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|
- <h2><a name="OV">Overview</a></h2>
-
- <blockquote><cite>
- Second season premiere.
- As a new commander assumes control of the station, a renegade Minbari
- warship arrives, threatening trouble.
- </cite>
-
- <a href="http://us.imdb.com/M/person-exact?+Foxworth,+Robert">Robert Foxworth</a> as General Hague.
- </blockquote>
-
- (Originally titled "Chrysalis, Part II")
-
- <pre>
- Sub-genre: Intrigue
- <a href="/lurk/p5/intro.html">P5 Rating</a>: <a href="/lurk/p5/023">7.92</a>
-
- Production number: 201
- Original air date: November 2, 1994
- <a href="http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/B000087EYB/thelurkersguidet">DVD release date</a>: April 29, 2003
-
- Written by J. Michael Straczynski
- Directed by Janet Greek
- </pre>
-
- <p>
- <hr size=3>
- <p>
-
- <h2><a name="BP">Backplot</a></h2>
- <ul>
- <li> During the Earth-Minbari War, Captain John Sheridan managed to score
- Earth's only real victory, destroying the Minbari flagship Black Star
- and several cruisers by mining the asteroid belt between Jupiter and
- Mars with fusion bombs. This earned him the name "Starkiller" among
- the Minbari warrior caste, as well as their continuing hatred.
-
- <li> The Minbari population has been slowly declining for two millenia.
-
- <li> The Grey Council ordered the end of the war after capturing Sinclair.
- He was the first human to have direct contact with the Council.
- Their original intent was to interrogate him and find out about
- Earth's defenses, but upon scanning him, they found that Minbari
- souls were somehow being reborn in human bodies. Since Minbari
- religion teaches that all the souls of the Minbari form a greater
- whole, continuing the war would mean, in effect, killing part of
- themselves. Realizing that the knowledge that this was happening
- to Minbari souls would prove destabilizing to society -- presumably
- some would blame humans for the shrinking population, not to mention
- how the <em>humans</em> would react to the news -- they decided
- to keep their discovery a secret, and protect it with lethal force
- if necessary.
-
- <li> After the suicide of the warleader Sineval (cf.
- <a href="017.html">"Legacies"</a>)
- at the end of the war, the crew of his ship, the Trigati, defied the
- surrender order and vanished into exile for nearly twelve years.
-
- <li> Before her service on Babylon 5, Ivanova served under Sheridan at the
- transfer point on Io.
-
- </ul>
-
- <h2><a name="UQ">Unanswered Questions</a></h2>
- <ul>
- <li> How did a scan reveal that Minbari souls were being reborn in humans?
-
- <li> Will the crew of the Trigati be considered martyrs by the warrior
- caste in spite of their death at Minbari hands?
-
- <li> Why did President Clark already know why the war ended? (see
- <a href="#JS:clark">jms speaks</a>, and comic
- <a href="/lurk/comic/001.html">"In Darkness Find Me"</a>)
-
- </ul>
-
- <h2><a name="AN">Analysis</a></h2>
- <ul>
- <li> The presence of the unnamed Grey Council member on Babylon 5 implies
- that the Council knew Delenn would disobey its order, and further,
- that they know the purpose of the chrysalis. In fact, there seems to
- be more division within the Council than they want to admit (cf.
- <a href="020.html">"Babylon Squared"</a>)
- since one of the Councilmembers gave Delenn the triluminary even
- though the council had advised her to wait.
-
- <li> Sinclair was the first human to have contact with the Grey Council,
- but there's still ample evidence that that's not the only thing
- unique about him. Delenn has hinted that she believes he has a great
- destiny (cf.
- <a href="015.html">"Grail"</a>
- and
- <a href="019.html">"A Voice in the Wilderness, part 2"</a>)
- and even in this episode, Lennier says, "A change is coming.
- Sinclair was the first. There will be others," implying that something
- has happened to him that hasn't yet happened to anyone else.
-
- <li> In fact, the Council may have identified a specific Minbari soul in
- Sinclair, perhaps the reincarnation of a great figure in their history;
- that would explain why they're so interested in him in particular.
