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Babylon 5 posts by JMS for Jan 1, 1993 - Jan 18, 1993
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This file includes a compilation of posts on GEnie by J. Michael
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Straczynski in the Babylon 5 topic. The posts are copyright 1993 by
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J. Michael Straczynski with compilation copyright by GEnie.
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Topic 1 Mon Oct 26, 1992
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SF-FANTASY [Yog Sysop] at 18:50 EST
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Sub: Babylon 5
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Welcome to the Babylon 5 category! As always, offering or requesting copies
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of copyrighted material, whether it's the B5 Newsletter, photos, or the actual
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movie/episodes violates copyright law and SFRT policy.
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397 message(s) total.
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Category 18, Topic 1
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Message 73 Fri Jan 01, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 05:01 EST
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Will, jeez, that's amazing...you should've said something, the B5 family
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would've been there with cards and letters. How're you doing now? I know it
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can be a very traumatic experience, even once you're physically 100%.
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One more thing, Will. Email me your address.
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On other fronts....
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One week from today, we will (or should) be finished with
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sound/music/looping edits and the B5 pilot will be complete. It's both
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exhilirating to think about that...and there's also that post partum
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depression that hits whenever I finish a big project, a novel, or an episode
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of a series. In my head, all I can play over are the things we should've or
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could've done to make it even better...the scenes we should have trimmed, the
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scenes we should've dropped back in again, THIS angle on a fight instead of
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THAT one...you can play with these things forever. At some point, you just
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have to let go.
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Then the next phase -- the series -- rests in large measure in your
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hands, in terms of how fast we can get this puppy in gear.
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It's kind of funny, meanwhile...I've gotten a number of private responses
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to stuff I asked here, and one person told me a rather remarkable story,
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alongside Will's...without naming names, he'd taken it upon himself to
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proselytize about the show as much as possible, to tell as many people about
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it as he could.
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Apparently, he was on one system, and saw a young woman on-line, and
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called her into chat, something he was normally to shy EVER to do before.
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They began talking about the show -- she'd apparently heard a little about
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it, but not much -- and over time they began corresponding, and, in the words
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of the person who sent me the note, "We fell in love with each other."
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They've now met, and it looks like it might get serious indeed.
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Amazing. (When the person gives me his permission, I'll post the full
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note; he's a little sheepish of her finding out he said anything.)
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I think it's really kind of cool.
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Oh...one last thing. Several people have inquired privately how to send
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notes or stuff hard-copy. An address where I can be reached is 14431 Ventura
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Boulevard, Suite 260, Sherman Oaks, CA 91423.
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Onward.
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jms
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Category 18, Topic 1
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Message 89 Fri Jan 01, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 18:21 EST
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What an amazing group of posts...I'm speechless. It's gratifying to see
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that the process works, that this medium can be used to such good effect.
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Something that has always been important to me is de-mystifying the process.
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Lee mentioned somewhere uptopic that the on-line stuff has been going on for a
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long time, across various shows, from RGBs and Power through Zone and now to
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this. To de-mystify writing, Harlan writes in bookstore windows...I do this.
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I just got a private note today (oh, and speaking of notes, just address
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hard-copy mail to my name; it's a private mailing address, not a studio) from
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one fellow who just managed to get a development deal with a studio. It ain't
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big, but it's a start...and because of the discussion here, and elsewhere over
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the years, he has a better idea of what to expect, and how to prepare.
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This is an extremely tough business to crack. And the largest part of
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the problem is just getting accurate information. When I came to LA
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originally, I didn't know squat, and a long time -- a LONG time -- was wasted,
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time I now very much regret losing, because I just didn't fully or accurately
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understand How Things Worked. If this process can make the entry easier for
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another writer, or de-mystify what happens behind the screen, then all the
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better.
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And, selfishly, it has been great to get the input, to hear the
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questions, especially those I can't answer...because down the road you just
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KNOW that that question will come up eventually, and better to be hit with it
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now than blindsided later on. It's a rewarding, fascinating and challenging
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exchange. I suspect that a LOT of shows would be considerably improved for
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this kind of direct communication.
