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### GUIDE ### [3][Background] [4][Synopsis] [5][Credits] [6][Episode
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_Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
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- [13]Notes - [14]JMS
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Overview
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As the Senate continues to investigate President Clark, an
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archaeologist brings news of a development back home that forces
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Sheridan to act against the Earth government. The Nightwatch
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tightens its grip on the civilian population. [15]Nancy Stafford as
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Dr. Kirkish.
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[16]P5 Rating: [17]9.06
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Production number: 308
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Original air week: February 19, 1996
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Written by J. Michael Straczynski
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Directed by Mike Vejar
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Backplot
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* Seven years ago, an archaeological team working for Interplanetary
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Expeditions (see [18]"Infection") discovered a disabled Shadow
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ship buried 300 feet under the Martian surface, underground for at
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least a thousand years. Another Shadow ship, apparently with the
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cooperation of Earth, finished excavating the first, and both flew
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away. Garibaldi was witness, and recovered a Psi Corps badge from
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the site. See comic issue 8, [19]"Silent Enemies." Most of the
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archaeologists have died or disappeared since.
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* More recently, a second Shadow ship was discovered under the ice
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on Jupiter's moon Ganymede.
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* A Shadow ship requires a living being at its core; the two merge,
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becoming one entity. If the pilot isn't properly prepared, the
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result is a confused, insane ship.
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* Translating the Book of G'Quan is considered sacrilege by the
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Narn. "It must be read in the mother tongue, or not at all," says
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G'Kar.
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* Shadow forces have continued to build up on the edge of Centauri
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space.
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Unanswered Questions
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* What were Shadow ships doing on Mars and Ganymede a millenium ago?
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Was Earth involved in the last war?
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* How does Delenn know that Shadow ships have sentient beings at
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their core? What else does she know about them that she hasn't
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told Sheridan?
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* What kind of preparation is needed to properly merge with a Shadow
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ship?
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Analysis
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* Sheridan's unwillingness to fire on the Agamemnon may be a sign of
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trouble to come; he's not ready to think of Earth's military as an
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enemy. How long that loyalty will last is unclear, but at some
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point, if conditions on Earth continue to escalate and Sheridan
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continues to act covertly against the government, he'll be forced
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to choose between firing on his own people and death or capture.
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* The White Star is a Minbari vessel, yet Sheridan believed the
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Agamemnon would be able to track it. (See [20]"Points of
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Departure.") Perhaps that was simply because the White Star was in
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Jupiter's atmosphere; it was thus unable to outrun the Agamemnon,
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and could be tracked via atmospheric disturbances.
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* The White Star is a formidable vessel, in any case; it has as much
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firepower as several Narn heavy cruisers, judging by its attack on
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the Shadow vessel (see [21]"The Long, Twilight Struggle,")
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although this Shadow ship might have been smaller than those faced
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by the Narn. The Agamemnon was able to damage the White Star, but
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only after it had been grazed by a Shadow weapon and subjected to
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atmospheric conditions far outside its safety limits.
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* G'Kar's book should make for interesting reading now that he knows
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what's going on from Londo's point of view as well as his own
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([22]"Dust to Dust.") Given his visitation by what he believes to
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be G'Lan in that episode, will he consider his writings to be on
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the same level as the Book of G'Quan? More importantly, will other
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Narn feel the same way, and become followers of the Book of G'Kar?
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* Dr. Kirkish says of Earth, regarding the Shadows, "They want us to
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become more like them." What does she mean by that? How can humans
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become more like Shadows, and what would that entail?
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* Someone on Earth wanted to go behind the Shadows' backs; if the
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Shadows discover that (assuming they don't already know,) the
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consequences for Earth could be disastrous. Assuming, of course,
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that the Shadows didn't tell Earth about the second ship for their
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own reasons.
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* The events on Mars make it clear that the Shadows were awake to
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some degree before the Icarus visited Z'ha'dum ([23]"In the Shadow
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of Z'ha'dum.") The Icarus visited Z'ha'dum in 2256, but Kirkish
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saw a functioning Shadow vessel seven years ago, in 2253. The
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Psi-Corps connection also implies that the Shadows were aware of
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humanity at the time.