-
- <li> It's possible that the information about Minbari souls isn't even known
- to all of the Grey Council. When Delenn visited the Council (in
- <a href="020.html">"Babylon Squared"</a>)
- she spoke of the prophecy as the reason for ending the war, and some
- of the other Councilmembers weren't sure that humans were the ones
- the prophecy referred to. If they had seen whatever scan results
- convinced Delenn that humans had Minbari souls, they presumably would
- have argued with her about those results rather than a vague
- interpretation of the prophecy.
-
- <li> The only thing that looked remotely like a scan in Sinclair's
- recollection of his capture on the Line was when one of the Minbari
- held a triluminary up to him. (cf.
- <a href="008.html">"And the Sky Full of Stars"</a>)
- It's at least plausible that the triluminary was instrumental in
- determining that Sinclair had a reincarnated Minbari soul. If its
- function is indeed on such a spiritual level, the fact that it was
- part of Delenn's machine (cf.
- <a href="022.html">"Chrysalis"</a>)
- suggests that her transformation may be as much mental as physical.
- This interpretation of the triluminary's function is supported by
- the comic issue
- <a href="/lurk/comic/001.html">"In Darkness Find Me."</a>
-
- <li> Sheridan's comment that he was the <em>late</em> president's choice
- to replace Sinclair is odd; why would Santiago want someone who would
- be sure to anger the Minbari and increase tensions?
-
- </ul>
-
- <h2><a name="NO">Notes</a></h2>
- <ul>
-
- <li> The Agamemnon was also a ship in the British fleet, at one point
- commanded by Lord Nelson (best known for the Battle of Trafalgar.)
-
- <li>@@@887274116 Possible factual error: Sheridan said the Dalai Lama ate
- dinner with him, implying an evening meal. But Buddhist monks,
- including the Dalai Lama, don't eat after noon. It is, of course,
- possible that Buddhist practices have changed between the twentieth
- and twenty-third centuries, or that "dinner" wasn't meant to imply
- an evening meal, but rather the last meal of the day.
-
- </ul>
-
-
- <h2><a name="JS">jms speaks</a></h2>
- <ul>
- <li> As for Chrysalis, there's about 8 to 10 days in "story time" between
- it and the events in "Points." The next few shows track in real-time.
-
- <p>
- <li> <i>Why do the Minbari have a grudge against Sheridan? It was wartime,
- after all.</i><br>
- They don't much like the way he did it, which was rather sneaky.
- My sense is that the Minbari have something of a superiority
- complex; the idea of being beaten, even briefly, by a technically
- inferior race is going to grate on them. Also, bear in mind, that
- the military caste has not been fully informed about WHY they were
- ordered to surrender...so there's a great deal of animosity just
- barely submerged there, which is pointed at the only real human
- they know from the war...because he cost them.
-
- <p>
- <li> Heads definitely rolled (figuratively speaking) in the Minbari
- warrior caste after the Black Star incident. They allowed themselves
- to get cocky, and didn't do a proper job, which was more than an
- embarrassment to them.
-
- <p>
- <li> It kinda bothered their sense of superiority; also, their sense of
- honor lies more in the direction of one-to-one combat, rather than
- mining something as a trap. Consider it the way British troops did
- toward American revolutionary fighters who hid behind trees and used
- guerilla tactics rather than fighting the way the British *wanted*
- them to fight, out in the open, in nice, easily shot-at rows....
-
- <p>
- <li> We will be changing the main title sequence after "Revelations"
- airs to include the new version of Delenn. Would be silly of us to
- include the new version in episodes prior to her unveiling.
-
- <p>
- <li> The fact that Minbari believe in souls does not make it so.
- <p>
- If a story is rigorously SF, but some of the people who inhabit the
- story have belief systems, does that automatically invalidate it as SF?
- <p>
- I don't think it's the position of this show to state whether or not
- a belief system is true but rather to explore the actions of those who
- THINK it's true; not to resolve arguments, but to start arguments. (See
- "Believers" for more on this one.)
- <p>
- What the characters believe is subjective, and is their business.