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Oh, yeah...and re the newsletter...if you ask Christy nice, I'm sure
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she'll send you the back issue. Tell her I said it was okay.
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jms
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Category 18, Topic 1
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Message 94 Fri Jan 01, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 22:42 EST
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That would be telling....
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jms
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"And they were carried off to Babylon...."
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Message 124 Sun Jan 03, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 19:05 EST
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I really don't know how to make an e-mail mailing list, and it would seem
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inappropriate to ask anyone here to go through the hassle of doing it for all
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1800-2000 people here to accommodate the handful with dishes. Or silverware,
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for that matter. If someone here would like to be your "Dish Buddy" and send
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you a note when it goes on, that might be one way of doing it.
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Re: kids/robots...the exact phrasing of that has gone through various
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permutations and paraphrasings; the specific line is "No kids or cute robots."
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The latter specifically entails entities such as Twiki (got the spelling right
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this time, thanks to whoever corrected me), who should be run down by a truck
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at the first opportunity. (In fact, I can say without hesitation that if you
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ever DO see what passes for a cute robot on this show, keep a close eye on it,
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because you'll probably see somebody drop an anvil on it REAL fast.)
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So this allows us to explore the question of robotics, but to do so in a
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fairly serious context. Because logically, 200+ years in the future there are
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going to be some changes; robotics will be more common, though likely in some
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different form. (If you've seen the promos or the pilot, you've seen the
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maintenance 'bot that checks out the hull of B5; it has arms, it moves, it's
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independent, it's a robot. It just doesn't begin its report with "Bida-bida-
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bida.")
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On the topic of kids...it's a deliberate decision to steer clear of that
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part, not because I think it's invalid, but because a) it's been done on
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another show, and its spinoff, rather intensively, and b) it's part of the SF
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stereotype, "We have to have kids because SF is a kid's genre."
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Might there be a story about a family of refugees who come seeking
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sanctuary, or opportunity elsewhere? Of course. But any kids in that family
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won't be at the *center* of the story. And they'll be gone by the end of the
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episode. It's also a matter of context; absent the scenario just posed, this
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is a place for businessmen, travelers, mappers, traders, diplomats and others,
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it's not a place for kids. It's also potentially a very DANGEROUS place.
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jms
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Message 126 Sun Jan 03, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 19:29 EST
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Rumors are exactly that...and as I've indicated, anything that happens
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of substance -- good, bad or indifferent -- you'll hear it from the source.
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How can PTEN be dead when it hasn't even AIRED yet? I've hered this same
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rumor from others, and have to say that if Creation is spreading this that
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they are being *highly* irresponsible. The facts again are these: the first
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night of programming goes on later this month. B5 airs the following month.
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Based on the ratings for all of the shows, they will then open a second night,
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or modify the first. And that will determine where (and when) B5 lands. It's
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a logistical question about when to expand.
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If anyone wanders back in that topic's direction and would like to re-
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post this as an official rebuttal, you're welcome to do so.
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I also hear they're showing the E! piece...guys, if you want to help us,
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there at Creation...don't
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jms
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Message 160 Mon Jan 04, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 22:30 EST
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My sense (what there is of it) is that in every show, you have to make
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choices. What, fundamentally, is the story you are telling? Who is your
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story about? Is it for adults, or children? I don't watch LA Law regularly,
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but I sort of poke my nose in from time to time, and I don't see a lot of
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kid's stories. One could well go to the producers of that show and say, "Why
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aren't you doing kid stories?" to which the only answer is, "That's not our
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show."
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I already said above that if families come through, there may be kids
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along. The point of clarification for me is that I don't want to do shows
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with kids at the center. First to distinguish us from other shows, and second
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because that's not the area that I want to concentrate on just now. Of course
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people still have kids, and of course some will come through B5; it's where
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one places them in the story that's at issue.
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It's often kinda funny...people say, on the one hand, "Yeah! Fight them
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studios! Don't let them tell you the kind of stories you oughta do!" Then,
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"But you've GOTTA do a story with kids!" or "This is the sort of story you
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HAVE to do."
