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- Overview
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- Sheridan launches a preemptive strike against the Shadows. Franklin
- jeopardizes his life while trying to do a good deed. [15]Shirley
- Prestia as Barbara. [16]Melissa Gilbert as Anna.
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- [17]P5 Rating: [18]9.25
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- Production number: 321
- Original air week: September 15, 1996 (UK)
- October 21, 1996 (US)
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- Written by J. Michael Straczynski
- Directed by Kim Friedman
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- Backplot
-
- * In Minbari tradition, when two Minbari become close it is the
- custom for the female to keep vigil at the male's side for three
- nights while he sleeps. This is thought to reveal the male's true
- personality, because while you're asleep, you can't keep up your
- guard, and this helps the female decide whether the relationship
- should continue.
-
- Unanswered Questions
-
- * How many ships did the League worlds withhold from the battle?
- * How many ships were destroyed in the battle? How many people died?
- * Why has Anna Sheridan come to Babylon 5? Is she as much of a pawn
- of the Shadows as Morden? (See [19]Analysis)
- * How will Anna Sheridan's presence affect Sheridan's
- near-engagement to Delenn?
- * How did Anna get into Sheridan's quarters?
- * Why have the Shadows not yet attacked Babylon 5?
- * How badly were the Shadows hurt by this battle?
- * Why did Sheridan keep dreaming the dream after Kosh died? Is it
- because of the piece of the Vorlon inside of him, and if so, is it
- somehow guiding him?
- * How did Anna know Delenn's name? Did Morden tell her?
- * Were the Vorlons approached to be part of the battle fleet?
- * Who else might have survived the Icarus?
-
- Analysis
-
- * In this battle, it's said that for each Shadow ship that was
- destroyed, two Army of Light ships were destroyed. This begs the
- question: who has more ships, the Army of Light, or the Shadows?
- And if the Shadows have as many or more, what does that bode for
- the coming battles of this war?
- * It's plausible that Anna Sheridan is acting on behalf of the
- Shadows just as Morden is. Will Sheridan react to her presence
- with an understanding that she's now an emissary of the Shadows?
- * Delenn had a flashforward to Anna's arrival ([20]"War Without End,
- Part Two.") Why, then, was she surprised to see Anna? Perhaps she
- didn't expect it to happen that night. It's also true that Anna
- didn't identify herself in Delenn's flash, so perhaps Delenn
- didn't get as complete a view of the future as Sheridan (and
- earlier, Garibaldi and Sinclair) did.
- * This episode resolves, at least initially, most of Sheridan's
- dream from [21]"All Alone in the Night." Sheridan is "the hand,"
- one half of a pair of opposing forces. He wears the Psi Corps
- badge to signify their alliance with Bester, and his position as
- someone in charge of large numbers of telepaths. Ivanova's
- statement, "Do you know who I am?" refers to her latent telepathic
- ability ([22]"Divided Loyalties.") However, it's still not clear
- who the "man in between" is. It's also not clear whether
- Sheridan's analysis, even with the help of Delenn and Ivanova, is
- actually correct.
- * Perhaps Anna Sheridan is the "man in between" from Sheridan's
- dream, despite the personal pronoun problems. Or perhaps she's an
- envoy of that man.
- * "The man in between" implies someone on the other side. Who might
- that be?
- * Sheridan openly talked about Ivanova's latent telepathy in front
- of Delenn. Does Ivanova no longer consider it such a secret, now
- that she's presumably beyond the reach of the Psi Corps? Or does
- Sheridan simply trust Delenn so much that it didn't occur to him
- he might be violating Ivanova's trust?
- * Who is the third spotlight on the Minbari flagship meant for? Most
- likely it's simply a result of the Minbari doing everything in
- threes. Sheridan and Delenn gave orders from more than one place
- in the tactical center, so it's probably not a matter of the
- lights denoting different functions.
- * Garibaldi's empathy for Franklin, to the point of waiting next to
- Franklin's bed, is likely due at least in part to Garibaldi's own
- experience with substance abuse ([23]"Survivors," among other
- episodes.) He presumably knows something of what Franklin has been
- through.
-
- Notes
-
- * Franklin's stumble into the crowd was reminiscent of two scenes
- from [24]"Chrysalis," both Petrov's approach toward Garibaldi, and
- Garibaldi's later emergence at the party.
- * In Britain, Channel 4 edited out seven seconds of the attack on
- Franklin.
- * In a video message in [25]"Revelations," Anna Sheridan was
- originally played by Beth Toussaint, not Melissa Gilbert.
- * Some people have pointed out an apparent continuity glitch, but
- it's not. When Franklin is being wheeled into medlab after being
- stabbed, he sees Garibaldi, Ivanova, and Sheridan above him, even
- though Sheridan hasn't yet arrived on the station. But if you look
- at the surrounding shots from Franklin's point of view, it's clear
- he's simply hallucinating and imagining that the doctors around
- the gurney are his fellow officers; nowhere but that one shot do
- any people in command uniforms appear.