- Or, as Sheridan says in a later episode, "I'm not saying what I'm
- saying. I'm not saying what I'm thinking. For that matter, I'm not
- even THINKING what I'm thinking."
-
- <p>
- <li> <a name="JS:clark">This is correct.</a>
- Sheridan did NOT tell President Clark about the
- Minbari soul situation. Clark already knew about it. Sheridan's line
- is, "I spoke with the president. He is the only other person who knows
- why the Minbari surrendered." Also, in the first issue of the comic,
- this prior knowledge on Clark's part is clear as well.
-
- <p>
- <li> BTW, and just for the heck of it...the line about paying off karma at
- an accellerated rate is something Kathryn has been muttering for ages;
- I popped it into the script for fun.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sheridan asked what kind of scanners the fighters were using because
- he couldn't figure out why they were picking up the Minbari fighters.
- He wanted to be sure nobody had snuck by some kind of new tech. Once
- he knew they were the same tech as before, he knew something screwy
- was up.
-
- <p>
- <li> Correct above; Sheridan says, quite specifically, in the conference
- room with Ivanova after the Grey Council guy is gone, "they used some
- kind of stealth technology WE'VE NEVER BEEN ABLE TO BREAK." It's not
- a matter of old or cheaper tech; we just haven't broken their
- technology yet.
-
- <p>
- <li> And yes, ships can sit in hyperspace (something also mentioned by
- Laurel Takashima in the pilot, "If I were the Vorlons, I'd have a
- warship standing by in hyperspace just waiting to attack."
-
- <p>
- <li> Basically, I decided to name the EA Lounge "Earhart's" because she
- is an important figure in aviation history, and I wanted a 40s art
- deco style to the place, down to big band music, and it fit perfectly.
- There have been more women aviators, civilian and elsewhere, than we
- know, particularly during WW II at home, and they deserve recognition.
-
- <p>
- <li> The Earthforce lounge (EA personnel only) is Earhart's, named after
- the famed aviator.
- <p>
- (Consequently, as tradition, only swing or big-band music is ever
- played in Earhart's.)
- <p>
- Yes, we brightened things up a notch, but only a notch, because we
- discovered that a lot of the good work being done on the sets and the
- costumes wasn't being seen because we were too dark. So we went up
- about one f-stop, but at the same time began using more shadows,
- textures and colors, so the show has a denser look to it.
-
- <p>
- <li> As noted elsewhere...we have previously established that the Dome is
- periodically on Standby Mode, when the system is performing autmoated
- (automated) backups, routine maintenance, that sort of thing. It was
- in "Midnight," when Garibaldi informs Ivanova that that's where he
- likes to go, when it's on standby, and is quiet. It was in "Sky,"
- when Ivanova asks Tech 1 if there are any more ships due in for a
- while, is told no, and she puts her feet up on the console, nobody
- else around.
-
- <p>
- Also, B5 tends to run on human cycles of day and night, something we
- try to reflect in the sets and effects, showing the Garden bright
- during day times, and dark during night stuff (as around dinner time
- in the Fresh Air Restaurant). Maintaining such cycles has been found
- to be critical in these kinds of environments.
-
- <p>
- The standby mode only happens every 36-48 hours, for about an hour.
- Most departments also have their own control areas, using C&C mainly
- when command personnel are required. In addition, there are folks
- monitoring C&C, and if anything *should* happen, someone could be
- there within seconds.
-
- <p>
- <li> The Hyperion was built before the EM war, and survived.
-
- <p>
- The Agamemnon, a much superior ship, was built afterward. Sheridan
- was not commanding the Aggy during the war. It's one of the best
- ships we've got, almost the equivilent of an aircraft carrier or
- battleship, and it took a lot of seniority and work to get it.
-
- <p>
- <li> Yes, you will see the Agamemnon again.
-
- <p>
- <li> Nothing has been dumbed down or simplified; in a first season episode
- (in other words, the first episode of any given season), you get a lot
- of sampling. If the show is obscure, or there's too much prior
- knowledge required to get into it...they go away fast. So there was a
- bit more straightforward exposition in this episode in order to avoid
- scaring off new viewers.
