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_Contents:_ [9]Overview - [10]Backplot - [11]Questions - [12]Analysis
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- [13]Notes - [14]JMS
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Overview
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Dr. Franklin asks Sinclair to intermediate with an alien family
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who, because of their religious beliefs, refuse to allow surgery
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that would save their dying child. [15]Silvana Gallardo as Dr. Maya
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Hernandez. [16]Jonathon Kaplan as Shon. [17]Tricia O'Neil as M'Ola.
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[18]Stephen Lee as Tharg.
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Sub-genre: Drama
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[19]P5 Rating: [20]7.74
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Production number: 105
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Original air date: April 27, 1994
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Written by David Gerrold
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Directed by Richard Compton
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Backplot
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* Some outside influence has interfered with the Minbari religion in
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the past.
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* The Children of Time, a minor race with strong religious beliefs,
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would rather let one of their number die than allow invasive
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surgery, which they believe destroys the soul.
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Unanswered Questions
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* How did Ivanova defeat or escape all those raiders? There is some
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slight evidence she's working with them (cf. [21]"Midnight on the
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Firing Line".)
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Analysis
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* Franklin's willingness to break the rules for a cause he believes
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in, though indicative of a strong moral character, seems likely to
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get him into hot water at some point.
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* On the other hand, Sinclair doesn't want to be placed in a
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position in which he has to stop Franklin from doing what he
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believes in; Sinclair would rather sidestep the issue than have
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his hand forced. This is consistent with his handling of the
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Senator's instructions in [22]"Midnight on the Firing Line."
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* The parents' reaction when Delenn refused to help could be viewed
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as hypocritical; they were perfectly willing to ask Delenn to
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violate _her_ beliefs so they wouldn't have to violate their own.
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Notes
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* Kosh is aware that he was examined by Dr. Kyle (cf. [23]"The
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Gathering".) When he's asked how _he_ would feel if a doctor
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performed an operation on him, he says, "The avalanche has already
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begun. It is too late for the pebbles to vote."
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* The Shakespeare corporation and the pfingle eggs are references to
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David Gerrold's novels "Under the Eye of God" and "Covenant of
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Justice."
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jms speaks
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* By the way, here's something interesting: an outline got turned in
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this week for an episode which I won't identify just now. Came in
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from one of our writers, based on an assigned premise. It's
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something you've never seen done in ANY SF-TV series, and I don't
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think has ever been done in TV overall. A very daring little
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story.
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Word finally came back from our liaison with PTEN. "Number one,
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this is absolutely against the demographics on the show. Number
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two, no studio or network executive in his right *mind* would EVER
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approve this story in a million years. Number three...it's a hell
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of a story, I love it, let's do it."
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This has been emblematic of our relationship with PTEN: they've
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left us alone, and are trusting us in our storytelling. We want to
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go right out to the very edge, and they're letting us, which is
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wonderful. They've been, and continue to be, terrific to work
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with.
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If the end of this particular story doesn't absolutely floor you,
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nothing will.
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* When I developed the basic Believers story, and was looking for
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someone to assign it to, David was the first person we went to. He
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asked me at the time why him...he's more generally associated with
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humorous stuff. I had my reasons. See, lately, David adopted a
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young boy, about the same age as Shon. So about halfway into the
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outline, David called and said, "NOW I understand." I knew that
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having a child of his own now would mean that the story would be a
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lot more personal. Especially the end scene, which I knew would
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have to be done *very* carefully. I think David did a great job,
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and under his guidance it turned into a very moving episode. And
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with any luck, he'll write more down the road.
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* There's some small amount of blurring that goes on in this show; a
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freelancer turns in a script, and things get added. For instance,
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there was a need to really tighten up the story in "Believers,"
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which could best be done by bringing in a small B story, which
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would allow us to streamline and intensify the main story. So I
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wrote the B story and slipped it in.
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* Today David Gerrold came by the set to watch some of the shooting
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on his episode, "Believers." Unlike many shows, which basically
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throw the writer off the set, our writers are welcome to hang
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around. It's not only okay, it's *expected* that the writer will
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be there at some point, to be a part of the process. David was
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quite ebullient about the whole thing; he thinks that this is the
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best script he's ever written, and it's being filmed exactly as
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he'd hoped, if not better. So there he was, getting autographs,
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muttering something about somebody named "Hugo...."