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* Given Marcus' apparent disregard for secrecy ([24]"Exogenesis")
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Ivanova would be well-advised to make sure his chart is destroyed
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or hidden lest a Nightwatch sympathizer stumble across it.
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* Perhaps the Shadows bury their ships underground intentionally.
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Since the ships are at least partially alive, it's even
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concievable that the Shadows bury an egg or something similar,
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then dig up the fully grown ship later on. In that case, where
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else are such ships buried? Do the Shadows know, or did they lose
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track of their ships in the last war?
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* The Shadows attacked the mining colony where Marcus and his
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brother lived ([25]"Matters of Honor.") Could they have been
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trying to prevent the miners from discovering another buried ship?
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* Now that the Agamemnon has observed the White Star at close
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proximity, Earth Force will presumably treat it as hostile on
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sight in the future. That will probably severely limit Sheridan's
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ability to finesse his way out of another fight.
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* The Shadows are far from alone in requiring living beings to merge
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with their machinery. In fact, it seems to be a staple of advanced
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technologies in the B5 universe:
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+ The Ikarran weapon in [26]"Infection."
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+ The anti-agathic drug in [27]"Deathwalker," which required an
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extract from another living being.
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+ The Great Machine in Epsilon 3, which goes berserk without a
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core ([28]"A Voice in the Wilderness.")
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+ Shadow ships, as shown here.
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Are Vorlon ships similarly powered? They show up as living beings
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in scans, though that isn't conclusive one way or the other.
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* Delenn's promise to Sheridan, "I will watch and catch you if you
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should fall," is strikingly similar to the Soul Hunter's comment
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to her when she was being held captive: "You will feel as if you
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are falling; do not be afraid, I will be there to catch you."
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([29]"Soul Hunter.")
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Notes
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* Narn is written from right to left.
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* "Eternal vigilance is the price of freedom" is a variation on a
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quote from Thomas Jefferson, the third President of the United
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States (1801-1809.) The original meaning was that people should
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closely watch their governments to avoid excessive encroachment on
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personal liberty; its use by a Nightwatch member is especially
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ironic.
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* The events on Mars were first revealed in the comic series, issues
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[30]"Survival the Hard Way" and [31]"Silent Enemies," six months
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before this episode's first airing. Garibaldi also made a
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reference to the story contained therein in the first-season
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episode [32]"Infection."
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* In the middle of the White Star's jump to hyperspace, there's a
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single frame of note. The frame takes place as the White Star
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emerges into hyperspace, as it heads toward the camera. The
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hyperspace background changes to what looks like an alien
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cityscape. Apparently it's a shot from [33]Hypernauts, a
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children's sci-fi show whose special effects are being done by
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B5's effects company. (See [34]jms speaks.)
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jms speaks
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* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!
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For a couple months now, I've been looking down the road at
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episode #7, because I couldn't quite see the shape of it...I knew
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what I had to do in it, but I couldn't break the spine of the
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story...until ten minutes ago, and it hit me with all the force of
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a meat axe right smack between the eyeballs.
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Hot damn...if I can pull this script off, it may well be the best
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one of the series to date. Granted it'll probably give Ron a
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cardiac infarction, but what the heck, he's had it too easy
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lately.
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Oh, man, is this gonna be cool, assuming I can pull it off.
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Working title: "Messages from Earth."
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* _A bit of a bland title?_
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Whether it's "bland" or not depends on what the messsages might
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be, yes? The only thing I'll say for the episode is that it may be
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one of the biggest whams of the first half of year three, and one
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of our most ambitious episodes of the series. Generally, my
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feeling is that titles should augment the episode, or add
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something, or collapse something into a thematic whole. When you
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see what convictions are at hand, the episode "Convictions" as a
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title works better; ditto for "Messages."
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Besides, a nice, quiet, inoffensive little title gives me a better
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chance to sneak up behind you and whack the heck out of you....
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* "Messages," for my money, is so far the best we've ever done,
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though I'll be more able to lock that down once I've seen the
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final CGI. It and "Dreams" are real CGI blowouts; in the latter,
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there are literally 100 shots -- CGI, live action, and compositing
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-- in *four pages* of action. This is an all time record for us
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(and that doesn't count the stuff earlier in the episode).