-
- <p>
- And I stated, some time ago, that this was a lighter episode because
- it's sandwiched between two very intense episodes, "Chrysalis" and
- "Revelations," and I think you need some relief there.
-
- <p>
- And as Walker noted, there are times when the dome is on standby, as
- noted in "Midnight." The systems every 36 hours or so go through a
- period of self-repair and maintainance for an hour or two; if anything
- comes out of the gate or into local space, someone's there within
- seconds.
-
- <p>
- <li> I wouldn't look for too much of Garibaldi in the first episode; he
- was shot in the back...my feeling is that, TV logic to the contrary,
- it takes TIME to recover from that. Consequently, this will take a
- few episodes to get even remotely back on track.
-
- <p>
- <li> Yes, the quote definitely comes from Lincoln. I hated the old
- Babcom logo, so we dumped it.
-
- <p>
- <li> Re: yankeecentrism...we always strive for balance. Yes, he quoted
- Lincoln, but he also noted that on his 21st birthday, he flew to see
- the new Dalai Lama being sworn in.
-
- <p>
- <li> Thanks. If you think PoD was a "wham," then I can't wait to see
- your reaction to "Revelations."
-
- <p>
- Interestingly enough, I figured on giving Sheridan a tie to the
- Civil War through his ancestor, General Philip Sheridan (sometimes
- called "Little Phil" by Lincoln). Afterward, I discovered that Bruce
- is a big civil war buff, so the Lincoln stuff worked very well.
-
- <p>
- One of my favorite sequences from this episode is the stuff aboard
- the Minbari cruiser during the Battle of the Line; the shots
- surrounding Delenn and the other Minbari gives it a very god-like
- aspect. Just wonderful.
-
- <p>
- <li> Yes, Sheridan is descended from Gen. Philip John Sheridan of the
- Union Army.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sheridan is a soldier. A soldier is told, in wartime, THIS is your
- enemy. You kill the enemy or your enemy kills you. Afterward,
- you're in the same position American soldiers were in after the end
- of WW II when it came time to reconcile with the Germans and the
- Japanese. It can sometimes be very awkward...and sometimes
- reconciliation takes a while.
-
- <p>
- <li> For what it's worth, Sheridan is neither a "space cowboy" nor a
- "gung ho type." This description has nothing to do with the
- character, and I'm not quite sure where you got this. Certainly I
- never said or implied it.
-
- <p>
- Captain John Sheridan is a war hero, of sorts; he squeaked out the
- only real victory of the Earth/Minbari War. (Which means the Minbari
- don't generally like him a lot.) He did what he did because that's
- his job. He's a professional soldier. For the last two years, he's
- been commanding the Agamemmnon, a high-visibility Earthforce starship
- on deep patrol. As such, he has had to learn to work with a number
- of different races and species.
-
- <p>
- In some ways, his character is somewhat more well-rounded than was
- the case with Sinclair, over whom a general sense of doom often
- seemed to hang. Sheridan is often very thoughtful and introspective;
- at other times, he can be just a bit eccentric; he leads by
- respecting those who work under him, and givingthem room to grow;
- like any career officer, he HATES the bureaucracy with a passion, and
- this is the one thing that can drive him nuts; he knows that
- commanding B5 is a great opportunity, but he also knows that his
- presence brings certain complications with it, and he's very
- ambivilant about that aspect; he's the son of a diplomatic envoy who
- disappeared on his 21st birthday, running off to see (of all things)
- the new Dali Lama being installed; he has a very easygoing manner,
- and a great sense of humor. He quickly re-forms a friendship with
- Ivanova, for whom he has great respect and professional admiration.
- (For a time she served under him at Io.)
-
- <p>
- He is, actually, a fascinating and intriguing character with a lot
- of different shadings...none of which have *anything* to do with
- being a "space cowboy" or "gung-ho type."