-
- jms speaks
-
- * It takes 7 days to film an episode. My favorite is probably
- "Shadow Dancing," which you haven't seen yet, mainly because I
- haven't been able to poke any holes in it yet. It's a good ep.
- * _Which of the last five episodes is your favorite?_
- It would be an even tie I think between the final two, "Shadow
- Dancing" and "Z'ha'dum." The two episodes are also linked at the
- hip, so they're really more like one unit...not so much a
- two-parter, but siamese twins, story-wise. They're both very
- exciting, move the arc forward hugely, and though they rely on a
- lot of backstory, are also good points for folks new to the show
- to dive in, because they also *explain* a lot of backstory, so
- they can get into it.
- They're both just lovely, knockout episodes. And, at times, scary
- as hell.
- * _About the UK possibly not showing the episode due to violent
- content_
- Yeah, when you get "Shadow Dancing," I'd love to see how much they
- slice outta this one....
- * It is, not to put too fine a point on it...EXTREMELY important to
- see "Shadow Dancing." If they choose to cut the nasty bits that's
- one thing, it won't affect what You Need To See, but to not run it
- at all would be a disaster of substantial dimensions. Still, I
- imagine they'll run it; the nasty bits can be excised pretty well,
- if necessary, I should think.
- * If they cut 7 seconds, it's likely the 7 seconds of the actual
- stabbing itself, which is implicit in what happens afterward, so
- it shouldn't have a major effect on being able to follow the
- story. It's a reasonable edit, and about what I'd expect given the
- general attitudes on TV violence among the UK TV networks.
- * "You've mentioned a couple times that the upcoming "Shadow
- Dancing" will be quite violent. Should I be concerned about, say,
- my two-year old watching it? She's as hooked on the show as I am,
- and would probably feel quite left out..."
- This is a tough one...I've given it a lot of thought since I saw
- this, and my sense is to advise the following:
- If you possibly can, videotape the episode. Get the time code on
- the various pieces. We cut in and out of two stories, an A and a B
- story. One is violent, the other is not. You don't have to see the
- one, or see much of it, to follow the other. For someone as young
- as 2, I'd suggest fast-forwarding past the B story stuff. It's
- still within what's generally permitted on TV, but it is kinda
- harsh.
- * I've seen and received some email recently that seems to have
- taken a message of mine and misconstrued it. Someone asked me if
- it were possible that "Shadow Dancing" might be snipped or dropped
- for some of the violence therein. I offered an *opinion* that it
- might be edited, and have no idea what their plans are for airing
- the episode itself. Let me repeat: this was only my opinion,
- offered in response to a hypothetical question. I have *no*
- information on anything C4 might -- or might NOT -- do with
- "Shadow Dancing," so my inclination would be to wait and see what
- happens rather than acting prematurely on something that might not
- happen.
- * _Have you ever gone walkabout?_
- Well....yeah, kinda. Back when I was living in San Diego (before
- it got nuked...well, that hasn't happened yet, but soon)...I got
- into a kind of similar mode of thought, and would go for walks
- through....downtown San Diego at 2-4 in the morning. Hours, hours,
- hours, just walking through parts of the area where I could've
- gotten killed. When folks asked me why, I couldn't answer, all I
- could come up with...was that I was looking for something. And I
- found it, kinda, and in a somewhat similar situation... but that
- gets into some other personal areas, and this may not be the right
- forum for that. Suffice to say I was....almost killed myself, and
- leave it at that.
- * Here's a funny thing.
- Well, funny weird.
- See, every so often, someone will ask, "How much of you goes into
- a script?" and I'll answer, "More than I know at the time," and
- they ask for an example. A few questions ago, someone asked about
- if I'd ever gone...on walkabout, and I thought of the San Diego
- thing...and it suddenly dawned on me that that was behind the
- Franklin thing. Long story short: I got attacked and mugged by a
- gang, and beaten nearly to death....and survived only by a sheer
- act of will. And I'd honestly never, ever put that together with
- Walkabout, until the question, and suddenly there it was, I was
- working out *exactly* what I'd gone though, denying it to
- myself...the whole time that it was going on. Well. Anyway. That
- just hit me like a ton of bricks, and thought I'd pass it along.
- * In retrospect, that was something I probably should not have
- mentioned, and would not have, had the thing not just utterly
- blindsided me in the middle of the conference. What got me through
- the attack, and its aftermath, those years ago, was sheer
- unadulterated rage...that I would not allow them to take my life
- because I had stories left in me to tell. And no matter what, I'd
- tell those stories. At first, I'd made my peace with myself...I'd
- never gone out of my way to hurt anyone, had helped where I could,
- had done some good work...I had a few things on the shelf, not a
- lot, but a start...but then I just started to get mad about it,
- and pulled myself back from the edge.
