with what is created.
  294. I've seen it said here, repeatedly, that none of the characters
  295. are uninteresting; they all have lives, and agendas, that make
  296. them fascinating to watch: Londo, Morden, G'Kar, Delenn,
  297. Garibaldi, Ivanova...what those characters are came out of my
  298. head, in terms of who tey are, what they say, what they believe,
  299. where they came from and where they're going. Why would I invent a
  300. new character that was any less involving, or interesting, or
  301. multifaceted? Particularly knowing that he's going to be a central
  302. character?
  303. Speaking as someone who's been in fandom a long, long time, I know
  304. there is always a tendency for panic, to assume the apocalpse is
  305. upon us, that something is never going to be the same again. I
  306. heard this after the Enterprise was destroyed in "The Search for
  307. Spock." I've heard this a lot over the years. It's generally
  308. over-reaction and worry before anyone has even seen a frame of
  309. film.
  310. Bottom line being...wait and see, then judge. I've tried very hard
  311. not to let you down, and I think so far I haven't done so...I have
  312. no intention of starting now. Bruce is doing an absolutely
  313. *brilliant* job as Captain Sheridan, bringing a thoughtfulness and
  314. intensity and charm and intensity to the part that is a joy to
  315. behold. Give him a chance.
  316. * Alas, I wrote my note about Bruce around 1 or 2 in the morning,
  317. and I meant to balance out *intensity* with *intelligence*, but my
  318. brain saw the first letters i-n-t-e, and vapor-locked.
  319. * _How important to the Arc is Sheridan?_
  320. How critical was Aragorn to the storyline of Lord of the Rings?
  321. * The way in which Sheridan comes into the storyline is *absolutely*
  322. consistent with everything that has come before, and everything
  323. that follows.
  324. * Sheridan was never on the original list [to command B5] because at
  325. that time when the EA needed Minbari financing for B5, they knew
  326. it'd piss off the Minbari to have it there, so he was never
  327. considered for the post at that time.
  328. * "Sounds like a formula to really PO the Minbari."
  329. Yup.
  330. * Just to clarify: in Soul Hunter we set in place the question of
  331. what these things are, and do not resolve that question. Dr.
  332. Franklin offers that with the correct technology, it might be
  333. possible to make (for lack of a better term) a clone of someone's
  334. neural patterns, copy his personality and memories into a storage
  335. device...but also dismisses the notion of soul stealing.
  336. I traffic in ambiguity.
  337. * In a sense, yes, "Believers" now enters the arc...but so does
  338. "Soul Hunter," in a big way. Replay Lennier's talk to Sheridan and
  339. Ivanova, then play Delenn's conversation with Sinclair and the
  340. Soul Hunter in that episode, and suddenly a lot of elements begin
  341. to intersect.
  342. * Re: you're noticing the line, "You talk like a Minbari" from
  343. Neroon to Sinclair in "Legacies"....yup. Sometimes this stuff is
  344. in broad strokes, sometimes in teeny little things like that. Also
  345. ties in even further with where Sinclair goes.
  346. * Note that Lennier says he wishes he could have told them (us) the
  347. *rest* of the prophecy...and there's definitely more to Sinclair,
  348. as will be seen later in the season. Remember, the Grey Council
  349. never tells anyone the whole truth (note how Kalain asks that
  350. question upon being told that Sinclair is just an ambassador).
  351. * There really wasn't/isn't time in PoD to get into the angst
  352. everyone has over Sinclair leaving (though some of that is given
  353. to Sheridan, oddly enough). But it WILL get brought up in
  354. subsequent episodes, especially from Garibaldi.
  355. * Sinclair was the first human the Minbari (or at least the Grey
  356. Council) had ever met, having come this far for the final victory.
  357. The Earth Explorer vessel was part of a military fleet that
  358. encountered a Minbari convoy, there was a miscommunication, a
  359. misperceived threat, and our ships opened fire. There was no
  360. person-to-person contact.