-
- <p>
- Anyway...point being...when it was announced that there was going to
- be a new Lieutenant-Commander, a number of folks went ballistic and
- said the show would now be ruined. I said, in essence, look...I
- created Takashima; I can create an interesting character to replace
- her. And I thunk up Ivanova, who according to the rec.arts.b5 poll
- is the most popular character on the show. When it was announced
- that Sinclair would be STAYING with the show, after the pilot, a
- number of folks said this was bad, he was wooden, he stunk, get him
- off...and ended up being very enamored of him. My only reply now
- about Bruce...give him, and me, a chance. I genuinely think you will
- like what you see a *lot*.
-
- <p>
- In the course of the first season, Ivanova, Garibaldi, G'Kar, Londo,
- Delenn, others...they've exploded into strong characters. You need
- an equally strong character designed to hold his own, and be
- memorable, in that august company. Sheridan was designed knowing we
- had a much elevated playing field around the character.
-
- <p>
- Obviously, clearly, and irrefutably, an actor brings a *lot* to any
- role. No question. But it tends to begin with what is created.
- I've seen it said here, repeatedly, that none of the characters are
- uninteresting; they all have lives, and agendas, that make them
- fascinating to watch: Londo, Morden, G'Kar, Delenn, Garibaldi,
- Ivanova...what those characters are came out of my head, in terms of
- who tey are, what they say, what they believe, where they came from
- and where they're going. Why would I invent a new character that was
- any less involving, or interesting, or multifaceted? Particularly
- knowing that he's going to be a central character?
-
- <p>
- Speaking as someone who's been in fandom a long, long time, I know
- there is always a tendency for panic, to assume the apocalpse is
- upon us, that something is never going to be the same again. I heard
- this after the Enterprise was destroyed in "The Search for Spock."
- I've heard this a lot over the years. It's generally over-reaction
- and worry before anyone has even seen a frame of film.
-
- <p>
- Bottom line being...wait and see, then judge. I've tried very hard
- not to let you down, and I think so far I haven't done so...I have no
- intention of starting now. Bruce is doing an absolutely *brilliant*
- job as Captain Sheridan, bringing a thoughtfulness and intensity and
- charm and intensity to the part that is a joy to behold. Give him a
- chance.
-
- <p>
- <li> Alas, I wrote my note about Bruce around 1 or 2 in the morning, and
- I meant to balance out *intensity* with *intelligence*, but my
- brain saw the first letters i-n-t-e, and vapor-locked.
-
- <p>
- <li> <em>How important to the Arc is Sheridan?</em><br>
- How critical was Aragorn to the storyline of Lord of the Rings?
-
- <p>
- <li> The way in which Sheridan comes into the storyline is *absolutely*
- consistent with everything that has come before, and everything that
- follows.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sheridan was never on the original list [to command B5] because at
- that time when the EA needed Minbari financing for B5, they knew it'd
- piss off the Minbari to have it there, so he was never considered for
- the post at that time.
-
- <p>
- <li> "Sounds like a formula to really PO the Minbari."
- <p>
- Yup.
-
- <p>
- <li> Just to clarify: in Soul Hunter we set in place the question of what
- these things are, and do not resolve that question. Dr. Franklin
- offers that with the correct technology, it might be possible to
- make (for lack of a better term) a clone of someone's neural patterns,
- copy his personality and memories into a storage device...but also
- dismisses the notion of soul stealing.
-
- <p>
- I traffic in ambiguity.
-
- <p>
- <li> In a sense, yes, "Believers" now enters the arc...but so does "Soul
- Hunter," in a big way. Replay Lennier's talk to Sheridan and Ivanova,
- then play Delenn's conversation with Sinclair and the Soul Hunter in
- that episode, and suddenly a lot of elements begin to intersect.
-
- <p>
- <li> Re: you're noticing the line, "You talk like a Minbari" from Neroon
- to Sinclair in "Legacies"....yup. Sometimes this stuff is in broad
- strokes, sometimes in teeny little things like that. Also ties in
- even further with where Sinclair goes.
-
- <p>
- <li> Note that Lennier says he wishes he could have told them (us) the
- *rest* of the prophecy...and there's definitely more to Sinclair, as
- will be seen later in the season. Remember, the Grey Council never
- tells anyone the whole truth (note how Kalain asks that question
- upon being told that Sinclair is just an ambassador).