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What was interesting was one comment he made, which echoed almost
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verbatim something D.C. Fontana said when she came by the stage:
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that the atmosphere on set, with the crew, the cast, the
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production people is exactly the same as it was on the first
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season of the original Star Trek.
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* I know from pfingle eggs...I let David have the reference
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because... well, I don't know anymore...I think water torture was
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involved.
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* _Who wrote Kosh's line about the avalanche?_
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That was Gerrold, as I recall.
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* _Similarity between "Believers" & a DS9 novel?_
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A couple points. 1) When "Believers" was written, Peter's book
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hadn't yet hit the stands. 2) Peter likely got his notion of the
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sick kid and the religious parents from the same basic source we
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did: the headlines. This has been an ongoing problem in real life
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for some time. So he took that real premise, and did one story
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based on it, and we did another extrapolation. This notion did
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*not* originate in the Trek universe....
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* And yeah, TV generally doesn't do this kind of ending. Which is
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why we did it...and our liaison at Warner Bros. deserves a lot of
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credit for letting us do it.
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* It was important to tell David to pull no punches because in TV,
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most producers *want* you to do so, and he had to know going in
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that this was the way the story would go. David's a great writer,
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and David's a professional...meaning he understands where the
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general limits of TV are. If you're going to move the lines
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around, it behooves you to tell your writer that. Knowing the
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rules, he went out and did a bangup job on the episode.
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* I view Delenn's comment about "suffering the interference of
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others" in regards to matters of the soul in "Believers" to be a
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reference to the Soul Hunter.
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* What happened to Ivanova when she encountered the raiders? She got
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away by long-distance firing as she retreated as fast as she
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could, taking shots as she went. It wouldn't look real exciting in
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the long run.
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* How Ivanova got away from the Raiders was taking advantage of her
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lead to run away, occasionally firing backward to deter pursuit,
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until she got to the jumpgate. It wasn't really anything
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dramatically interesting, and at that point you would start
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distracting from the main plot...and that couldn't be allowed to
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happen. There's really no place in the rest of the act where you
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can cut in without destroying it. And in the tag there's no room
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for the pursuit, only the arrival.
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* Excuse me....
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You don't think that "Believers" was SF. Tough.
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No, it didn't have warp gates, or tachyon emitters, or lots of
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technobabble...it was about people. And the dilemmas they face.
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Part of what has screwed up so much of SF-TV is this sense that
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you must utterly divorce yourself from current issues, from
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current problems, from taking on issues of today and extrapolating
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them into the future, by way of aliens or SF constructs. And that
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is *precisely* why so much of contemporary SF-TV is barren and
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lifeless and irrelevant...and *precisely* why such series as the
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original Star Trek, and Outer Limits, and Twilight Zone are with
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us today.
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Like Rod Serling and Gene Roddenberry and Joe Stefano and Reginald
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Rose and Arch Oboler and Norman Corwin and a bunch of other
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writers whose typewriters I'm not fit to touch, my goal in part is
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to simply tell good stories within an SF setting. And by SF I mean
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speculative fiction, which sometimes touches on hard-SF aspects,
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and sometimes doesn't. Speculative fiction means you look at how
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society changes, how cultures interact with one another, how
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belief systems come into conflict. And as someone else here noted
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recently, anthropology and sociology are also sciences; soft
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sciences, to be sure, but sciences nonetheless.
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It's been pointed out that TV-SF is generally 20-30 years behind
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print SF. This whole conversation proves the point quite
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succinctly. In the 1960s or so, along came the New Wave of SF,
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which eschewed hardware for stories about the human condition set
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against an SF background. And the fanzines and prozines and
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techno-loving pundits of hard-SF declared it heresy, said it
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wasn't SF, this is crap. And eventually they were steamrolled, and
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print SF grew up a little. Now the argument has come to settle
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here. Well, fine. So be it.
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I think it was Arthur C. Clarke who said that SF is anything I
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point to and say, "That's SF." Go pick up a copy of "A Canticle
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for Liebowitz," one of the real singular masterpieces of the
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science fiction genre, and it won't fit the narrow criteria you've
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set up for what qualifies as SF by your lights.