  361. * Sure, you could blind-fire at a Minbari cruiser, but it's pretty
  362. heavily armored. And while you're shooting at it, you're not only
  363. being hit by cruiser blasts, but the several dozen Minbari
  364. fighters coming in behind you. And shooting at a sublight
  365. traveling fighter by eye would absolutely never work. It *has* to
  366. be computer guided.
  367. (BTW, for the sharp of eye...if you go back and sill-step through
  368. some of the cockpit screen shots in "Sky," you'll note that on the
  369. tac screen in Sinclair's cockpit it says something to the effect
  370. of "Unable to lock-onto target.")
  371. * Yes, you can go in and shoot at a Minbari *cruiser* visually...but
  372. the reality is that any long-range weapon will be intercepted by
  373. targeting fire, and if you get up real close and personal...well,
  374. actually, you *can't* get up real close and personal because, as
  375. Mitchell learned in "Sky," you get shot by the fighters.
  376. What the fighters tend to remain engaged with are the Minbari
  377. fighters, which are *incredibly* fast...much too fast to target
  378. visually.
  379. And believe me, as Sheridan stated, Earth's been *trying* to break
  380. the stealth tech for a while, just hasn't been able to.
  381. * Re: [Robert] Foxworth...he was someone we spoke to in case Bruce
  382. turned out not to be available, and we liked him instantly, and he
  383. liked the show. So for good luck, we had him come in for this
  384. role, which may appear again. He's a terrific actor.
  385. * _What were all those ribbons on General Hague's chest awarded for?_
  386. I'll have to check, but probably most of those medals are for
  387. actions during the Earth/Minbari War, and during the Dilgar War.
  388. I'll have to check to get anything more specific than that.
  389. * Well, my thought at the time, and I probably should've put this
  390. into dialogue in retrospect, was that there's a window about every
  391. 36 hours when the entire C&C system goes through self-maintainance
  392. for about half an hour, backing things up, doing self-repair,
  393. filing logs with Earth Central, that sort of thing. They normally
  394. pick a slow period in docking, and any other routine stuff is
  395. handled through the backup C&C on the other side of the station
  396. axis (you can see it directly above the docking bay when the
  397. normal C&C is directly below it).
  398. At first I'd considered putting that in Ivanova's mouth when she
  399. says "Of all the time he could've picked," but then the reveal of
  400. where he was and what he was doing fell flat; it needed to be a
  401. surprise or it lost its impact and the humor. Ah, well....
  402. * It has been established, in prior episodes, that there are brief
  403. periods when C&C is in "standby mode," during which time no ships
  404. are due, the station is in "night" cycle, and the operational
  405. equipment in C&C goes through routine backup and maintenance. In
  406. "Midnight on the Firing Line," our first episode, Ivanova is told
  407. by Garibaldi that Sinclair is in C&C when it's in standby mode
  408. because he likes the quiet during those brief periods (usually
  409. only about an hour or so); in "Chrysalis," Ivanova asks Tech 1 if
  410. any more ships are due in for a while, is told no, and she puts
  411. her feet up on the console, watching the news, with the place
  412. pretty much deserted.
  413. This isn't the bridge of a starship; this is mainly a center of
  414. operations for docking and other station activities requiring
  415. command personnel. Every separate department -- environmental,
  416. other resources -- has its own separate control center, with lots
  417. of redundency.
  418. In addition, there's always somebody monitoring stuff as it comes
  419. through, so if there *were* any kind of problem, there'd be
  420. somebody on site in C&C in thirty seconds. Basically, we're
  421. talking an hour or so once every 36 to 48 hours. I could've
  422. explained this in dialogue, but it would've taken the edge off the
  423. revelation and humor, and I figured we'd done this before enough
  424. times that it wouldn't be an issue.
  425. * Just as an advisory...the woman who spoke up in PoD (the tech who
  426. told Sheridan that Security wanted him) is not a Tech 1
  427. replacement; she was there just for that one episode. We have a
  428. number of folks floating through that area now, because logically
  429. you would have rotating crews.