-
- <p>
- <li> There really wasn't/isn't time in PoD to get into the angst everyone
- has over Sinclair leaving (though some of that is given to Sheridan,
- oddly enough). But it WILL get brought up in subsequent episodes,
- especially from Garibaldi.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sinclair was the first human the Minbari (or at least the Grey
- Council) had ever met, having come this far for the final victory.
- The Earth Explorer vessel was part of a military fleet that
- encountered a Minbari convoy, there was a miscommunication, a
- misperceived threat, and our ships opened fire. There was no
- person-to-person contact.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sure, you could blind-fire at a Minbari cruiser, but it's pretty
- heavily armored. And while you're shooting at it, you're not only
- being hit by cruiser blasts, but the several dozen Minbari fighters
- coming in behind you. And shooting at a sublight traveling fighter by
- eye would absolutely never work. It *has* to be computer guided.
-
- <p>
- (BTW, for the sharp of eye...if you go back and sill-step through
- some of the cockpit screen shots in "Sky," you'll note that on the tac
- screen in Sinclair's cockpit it says something to the effect of
- "Unable to lock-onto target.")
-
- <p>
- <li> Yes, you can go in and shoot at a Minbari *cruiser* visually...but
- the reality is that any long-range weapon will be intercepted by
- targeting fire, and if you get up real close and personal...well,
- actually, you *can't* get up real close and personal because, as
- Mitchell learned in "Sky," you get shot by the fighters.
-
- <p>
- What the fighters tend to remain engaged with are the Minbari fighters,
- which are *incredibly* fast...much too fast to target visually.
-
- <p>
- And believe me, as Sheridan stated, Earth's been *trying* to break
- the stealth tech for a while, just hasn't been able to.
-
- <p>
- <li> Re: [Robert] Foxworth...he was someone we spoke to in case Bruce turned out not
- to be available, and we liked him instantly, and he liked the show.
- So for good luck, we had him come in for this role, which may appear
- again. He's a terrific actor.
-
- <p>
- <li> <em>What were all those ribbons on General Hague's chest awarded
- for?</em><br>
- I'll have to check, but probably most of those medals are for
- actions during the Earth/Minbari War, and during the Dilgar War.
- I'll have to check to get anything more specific than that.
-
- <p>
- <li> Well, my thought at the time, and I probably should've put this
- into dialogue in retrospect, was that there's a window about every 36
- hours when the entire C&C system goes through self-maintainance for
- about half an hour, backing things up, doing self-repair, filing logs
- with Earth Central, that sort of thing. They normally pick a slow
- period in docking, and any other routine stuff is handled through the
- backup C&C on the other side of the station axis (you can see it
- directly above the docking bay when the normal C&C is directly below
- it).
-
- <p>
- At first I'd considered putting that in Ivanova's mouth when she says
- "Of all the time he could've picked," but then the reveal of where
- he was and what he was doing fell flat; it needed to be a surprise or
- it lost its impact and the humor. Ah, well....
-
- <p>
- <li> It has been established, in prior episodes, that there are brief
- periods when C&C is in "standby mode," during which time no ships are
- due, the station is in "night" cycle, and the operational equipment
- in C&C goes through routine backup and maintenance. In "Midnight on
- the Firing Line," our first episode, Ivanova is told by Garibaldi
- that Sinclair is in C&C when it's in standby mode because he likes
- the quiet during those brief periods (usually only about an hour or
- so); in "Chrysalis," Ivanova asks Tech 1 if any more ships are due in
- for a while, is told no, and she puts her feet up on the console,
- watching the news, with the place pretty much deserted.
-
- <p>
- This isn't the bridge of a starship; this is mainly a center of
- operations for docking and other station activities requiring command
- personnel. Every separate department -- environmental, other
- resources -- has its own separate control center, with lots of
- redundency.
-
- <p>
- In addition, there's always somebody monitoring stuff as it comes
- through, so if there *were* any kind of problem, there'd be somebody
- on site in C&C in thirty seconds. Basically, we're talking an hour
- or so once every 36 to 48 hours. I could've explained this in
- dialogue, but it would've taken the edge off the revelation and humor,
- and I figured we'd done this before enough times that it wouldn't be
- an issue.