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I don't usually go this far, but folks, let me give you my
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personal guarantee: you're in for one hell of a ride come
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mid-season, with these three episodes.
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* Not only did "Messages From Earth" come out as well as I'd hoped
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or thought it would, it came out *better*. It is, potentially,
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either one of the best or the best thing we've ever done in the
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whole series to date. There are some episodes that come close this
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season, like "Point of No Return," "A Late Delivery From Avalon,"
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"Sic Transit Vir" (for absolutely different reasons), and parts of
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"Dust to Dust," but so far -- at least until the CGI for "Severed
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Dreams" is finished, which has at least a shot at knocking
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"Messages" out of the box -- "Messages" is as close to perfect as
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we've ever come.
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Like "The Coming of Shadows" there's a real sense of a *story*
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being told, and major events happening at breakneck speed. It's
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just a joy to watch.
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* I'd suggest, btw, that if there are any folks you've been waiting
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to bring into the fold on B5, you may want to consider 8 and 9 in
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the new cycle, the last of that bunch in February. Eight is
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potentially one of the best, possibly the best episode we've
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produced to date.
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* Here's something that occured to me today. Any time you have
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someone you're trying to convince about the quality of a show, and
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you say, "Here, just watch it next week," that's always the one
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that comes a-cropper.
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"Messages From Earth" airing this coming week is possibly the best
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thing we've done to that point. It's guaranteed to grab anybody
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who watches it. So this would be a good one to use.
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Pick ten friends who you know haven't yet tried B5, or are
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diffident about it, and give them a call. Tell them to give THIS
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one a look. Then all you have to do is sit back, and wait for the
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jaws to drop.
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* "Messages From Earth" - This begins the three-episode mini-arc
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within the larger arc that, by its conclusion, totally changes the
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structure of the B5 universe. A mega-wham episode. Because so much
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comes to a head so quickly, little can be said about it without
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spoiling stuff. Our characters begin making the final and
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irrevocable steps that will put them on a collision course with
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everything they have believed in until now. There are four or five
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episodes this season that push the limits of our effects and CGI
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to the absolute wall; this is one of the biggest.
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* Re: an "edge" to the show....I suspect you're going to get all the
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edge you could possibly want with episodes 8, 9 and especially 10.
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Be *very* careful what you wish for.
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* "...I didn't think things would start moving this fast so soon!"
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Well, this is what I kinda kept trying to tell people was coming,
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when they said things were moving too slowly....
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* Randy, I honestly don't think, after episodes 8-10 have aired,
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that you're going to have any problems with how fast the main
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story is progressing. And do bear in mind that the "main story"
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isn't just the war; if you wanted to do that, you'd just do Space
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A&B. It's operating on a whole lot of other levels.
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Nonetheless...this entire season is much faster overall in
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developing than the two before. The first two seasons we were
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mainly putting the guns into position. Now we're pulling all the
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triggers.
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* Thanks. Bruce did an excellet job in this episode, I agree. As did
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everyone else. This is, in my opinion, about as flawless an
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episode as we have ever made. It's one of those cases where the
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sum is even greater than the sum of its parts...and the sum of its
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parts ain't bad.
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From here on through the next batch, the intensity level continues
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to crank up.
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We definitely pushed the envelope in terms of EFX this time out;
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mixing and matching, and in sheer amounts of shots, and their
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complexity. But the result, I think, is eminently worth the
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effort.
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* I entirely agree; I think she did a dynamite job as Kirkish.
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Totally convincing. When she walked into the audition, and did the
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part, there was no question...it was her.
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* [35]About the alien city
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The executive producer thinks, "He's mistaken, has to be; it must
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be a series of patterns in the image that look like a city." Being
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a thorough person, however, the executive producer fires up his
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copy of the tape, and fast forwards to the shot in question.
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Pauses, then advances, frame by frame.
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Then stops. The executive producer stares at the screen for a
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very, very long time. Eventually, words form. The executive
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producer knows that if he posts those words here, not only will
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they throw him off the system, they will come to his house, burn
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it down, and sow the ground with salt.
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The executive producer knows what that single frame is, knows that
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it has nothing to do with his show, knows that it's a frame from
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Hypernauts that somehow crossed into the EFX shot in
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double-exposure via a computer glitch while rendering. No one saw
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it. No one noticed it. Until now.