  430. * A vibe shower would theoretically use sonic waves (in combination
  431. with other elements, like disinfecting lighting, as seen in
  432. "Signs") to remove dirt and kill bacteria.
  433. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
  434. * Delenn staying while Sinclair goes is part of WHY Sinclair goes
  435. and Delenn stays. It's absolutely part and parcel.
  436. * Delenn had intended to tell Sinclair much about the soul issue
  437. before entering the chrysalis.
  438. * It's always interesting, if you have one character upon whom
  439. everyone else leans, even depends, to *remove* that character for
  440. a time. Because then those characters have to *react*...to either
  441. stand or fall on their own. It shakes things up a little...and
  442. vastly intensifies the characters.
  443. * I'm going to test myself, and see how much I can say without
  444. saying too much.
  445. You have X-number of characters. They're all in the same place.
  446. You're trying to tell a story that has a great deal of scale, and
  447. covers all kinds of worlds, changing politics, alliances, on and
  448. on. The question becomes, how do you *illustrate* that? To use a
  449. line from the original Trek, when a mob guy is brought aboard the
  450. Enterprise, he says later, "All I saw was a room and five guys."
  451. So now you start saying, "Hmmm...what if I remove Character A from
  452. the chessboard, and move him over *here* for a while? He wasn't
  453. going to be doing much for the next little bit anyway. And we
  454. won't just "deal" with that change, it's part of the story...it
  455. broadens out the story to include Place A *and* Place B. It has
  456. repercussions down the road. It comes up again in the future.
  457. Elements from Place B now become known on Place A. Character A may
  458. even make an occasional reappearance to keep us even more closely
  459. connected with Place B, which is necessary because Place B is
  460. very, very important."
  461. What we have in mind here isn't quite comparable to anything
  462. that's been done before. The character will still be alive. The
  463. character will continue to have an impact on the story. The
  464. character will be spotted from time to time. The character will
  465. continue to show up in the comic and the novels. And through this
  466. move, you have the benefit of substantially opening up the B5
  467. universe, you help create the realignment of characters and
  468. loyalties that was anticipated for this season, and it helps kick
  469. over the tables, as we did in Chrysalis.
  470. Just a slight refinement on the argument.
  471. * I can probably answer your question a little better after you've
  472. seen the second episode of this season. For now, let's just say
  473. this: in working out the story for year two, Sinclair's main line
  474. of connection was to the Minbari. But the Minbari storyline was
  475. diminishing in ways onnected to the war in year two; obviously we
  476. all know what is on the upswing in year two, certain dark forces.
  477. I needed someone who has a connection to *that* side of the story
  478. to personalize it, and Sheridan brings that connection to the mix,
  479. although he doesn't know it yet.
  480. * The Battle of the Line and the hole in Sinclair's mind was always
  481. intended as the entry point or trigger to the story. It's like
  482. Frodo being given the Ring in LoTR. The story isn't about that,
  483. that's how we get INTO it. Frankly, there's no way you can sustain
  484. that one element for five years, nor did we ever intend to do so.
  485. The only difference in the resolution of that aspect is this: we
  486. had originally intended to resolve the missing 24 hours, and the
  487. Battle of the Line, by episode four, season two. We've simply
  488. moved it up 3 eps to the first episode. Because new players are
  489. coming onto the field, in the form of the Shadowmen, and other
  490. forces, and we now have to begin turning our attention to new
  491. mysteries.
  492. * "Changes are coming; Sinclair was the first, there will be
  493. others." He was referring to more changes coming.
  494. * Sheridan, or more specifically the need for someone *like*
  495. Sheridan began to get through clearly toward the latter part of
  496. last season, as I began planning out season two's progression, and
  497. kept looking at elements of the story and trying to find ways to
  498. get Sinclair into the heart of them. They felt contrived, for the
  499. most part; and the other characters, like Londo and G'Kar and
  500. Delenn, were *really* moving forward in a big way. The role of
  501. Sinclair was becoming primarily that of a "problem solver," and
  502. when that happens, a sort of glass bell falls down around the
  503. character, and you can't do much with him.