-
- <p>
- <li> Just as an advisory...the woman who spoke up in PoD (the tech who
- told Sheridan that Security wanted him) is not a Tech 1 replacement;
- she was there just for that one episode. We have a number of folks
- floating through that area now, because logically you would have
- rotating crews.
-
- <p>
- <li> A vibe shower would theoretically use sonic waves (in combination
- with other elements, like disinfecting lighting, as seen in "Signs")
- to remove dirt and kill bacteria.
-
- <p>
- That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
-
- <p>
- <li> Delenn staying while Sinclair goes is part of WHY Sinclair goes and
- Delenn stays. It's absolutely part and parcel.
-
- <p>
- <li>@@@834423619 Delenn had intended to tell Sinclair much about the soul issue
- before entering the chrysalis.
-
- <p>
- <li> It's always interesting, if you have one character upon whom everyone
- else leans, even depends, to *remove* that character for a time.
- Because then those characters have to *react*...to either stand or
- fall on their own. It shakes things up a little...and vastly
- intensifies the characters.
-
- <p>
- <li> I'm going to test myself, and see how much I can say without saying
- too much.
-
- <p>
- You have X-number of characters. They're all in the same place.
- You're trying to tell a story that has a great deal of scale, and
- covers all kinds of worlds, changing politics, alliances, on and on.
- The question becomes, how do you *illustrate* that? To use a line
- from the original Trek, when a mob guy is brought aboard the
- Enterprise, he says later, "All I saw was a room and five guys."
-
- <p>
- So now you start saying, "Hmmm...what if I remove Character A from
- the chessboard, and move him over *here* for a while? He wasn't going
- to be doing much for the next little bit anyway. And we won't just
- "deal" with that change, it's part of the story...it broadens out the
- story to include Place A *and* Place B. It has repercussions down the
- road. It comes up again in the future. Elements from Place B now
- become known on Place A. Character A may even make an occasional
- reappearance to keep us even more closely connected with Place B,
- which is necessary because Place B is very, very important."
-
- <p>
- What we have in mind here isn't quite comparable to anything that's
- been done before. The character will still be alive. The character
- will continue to have an impact on the story. The character will be
- spotted from time to time. The character will continue to show up in
- the comic and the novels. And through this move, you have the benefit
- of substantially opening up the B5 universe, you help create the
- realignment of characters and loyalties that was anticipated for this
- season, and it helps kick over the tables, as we did in Chrysalis.
-
- <p>
- Just a slight refinement on the argument.
-
- <p>
- <li> I can probably answer your question a little better after you've seen
- the second episode of this season. For now, let's just say this: in
- working out the story for year two, Sinclair's main line of connection
- was to the Minbari. But the Minbari storyline was diminishing in ways
- onnected to the war in year two; obviously we all know what is on the
- upswing in year two, certain dark forces. I needed someone who has a
- connection to *that* side of the story to personalize it, and Sheridan
- brings that connection to the mix, although he doesn't know it yet.
-
- <p>
- <li> The Battle of the Line and the hole in Sinclair's mind was always
- intended as the entry point or trigger to the story. It's like Frodo
- being given the Ring in LoTR. The story isn't about that, that's how
- we get INTO it. Frankly, there's no way you can sustain that one
- element for five years, nor did we ever intend to do so.
- <p>
- The only difference in the resolution of that aspect is this: we had
- originally intended to resolve the missing 24 hours, and the Battle
- of the Line, by episode four, season two. We've simply moved it up
- 3 eps to the first episode. Because new players are coming onto the
- field, in the form of the Shadowmen, and other forces, and we now
- have to begin turning our attention to new mysteries.
-
- <p>
- <li> "Changes are coming; Sinclair was the first, there will be others."
- He was referring to more changes coming.