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Tomorrow morning, the executive producer is going to make phone
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calls, and say all the words he can't say here. When he is
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finished, twenty seven miles of telephone coaxial cable are going
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to hang melted from the telephone poles. Shortly thereafter, the
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executive producer is going to put a gun to his head and blow his
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brains out, in the sure knowledge that if he does not do so, he
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will most assuredly do it to someone else.
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The executive producer thanks you for bringing this to his
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attention, and would write further, but is currently modeming from
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a laptop computer on top of his roof, from which he is considering
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jumping, and the wind up here is causing line noise.
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* _The White Star looked different._
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Different camera work, mainly.
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* The Eternal Vigilance line is from history, not Wing Commander.
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Ten Green Drazi points to the person who can name its origin.
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* _Where's the press during all this Nightwatch buildup?_
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You'll find more on this in the next three episodes.
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* You need a clear and present danger, and with a population that
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nearly got wiped out by the Minbari, who are skittish to begin
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with, you drag out the possibility of someone else doing the same
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thing and it makes it a lot easier to do what you want to do.
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* _Why aren't eggs and bacon available?_
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Mainly it's the expense involved per volume. It still costs big
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bucks, and you generally need refrigeration.
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* Basically, it's the cost involved in transporting something as
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basically trivial as eggs. Yes, it can be done, but the cost per
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egg would be quite substantial, given limited space in ships.
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Space flight is still very expensive.
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And yes, a shadow vessel has one "core" sentient, and once in,
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it's very difficult for that person to ever get out again.
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* _Wouldn't Ivanova's religion keep her from eating bacon?_
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Ivanova's not what you'd call orthodox under any circumstances.
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* _What was the blue goop?_
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Actually, I think it was blueberry yogurt.
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* _Any relation to the moment of perfect beauty in [36]"There All
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the Honor Lies?"_
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Yes, the way Sheridan removes his EA pin here is an echo, or a
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shadow, so to speak, of his moment in "Honor." The latter is meant
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to sort of indicate what might be ahead for him, what he may have
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to do at some point along the line. He has to give up things that
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mean something to him. (We'll get more of this philosophy in a few
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more eps, I don't want to get too specific here.) Visual
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foreshadowing.
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From here on in, things get very interesting....
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* Yes, what he's writing will, in time, become the Book of G'Kar.
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And correct, I went for a different feel in this episode, on the
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theory that a little change is a good thing, if used to a purpose.
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It's built like a series of waves, with quite moments in between.
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This is the second so far to strongly tie into the comic, yes.
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* _Does G'Kar consider his book on par with G'Quon's?_
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No, he hasn't thought of it that far yet...but it will find that
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role.
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* IXP has been in business, in one form or another, for between
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50-80 years.
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* _Who was the human in the Shadow ship?_
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It doesn't really matter in the long run; some poor shlub who got
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conned into it.
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* _Would a human be sane after piloting a Shadow ship?_
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Almost certainly not.
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* _Could someone on Sheridan's side "pilot" a Shadow ship, or are
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the ships intrinsically evil?_
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It's certainly a *very* good question.
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* No, I wouldn't say there's a corrolation to life force and the
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shadow ships; they need a living organism as the central
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processing unit because an organic unit can think faster than most
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computer systems, and react faster in terms of formulating
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strategy and the like.
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* _What condition was the ship on Mars in?_
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It was dormant. The core element was dead, certainly.
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* Yes, the first batch of eps from season 3, up through 9 or so,
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give a lot more background on the shadow ships, what they are and
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how they work. And as you say, virtually everything in this show
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is here for a reason; there's an offhand remark from Garibaldi in
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"Infection" about his long struggle out of the Martian desert that
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pays off in both the comic, and in a third-season episode. So some
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of the year three stuff was being set up as early as episode 2 of
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year 1, in what was designed to look like just plain old throwaway
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dialogue.
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* _Is a Shadow ship itself a kind of Shadow?_
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It's not a kind of shadow, no.
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* _Is there an official name for the Shadow ships?_
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I just call them shadow vessels. For now.