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The only answer to that -- said without sarcasm, honest -- is "Do what I
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did...sell your own show." I don't mean that in any way harshly, I'm very
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serious about that. Whether it's a novelist, or a short story author, or a TV
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writer, or a screenwriter, we each of us has to decide fundamentally what it
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is we want to write about it, and define our choices. Would you call Larry
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Niven and say, "Listen, while you're in the middle of the Mote In God's Eye
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sequel, we need a really good section about kids." You let the man tell his
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story his way.
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This, for me, is just one of those areas on which I have planted my feet
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and sunk roots clear to the center of the planet. Now, it's altogether
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possible that some day long down the road, one story will occur to me, and
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I'll deal with that when and if it happens. But in the interim...it's vital,
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from my perspective, to make B5 a show by, for and about adults in adult
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relationships; not to invalidate the other stuff, but only as a sense of where
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this show's emphasis is. It's time to let the studios and the suits and the
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networks know that an SF series can survive without putting in the required
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child or teenager.
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jms
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Message 162 Mon Jan 04, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 22:54 EST
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Postscript to the preceding: that doesn't mean that I (or any other
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member of the B5 team) shouldn't be challenged on stuff like this.
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Challenges are good. First, they keep you on your toes. Second, it makes one
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verbalize why one has taken a certain stance, and it's at that point that
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weaknesses and fallacies in the argument become apparent. "The unexamined
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life" and all that. As I've noted before, sometimes the only way to get
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pertinent information is to ask impertinent questions.
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I love a good philosophical knock-down-drag-out.
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Meanwhile, on other fronts...
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I will tell you the truest thing I have learned about television in the
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process of making the B5 pilot. That quality is rare is not really
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remarkable; what's remarkable is that it gets done at ALL. Any show,
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regardless of quality. There are millions of details, the tiniest things that
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require constant shepherding. You're in the midst of doing one thing and
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somebody calls involved with another part of the show and says, "Look, we've
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got some question about whether the doors should go SHOOP! or BLOOP!, George
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thinks SHOOP, and we think he's right...unless you'd rather come listen to
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them youreself." And it's very easy to say, "Okay, just take care of it,"
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then find yourself sitting there a month later and saying, "Damn, why did we
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end up with a SHOOP! effect?"
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It's physically impossible to be in every place at all times, and you
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particularly don't want to be in a position where you start giving your people
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less room to play and be independent. There are just so many details that
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it's very easy to say, "Okay, fine, deal with it," or to not bother with
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something, that it becomes quickly apparent why it's so hard to find real
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quality out there. That kind of attention is a major pain in the butt. When
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you see it from this side, you're just amazed that it gets done at ALL.
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Just a thought for the day...
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BTW, for those who might be interested (all four of you), the very last
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episode I wrote for this season's "Murder, She Wrote" will air this coming
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Sunday. I haven't seen anything on it -- no dailies, no rough cuts -- so I
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have no idea how it came out, though I *hear* it came out well. Just FYI.
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Message 180 Tue Jan 05, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 22:35 EST
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RE: cliffhangers...not between episodes, certainly. Between seasons,
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it's...hard to explain. There are, or will be *changes* that happen from one
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season to another (as planned), specific events that take place that should
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bring one up short...but "cliffhanger" in the sense of leaving some guy
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hanging from a string over a lake of fire...no, no plans for such at this
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time.
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RE: kids...boy, that one sure hit a nerve on both sides, didn't it?
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That's good. An argument like this is what a show or story should do, get
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people discussing the issues.
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Meanwhile, on other areas....
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****WOW****
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I was in the editing bay today during the pre-dub of B5 (which I'll
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explain more , which btw has a nifty huge projection screen, twelve or fifteen
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feet across, so I got to see some of the show as if at a theater...plays
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pretty well.
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Anyway...what a pre-dub is, is this: those who saw the earlier version of
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the pilot will remember, for instance, the scenes in the main corridor of the
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station (well, one of them, anyway). You have Sinclair and Garibaldi talking.