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There is a tendency among the more radical hard-SF proponents to
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stamp their feet and hold their breath until they turn blue, to
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threaten that unless the book changes or the field comes around or
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the series cottens to *their* specific, narrow version of what SF
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is -- and that definition changes from person to person -- they'll
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take their ball and their bat and go home. Fine and good. And the
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millions who come to take their place in the bleachers and on the
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field will get to have all the fun.
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Some of our episodes will fit your definition of SF. Some will
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not. This worries me not at all.
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* The area that cannot be opened is the chest area, primarily; a
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nick or cut or scratch really doesn't count; it's puncturing to
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the body cavity wherein the soul is housed.
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* No, the parents were not charged with murder. When a species on
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the station acts against one of their own kind in a particular
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way, and no other species is affected, they are judged by the laws
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that apply to their own species and culture. In their culture,
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what they did is not a crime, so they received no punishment. Had
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they done this to a human, then yes, they would have been charged
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with murder.
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* I'm not quite sure if we're talking about the same thing; the two
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parents never said that the kid would die if he underwent the
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surgery, only that his soul would escape. This would leave him
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"soul-dead," for lack of a better phrase. And how are we to tell
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that they weren't right? I don't think it's quite as cut and dried
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as you seem to present. (And again, they were acting very much out
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of their real beliefs of how the universe operates. If someone
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here is injured, and declared brain dead, most folks think it's
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okay to pull the plug...even though one could make the argument
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that there's still a living soul in the body. This is the opposite
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situation; one may argue that there is still a mind somewhere in
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the body, but the soul is dead or gone. The phrase they use is
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that they put the shell out of its misery. To their mind, he was
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dead already.)
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* Actually, I disagree when you say that the doctor was right. Says
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who? Not the parents. Not the episode. Nobody was really right,
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when you come down to it, except maybe Sinclair, who made the
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correct call. You say the boy was okay at the end...the parents
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didn't think so. Who's to say if there was or wasn't a soul
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inside?
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I think David's script walked a very fine line and really didn't
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endorse either side. (I've had people send me email upset because
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we showed that the parents were right, and others because we said
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the doctor was right, and others because neither was right and the
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ambiguity bothered them.)
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* Of course the surgical scars would've been a dead giveaway that
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surgery had been performed. Also, lying to them would have also
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been a violation of medical ethics. This was not a story about
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easy solutions.
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* There's a wonderful scene in "Fiddler on the Roof" where Tevya is
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caught in an argument between two Rabbis. The first one makes a
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point. "You're right!" Tevya says. The second Rabbi makes a
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contradictory point. "You're right!" Tevya says. A third Rabbi,
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looking on, says, "Wait a minute, they can't *both* be right."
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"You know," Tevya says, "you're right too."
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* A lot of our episodes are constructed to work as mirrors; you see
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what you put into it. "Believers" has been interpreted as pro-
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religion, anti-religion, and religion-neutral..."Quality" has been
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interpreted, as you note, as pro-capital punishment, and
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anti-capital punishment. We do, as you say, much prefer to leave
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the decision on what things mean to the viewer to hash out.
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A good story should provoke discussion, debate, argument...and the
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occasional bar fight.
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* The thing about "Believers" is that, really, nobody's right, and
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in their own way, from their point of view, everybody's right.
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* "The concept of loving parents being able to kill their child for
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their religions seems to be unrealistic."
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Funny...I seem to recall this little story in the Old Testament
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about how a good and wise man was asked by god to sacrifice his
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own son, to himself kill his own child, and he was willing to do
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it, and was only stopped by god saying, in essence, "April fool."
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* On the "predictable" argument...I can only shrug. The kid has a
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50/50 chance...he'll survive or die. And guessing the end isn't,
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for me, the key; this isn't a who-dunit; it's how our characters
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react on the way there, and what it *does* to them, I think.
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* Since I suggested the ending to David, right down to the candles,
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I suppose I'll take the rap...but the question you're raising
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isn't the issue. There are only two possible results: the kid
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lives, or the kid dies, there ain't much in-between. You ask, "Who
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on earth is going to side with people who kill their own child?"