-
- <p>
- <li> Sheridan, or more specifically the need for someone *like* Sheridan
- began to get through clearly toward the latter part of last season,
- as I began planning out season two's progression, and kept looking at
- elements of the story and trying to find ways to get Sinclair into
- the heart of them. They felt contrived, for the most part; and the
- other characters, like Londo and G'Kar and Delenn, were *really*
- moving forward in a big way. The role of Sinclair was becoming
- primarily that of a "problem solver," and when that happens, a sort
- of glass bell falls down around the character, and you can't do much
- with him.
- <p>
- So what the writer has to do is break that bell in one way or
- another; do something totally unexpected to him, and bring in someone
- who has a direct, personal connection with the storyline emerging in
- season two, so it's not contrived or forced.
-
- <p>
- <li>@@@859396941 All the characters are unique; there seems to be this
- bone-headed notion, that I frequently run into, of "Well,
- Ivanova's just Takashima renamed," or "Sheridan's story is
- just the same as Sinclair's, same guy just renamed." They're
- *not* and never have been. The story of one does not devlove
- automatically upon the other. If you make a change, it's
- because you have something better in mind...otherwise why
- make it?
-
- <p>
- <li> I said, from the very beginning, that once the series got rolling, no
- single primary question could be allowed to go more than about one
- season before answering it, otherwise you get into a frustrating Twin
- Peaks situation where *nothing* is resolved. Basically, the events
- begun in "Chrysalis" bleed over into three episodes; the Battle of the
- Line answers were initially only a couple of episodes further down in
- my outline, about episode #3. Making the change, for one thing,
- allowed me to move that storyline forward to episode #1, blow through
- it and get the story moving in year two faster, rather than delaying
- further with loose threads from season one.
-
- <p>
- <li> The idea of a Chrysalis II went by the boards once I really got into
- the script, and realized that C1 had tipped over too many tables to
- even HOPE to resolve them in one follow-up episode. So the threads
- yanked in C1 will be paid off over several episodes, hence no C2; the
- first episode of year two is "Points of Departure."
-
- <p>
- <li> <em>What about Catherine Sakai?</em>
- <p>
- This is the one thread that I'm still trying to decide about.
-
- <p>
- <li>@@@834859258 They didn't get married. Wasn't time, and his new posting
- precluded that.
-
- <p>
- <li> We're dedicated to improving all of these elements on a regular basis;
- CGI, sets, directing, lighting, name it.
- <p>
- The music will change every year, to get in sync with where the season
- is going; the tone and tenor and mood will shift.
- <p>
- Re: the narration...last year, Michael had the benefit of being able to
- see the sequence prior to reading the narration, and reading with the
- images. That was when we were shooting in July to air in January. In
- this case, shooting in August to air in November, Bruce had to wing it,
- without any images for reference, just text. Now that we've got the
- opening completed (and we weren't satisfied with it or done tinkering
- with it until a few days before delivery), we'll probably let him do
- it again with the visuals before him, so he knows what he's reading to,
- since it'll have a *big* impact on how he delivers the stuff.
-
- <p>
- <li> There's a reason for this: due to time constraints, we have to get
- Bruce to do the narration *without* having the images in front of him;
- he had no way of knowing where beats would go with the images, or what
- would be under it (since we were still putting the new opening
- together), so we had to artifically build in pauses when we did the
- final transfer (as opposed to year one, where we had the images
- assembled long before we had Michael do the narration). What took
- forever was that 5 fade/dissolve/wipe, which just killed us time-wise,
- but is spiffy to look at.
- <p>
- Now that it's all together, we plan to have Bruce re-do the narration
- with the images in front of him, so he can respond naturally and make
- it flow, the way he would've been able to do had we had the material
- ready in time.
-
- <p>
- <li> Re: the theme music...to me, one is neither worse nor better than the
- other. They're *different*, and meant to convey different moods and
- themes. Each year it'll change. This year was heavy on strings and
- brass; next year it'll be heavy on percussion. The main theme will be
- reinterpreted and interpolated in different ways. In the B5 universe,
- change is the only constant.
-
- <p>
- <li> Promoting Ivanova to running the station would not be logical, since
- from a military and diplomatic standpoint she has nowhere *near* the
- level of experience required. It wouldn't be done in real life.
-
- </ul>
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