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* _Why didn't Sheridan use the jumpgate trick again?_
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Because there wasn't a jumpgate he had access to, only a jump
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point created by the White Star. In the prior situation, he blew
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up a standing jump gate. The only one in the vicinity would be at
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the transfer point near Io, which if destroyed would seriously
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harm Earth interests.
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* Three days is the time to the jumpgate off Io. Once you're within
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our solar system, it takes another several days or more to reach
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Earth itself. It's fairly common to keep your jump gate a bit
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removed from your "core" planet so you have warning if any
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aggressors come out of it.
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* _How could the Agamemnon detect the White Star?_
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It can be for a number of reasons. The White Star was moving
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through a highly charged atmosphere, which would leave detectable
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trails; it was being fired at by the shadow vessel, which would've
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attracted considerable attention from the flares; diving at that
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speed and coming back up there would be considerble heat on the
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surface of the ship (not normally a problem in space); and it was
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pretty much shaken up/partially damaged during the fight. Also, at
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that range, once you're near enough, you can pick it up visually
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as it gets close; it's not a cloaking system, only a stealth
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system.
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* Neither situation relied on introducing new technology, only on
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taking advantage of what's known currently. It's a simple
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equation: ship A is more powerful than ship B. In a head-to-head
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situation, ship A (shadow) will destroy ship B (white star). If
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you can't directly confront a stronger enemy, you have to find
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some way to work around it, outsmart it. (And fortunately, this
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one was flawed, "insane," as Delenn put it.)
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And the minbari know more than they're saying. But then that's
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generally true of them.
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And yes, the shadow ship arrived with a new "core" for the buried
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ship.
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* _How does Delenn know so much about Shadow ships?_
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The info came from the Vorlons, and from the last war the Minbari
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fought against them.
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* The ship was hidden there to avoid it being destroyed during the
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war. May or may not see General Franklin again anytime soon.
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* The shadows had allies, who watched over their cities, maintained
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their machines, waited for their awakening...one of their tasks
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was to send out one of the few dormant shadow vessels whenever one
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was discovered or unearthed. This way, slowly, over centuries, the
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fleet would be built back up in strength.
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* There are no shadow vessels buried on Narn, no. The shadow
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influence on the Psi Corps has been growing for about 7 years now.
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* _Who sent the second ship to Mars?_
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They had some of their servants and allies taking care of things;
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whenever a signal was sent, and a ship found, they'd dispatch one
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of the standby ships to go and pick it up, slowly regathering
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their forces.
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* _How is Sheridan going to defeat a Shadow ship head-to-head?_
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Exactly. The goal would seem to be impossible. So how do we do it?
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Is there a vulnerability that's been laid out but not picked up
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yet? Is there an advantage we don't necessarily see yet?
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We have to be smarter. Humans are at our best when against the
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wall. And we have to do it ourselves, in the final analysis,
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nobody else can do it for us.
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* _Was the spine that the White Star shot off the Shadow vessel
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recovered?_
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Nope.
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* The shadow vessel was still a little wobbly from its long
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hibernation and the improper melding.
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* Given that we're looking at a high-energy weapon capable of
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burning through a four-mile wide Narn orbital base as though it
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were made of butter, it's putting out enough energy, I figured, to
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lead to a reaction with the hydrogen, whether it's a fusion
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reaction of some other.
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We're talking a concentrated level of energy equal to a
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thermonuclear reaction on a controlled level, or a fusion weapons
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system with an energy output well beyond contemporary science to
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calculate (particularly since this system is capable of delivering
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the energy, undiluted, to targets tens or dozens of miles
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distant).
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* Yeah, perhaps a better word than ignite could've been used. But
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hey, the guy was being shot at...I'd be sitting in a corner going
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bibble-bibble...
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* _About the massing Shadow forces_
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The forces will continue to build over the course of this season.
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The White Star would be detected because it was inside the
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atmosphere, where it could be picked up by its emissions, the
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disruption caused in the air by the engines, and frankly by plain
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sight.
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* _What's the symbol at the front of the White Star bridge?_
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The symbol on the WS isn't on the floor, it's the top of a console
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that can be used for holographic tactical displays.
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* _The shot of G'Kar writing was flipped!_
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Not a gaffe; we flopped the shot because the writing was done left
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to right, instead of right to left, which is Narnish script.