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The audience isn't being asked to *side* with anyone, there IS no
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easy solution, and no one is 100% in the right.
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There is a wonderful short story, which we adapted for Twilight
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Zone, called "The Cold Equations," where a small shuttle is going
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from point A to point B. There is enough fuel for the shuttle, and
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one pilot, and no more. The ship is bringing medicine to save 500
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colonists. A young girl has stowed away on the ship to see her
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brother. She's discovered. If the pilot does nothing, the ship
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won't arrive, and he and the girl will die, and the colonists will
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die. If he sacrifices himself, she won't be able/won't know how to
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guide the ship to its destination. The only way out is to ask her
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to enter the airlock so he can space her and continue the mission.
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And that's what happens. You can't argue with math.
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Sometimes, there are no-win scenarios. And what matters then is
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how your characters react, what they do and say, and how it
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affects them. That, really, was the thrust of the episode. And to
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go back to your question, "Who on earth is going to side...."
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The operative word in your question is "Earth." No, no human is
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going to side with them (although I'd point out in the Bible that
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there is the story of Abraham, who was quite willing to murder his
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own son at god's request). They're not humans. They have a wholly
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different mindset, cultural background and belief system. People
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ask for ALIEN aliens, then judge them by human standards, and feel
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it's wrong if they don't behave like humans. These didn't. That's
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who and what they are. If humans side with them, or accept them,
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doesn't enter into it.
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* The choice *had* to be either/or. That was the point; to put the
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characters in a situation of conflict and see how they handle it.
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Sometimes in life there are ONLY two choices, neither of them
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good. Your message comes from a position of trying to avoid the
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hard choices. But the episode is ABOUT hard choices. It *has* to
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be either/or.
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To support your thesis, you bring up the "Cold Equations"
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alternate ending of the pilot cutting off both his legs to make up
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the weight differential. Lemme explain something to you. I was
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there. When we turned in the script, by Alan Brennert, MGM went
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nuts. "You can't have a sympathetic young woman commit suicide!
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It'll kill the ratings!" So they (the studio exec) suggested
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various "fixes." One was that instead of stepping willingly out
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the airlock, the pilot shoots her and has to deal with the guilt.
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(This by them is a *better* idea?) The other was the notion of the
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guy cutting off his legs to make up the weight.
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First and foremost, it was a dumb idea because he'd be in no shape
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to pilot the ship. Second it wouldn't be enough weight. And
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finally, the very *nature* of "The Cold Equations," what the very
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TITLE means, is that there are some occasions in which the choices
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are stark, and there is NO way around them. If the ship has
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X-weight, and the fuel is for Y weight, and Y is less than X, then
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you've got a problem that can only -- ONLY -- be resolved by
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someone walking out the airlock. (And yes, they tried dumping
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things, but the ship is lean, not much to get rid of.) That's why
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it's the COLD equations; not the LUKEWARM equations.
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I fought like hell to retain the original ending, and won. (You
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probably read about this, btw, in my articles for TZ Magazine.)
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This is studio-think, let's find a nice, unthreatening, safe,
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middle-ground where we can resolve this without anybody being
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upset, threatened or offended by the story. I'm sorry, but life
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sometimes hands you hard choices, there ARE either/or scenarios,
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in which nobody really wins, and SF should be exploring those as
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well as the fuzzy feel-good stories. It's time SF grew up a
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little, damn it, and started confronting hard questions that can't
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always be resolved by reversing the polarity on the metaphase
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unit.
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* Afterthought: I just wandered into the kitchen, still ranting (as
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I am wont to do), explained it to Kathryn...who brought me up
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short (as *she* is wont to do) by pointing out the antecedent to
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BOTH stories. The ultimate "hard choice" example in SF-TV is of
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course "The City on the Edge of Forever," fromST. There are only
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two choices, both hard: either Edith Keeler dies, or the Nazis win
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WW II. Kirk *has* to let her die; there's no other choice.
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It is, at the same moment, gratifying and annoying to have someone
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around who's smarter than I am....
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* There were no changes in dialogue made in "Believers" subsequent
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to the first airing.
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