  504. So what the writer has to do is break that bell in one way or
  505. another; do something totally unexpected to him, and bring in
  506. someone who has a direct, personal connection with the storyline
  507. emerging in season two, so it's not contrived or forced.
  508. * All the characters are unique; there seems to be this bone-headed
  509. notion, that I frequently run into, of "Well, Ivanova's just
  510. Takashima renamed," or "Sheridan's story is just the same as
  511. Sinclair's, same guy just renamed." They're *not* and never have
  512. been. The story of one does not devlove automatically upon the
  513. other. If you make a change, it's because you have something
  514. better in mind...otherwise why make it?
  515. * I said, from the very beginning, that once the series got rolling,
  516. no single primary question could be allowed to go more than about
  517. one season before answering it, otherwise you get into a
  518. frustrating Twin Peaks situation where *nothing* is resolved.
  519. Basically, the events begun in "Chrysalis" bleed over into three
  520. episodes; the Battle of the Line answers were initially only a
  521. couple of episodes further down in my outline, about episode #3.
  522. Making the change, for one thing, allowed me to move that
  523. storyline forward to episode #1, blow through it and get the story
  524. moving in year two faster, rather than delaying further with loose
  525. threads from season one.
  526. * The idea of a Chrysalis II went by the boards once I really got
  527. into the script, and realized that C1 had tipped over too many
  528. tables to even HOPE to resolve them in one follow-up episode. So
  529. the threads yanked in C1 will be paid off over several episodes,
  530. hence no C2; the first episode of year two is "Points of
  531. Departure."
  532. * _What about Catherine Sakai?_
  533. This is the one thread that I'm still trying to decide about.
  534. * They didn't get married. Wasn't time, and his new posting
  535. precluded that.
  536. * We're dedicated to improving all of these elements on a regular
  537. basis; CGI, sets, directing, lighting, name it.
  538. The music will change every year, to get in sync with where the
  539. season is going; the tone and tenor and mood will shift.
  540. Re: the narration...last year, Michael had the benefit of being
  541. able to see the sequence prior to reading the narration, and
  542. reading with the images. That was when we were shooting in July to
  543. air in January. In this case, shooting in August to air in
  544. November, Bruce had to wing it, without any images for reference,
  545. just text. Now that we've got the opening completed (and we
  546. weren't satisfied with it or done tinkering with it until a few
  547. days before delivery), we'll probably let him do it again with the
  548. visuals before him, so he knows what he's reading to, since it'll
  549. have a *big* impact on how he delivers the stuff.
  550. * There's a reason for this: due to time constraints, we have to get
  551. Bruce to do the narration *without* having the images in front of
  552. him; he had no way of knowing where beats would go with the
  553. images, or what would be under it (since we were still putting the
  554. new opening together), so we had to artifically build in pauses
  555. when we did the final transfer (as opposed to year one, where we
  556. had the images assembled long before we had Michael do the
  557. narration). What took forever was that 5 fade/dissolve/wipe, which
  558. just killed us time-wise, but is spiffy to look at.
  559. Now that it's all together, we plan to have Bruce re-do the
  560. narration with the images in front of him, so he can respond
  561. naturally and make it flow, the way he would've been able to do
  562. had we had the material ready in time.
  563. * Re: the theme music...to me, one is neither worse nor better than
  564. the other. They're *different*, and meant to convey different
  565. moods and themes. Each year it'll change. This year was heavy on
  566. strings and brass; next year it'll be heavy on percussion. The
  567. main theme will be reinterpreted and interpolated in different
  568. ways. In the B5 universe, change is the only constant.
  569. * Promoting Ivanova to running the station would not be logical,
  570. since from a military and diplomatic standpoint she has nowhere
  571. *near* the level of experience required. It wouldn't be done in
  572. real life.
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