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It's an un-mixed scene...just as filmed, there are just two guys talking. All
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the rest of the set is silent.
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But now...NOW...you're in the editing bay, and now you add in the
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background voices, human and alien...mechanical sounds nearby...an intercom
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voice advertising station services...then layer in the music, and suddenly
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it's a MOVIE! Someone said that sound is half of a movie, and you forget that
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until it hits you in the face.
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The pre-dub is where you layer in the voice tracks (original, from the
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production; adr (automatic dialogue replacement) for lines that were not
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sufficiently audible or need to be looped; incidental dialogue (computers,
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background characters) and walla (general crowd sounds). You decide how much
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of any of these is too much, how much more you need, what the balance is...if
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you need to use the surround capability to put this voice HERE or THERE....
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Then we previewed some scenes with music, and did a little of the same
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there (we'll do more during the final mix Thursday through Tuesday). For
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instance...most music cues are anywhere from a few seconds long to maybe a
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minute or more. Ours tend to be longish...the longest is a cue that lasts 7.5
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minutes, and goes inside the station, outside the station, to different
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*parts* of the station, and the music continues throughout. We figured that
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we needed to better differentiate the sound inside vs. outside the
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station...so in the music cue, we drop the electric guitar out of the mix for
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the inside scenes, and put it back in for the outside scenes, for instance.
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The result, basically, being that it becomes a *M*O*V*I*E* for the first
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time. And boy, it cooks, lemme tell you. There are moments of absolute and
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inutterable self-doubt in a project like this, especially when paired with the
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monumental press machine from elsewhere which is doing everything possible to
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bury us in the interests of preserving an economic monopoly and critics who
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figure we're a clone of another show. But then you turn around and see
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something like this, and you know it's going to work...and it really helps.
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jms
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Message 208 Thu Jan 07, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 03:44 EST
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Ah, except, Gary, for the reason I picked that particular metaphor; this
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ain't Sudden Death, as with football.
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This one's going to the judges at the end of the round, and the case will
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be decided...win, lose or draw...on the merits of the performance in the ring,
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not on hype (on either side), not on good feelings, but on the quality of the
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work, which is as it should be. Only thing I've ever asked at any point in my
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life is a fair fight on a level playing field. Then let things fall as they
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may.
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And as for the judges...look in the mirror.
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jms
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Message 223 Fri Jan 08, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 00:41 EST
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Yeah, I agree, the pointing-rods-and-magically-changing-colors on hair
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and stuff is kinda old (though it surfaced in Total Recall). No plans for it,
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that's for sure.
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jms
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Message 230 Fri Jan 08, 1993
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STRACZYNSKI [Joe] at 03:46 EST
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Aquila...let me try this again, since you may have missed it in other
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postings. Our current situation is ironic in that it has nothing really to do
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with our show, but rather with the network.
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The chronology, and our situation, is simple.
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1) November 1991: Time Trax, Kung Fu and B5 contend among each other for
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the first night of programming on the new network. There are ONLY TWO SLOTS
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AVAILABLE, two hours. B5 and TT have the inside track, but there's a question
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as to whether or not B5 can be done for TV *at all* given what we were
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promising (a huge saga, state of the art EFX, a large cast, that sort of
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thing). So we have to answer that question by making a pilot. The other two
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shows go into series production at that time.
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2) They start filming episodes in August, about the same time we start
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the pilot.
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3) We finish the pilot (barring our current last phase of post
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production). Warners LOVES the show. The stations, which have always been
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big on the show, WANT the show. Warners tries to convince the local stations
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to open up a second night of programming, with B5 as the anchor. The stations
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love the idea...but don't want to open up a second night until they get the
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ratings on ALL THE SHOWS. Not just B5. If all the shows are big hits, then
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they open the second night with Bt as the anchor. If one doesn't perform,
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then B5 becomes the replacement.
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Point being...and I can't stress this enough...there is no -- repeat, NO -
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- problem with Warners or the stations in terms of confidence or anything
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