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* Thanks. We've featured Minbari script going straight up and down
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like Japanese, right to left with Narns, and other variations.
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Because they would naturally occur.
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* Also, bear in mind that Sheridan went into Earth-space knowing the
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risks. For him to fire on the Aggy would be selfish, and wrong; he
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knew full well that this could be a one-way ride.
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If you're going to have a situation where Sheridan fires on EA
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ships, it has to be the ONLY way of dealing with the situation,
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and it has to be SUPREMELY motivated, so that it's not just him or
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one of our guys who's at stake. It has to be a big situation to
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merit taking the lives of fellow officers, in the same service.
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* _Nobody seemed to be translating Sheridan's orders to the White
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Star's crew._
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Lennier was muttering his translations off-screen.
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That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
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* I think they know the White Star (aka the unidentified ship) got
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away, but they put the best face on it back home. Which is one
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more reason why Clark's declared martial law. Things are spinning
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out of control, he's in increasingly hot water back home, and he
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has to seize control. Whoever was in that alien ship knows too
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much about his operations...if that were to come out, he's
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finished.
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* _Are rights suspended during Clark's martial law?_
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Yes, right to assemble, free speech rights, they're all open to
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abridgement. Travel can also be restricted.
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* _What happened to Ivanova's discovery in [37]"Voices of
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Authority?"_
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That information was sent to Earth, where it's led directly to the
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series of current investigations that were launched...and which
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forced Clark's hand into declaring martial law to distract from
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all that.
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* _Are we near the end of the Nightwatch plot thread?_
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The thread will diminish for a while, then return down the road in
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later seasons, after the story takes its third major turn.
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* _Why does anyone on Earth believe Clark?_
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It all depends on how you frame the issue...i.e., the attacks are
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groundless, baseless, and part of a campaign to destroy the
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government, he's the attacked innocent....
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* _Sheridan's conspiracy should be falling apart about now._
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Of course it can't hold. And they're going to go through plenty of
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fire. Remember, this is the first of three that accomplish that.
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Each escalates upon what went before. Don't worry...you'll get
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your wish.
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* Yes, the current mini-arc (8-10) is the second major turn in the
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storyline. The third starts with the last episode of this season,
|
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going into the fourth year. Then you've got one more big turn
|
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about the last quarter or one-third of year four, and then a bit
|
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of a flip at the end.
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* _We already knew everything this episode revealed._
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If I can, let me address one aspect of this, for your
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consideration.
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Back when I was working on MURDER, SHE WROTE, we'd sometimes get
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letters saying, "This wasn't a good episode because I figured out
|
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the ending. It wasn't a surprise." (Which is, to some extent, your
|
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point here.)
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The problem we had with that particular letter was this: of COURSE
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you figured it out. Because you were paying attention to all the
|
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clues we had put out there in the episode.
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There seems to be this notion that nobody should be able to jump
|
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ahead, or else something's wrong or bad about the episode.
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Absolutely not true. If you're going to play fair with the
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audience, whether it's B5 or M,SW, you've got to put enough bits
|
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of information out on the table so that the person who's really
|
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following it can figure it out...so that at the end, those who
|
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*didn't* figure it out can back up the tape, watch for the clues
|
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or leads, and see where it all came from. That's playing fair.
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If NObody gets it, you haven't done your job right.
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If EVERYbody gets it, you haven't done your job right.
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The best case scenario is a bell-shaped curve. Some don't have a
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clue what's coming, some manage to figure it out, and the majority
|
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have a kind of vague sense where it's going, but there are still
|
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surprises along the way. If the bell-curve shifts one direction or
|
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the other, then you're in trouble.
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So far, B5 seems to be hewing right to the bell-curve. For every
|
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person who says "okay, this was expected," there's been another
|
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saying, "I had no *idea* this was going to happen here, or so
|
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fast." (Many of these have been right on this forum, in fact.)
|
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Finally, do bear in mind that you have an advantage here that 99%
|
|
of all the viewers don't: the discussion here on CIS, and direct
|
|
comments from me. For instance, I just noted elsewhere that we've
|
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got major turns at the end of this season, and one 2/3rds into
|
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year 4. Now, if at those points, somebody says, "Well, I knew this
|
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was coming, that's bad," I intend to whap them, because the reason
|
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they likely knew it was coming was because I *said so* right here.
|
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But that same 99% doesn't have this advantage.
|
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This is the main difference I've noted in the mail that's come in:
|
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the net-folks are constantly trying to figure out what's coming up
|
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next, treating it like a mystery story (which, really, it's not,
|
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any more than ANY novel is a mystery in that you don't necessarily
|
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know its turns and twists as you're reading it), whereas the
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non-netted folks tend to just take it as it comes.
|
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See, that's the other part of this. People on the nets tend to
|
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treat it as though it's a mystery novel, and when it doesn't hit
|
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that aspect, say it's flawed as a result...when it was never
|
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INTENDED to function as a mystery novel. It's a novel period. A
|
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mystery novel depends absolutely on the riddle at the center of
|
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it. This is a saga, which uses a different structure. It isn't a
|
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mystery any more than Lord of the Rings is a mystery, even though
|
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when I first read it I was wondering what was going to happen
|
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next.
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Also, a mystery novel is done when the mystery is finally
|
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unraveled. Not so the B5 story. By the end of this season, most of
|
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the mysteries will be unraveled, and the pieces laid on the table
|
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for all to see. It then becomes a matter of what the characters
|
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*do* about it thereafter.
|
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If I'm doing my job right, and setting up things to come properly,
|
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and giving all the clues to it, then by definition a certain
|
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number of people HAVE to figure out what's coming. As long as it's
|
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the smaller portion, that's as it *should* be. So you'll
|
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understand why I tend to get in here for a moment when that's held
|
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up as something bad or poorly done. (And, again, even you note
|
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that the only reason you knew about the shadows on Mars was via
|
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reading it here, or others read it via the comics. Again, that's a
|
|
very small portion of the audience; most I've heard from had NO
|
|
idea about that aspect of it. If you hadn't read it here, you
|
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likely would have been surprised by it.)
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Anyway, just something to consider in all of this....
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* "Was the "package" mentioned in Exo the blonde woman giving us the
|
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Mars Shadow info? Or was it the eggs and bacon? Or have we not
|
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seen it yet?"
|
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Yes, the package referred to Kirkish.
|
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"It seems Sheridan is destroying his Shadow ships by using tricks
|
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- not a straight up battle. At some point won't he be one on one
|
|
with a Shadow and have to deal with it?"
|
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Sooner or later. Right now he's outgunned hideously. He'll have to
|
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find a way.
|
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"At some point won't Sheridan have to fight Earth? (I really don't
|
|
expect an answer to this one)"
|
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Stick around.
|
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* _Why didn't Kirkish notice the huge Psi-Corps installation as
|
|
shown in the comic?_
|
|
The building was a lot bigger in the book than it should've been,
|
|
more like a quonset hut arrangment hastily erected.
|
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* I don't know if the shadow pilot was aware of the Psi Corps
|
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research installation...they're not really aware of much of
|
|
*anything*, except their orders...I'd just suggest that there may
|
|
be something beneath that particular installation, and a reason
|
|
they built it there.
|
|
* _Why didn't Garibaldi mention he was with Sinclair?_
|
|
There was an outsider, Kirkish, in the room. Yes, she's helped
|
|
him, but he's still going to hold back some info because he
|
|
doesn't know what impact it might have on Sinclair. He's
|
|
protective of him.
|
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* _Didn't Sheridan already know about the badge, from the comic
|
|
issue [38]"Silent Enemies?"_
|
|
I believe Sheridan wasn't shown the badge in the comic; and
|
|
Garibaldi is always cautious about what he says in front of
|
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others, like Kirkish.
|
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* Yes, Kosh should've been there. Kosh wasn't. Kosh hasn't been
|
|
carrying his weight, if you ask me. I hope this doesn't cause a
|
|
problem somewhere....
|
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* Don't have the shadow dimensions offhand; and yes, you'd think
|
|
Sheridan might begin to wonder about Kosh's level of involvement.
|
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* _Weren't the cameras at Ganymede recording?_
|
|
Of course. But who controls those cameras? Answer: the very folks
|
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who wouldn't want it to get out what they had there.
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