- So yeah, in a sense, I've faced that black, implacable wall...and
- it does drive you, after a while. And I do think, to a large
- degree, I'm still trying to define myself, to find what it is
- that's at the center for me, beyond the work. But then, I don't
- think that's terribly special...it seems to be the standard
- dilemma in an industrial society.
- * _In response to a review_
- Slight correction to the preview of the final 5 scenes at
- Worldcon; in the Delenn/Sheridan scene, she never said female
- Minbari can cut off the partner's sexual organs if they're
- pressed...what she said was, "If he forces the issue, she can
- complain to the elders, leave once he is asleep, even cut of his
- --" she searches for the right word "-- *access* to her family."
- The humor is in his horror at what she might've been searching for
- in that word. A small correction in an otherwise great review, but
- as someone once said, god is in the details.... _[That quote is
- from the architect Ludwig Mies Van der Rohe.]_
- * The Minbari greeting is a hoot...there's a lot in that episode I
- just like a lot.
- * _Earth is still letting people come to Babylon 5 as tourists?_
- It's difficult and limited, but yes, there's still some travel,
- just as one may travel to countries that the US does not recognize
- officially or have diplomatic relations with. How long they
- continue to allow this...we'll see.
- * _How did Marcus heal so quickly?_
- For starters, we're talking about more than two weeks of story
- time. Between Grey 17 and Rock was several weeks, then you've got
- about 2 weeks from Rock to Shadow Dancing. That's five weeks, and
- now you've got the issue of medicine 250 years from now...and you
- can be sure that these kinds of injuries will be fixed much more
- quickly. It isn't like he showed up the very next day like this,
- we *did* allow for proper amounts of time.
- * _How did you think up the Shadows' strategy?_
- I dunno...I just thunk it up as efficient and ruthless. I guess it
- comes naturally when you're a producer.
- * "Seems to me the strategy is: wait in hyperspace "near" the flock
- of refugee ships, and when they signal for help (as they will when
- the Shadow fleet appears), pop out of hyperspace and engage the
- Shadow fleet. The point is, the Shadow fleet is going after a
- known target (or so Sheridan guesses), if you hang around near the
- target, they will tell you when the attackers appear. No need to
- for your ships, even a scout, to sit in normal space, the refugee
- ships are all "scout ships" in a sense."
- Massive logic problem. If you wait until they're right on top of
- the refugee ships, or very near, they'll just dive into the midst
- of the refugee ships and there's no way you can have a clean
- battle without resulting in *MASSIVE* amounts of civilian
- casualties. What you suggest would all but insure that the refugee
- ships would be destroyed (defeating the purpose of the mission)
- and the piles of civilian ships running for cover in every
- direction would hinder our side, but not the other side, and we'd
- lose even MORE of our own ships.
- "2) Delenn and Sheridan spend the night together and we get to
- watch... comercials. Talk about giving "short shrift" to a rather
- interesting event. Couldn't this have been pushed into a different
- episode? I mean, here they are, alone together, in a "ostensibly"
- romantic situation, lots for them to talk about I should think.
- Well, I'd like to know what was said... And what do we see?
- Sheridan is already asleep!"
- It's not a matter of being pressed for time. The whole point of
- the ritual was to watch him sleeping. We had that nice moment
- right before they took off with the fleet, and bunches of others,
- including the big kiss, right in the previous episode and
- throughout the whole thing.
- "3) I think the battle could have been done with a bit more of an
- "umph" to it. Perhaps the use of intercutting between the two
- plots was distracting in this case. It was a good battle, just not
- quite as effective as "Severed Dreams" or "Long Twilight Struggle"
- (which did have effective intercutting)."
- That's because there was more emotional content to the other two
- battles you mention; the bombing of the Narn homeworld, and EA
- fighting EA in SD. Not all battles are created equal, it's a
- matter of context. You can't expect to get exactly the same
- reaction to all of them.
- * _Why didn't the Shadows emerge right next to their targets?_
- So they could drive any other ships toward the center, into the
- killing zone. If they come in into the center, everybody splits in
- every possible direction, and that makes running 'em all down
- harder.
- * If the shadows were to materialize in the midst of the refugee
- ships, they'd just scatter in every direction. The purpose is to
- wipe out all those ships quickly and efficiently...so you start at
- the outer fringe, drive everyone inward, and then wipe them all
- out. To jump into the middle of them makes it very hard to do
- this...it's like herding kittens.
- * Most refugee ships are NOT jump capable. Remember, it takes a LOT
- of power...you've got the heavy cruisers, and long range
- exploratory vessels, and not much else. That's what makes the
- White Star so special, that it can be as small as it is and still
- generate a jump point. The Asimov class passenger liners, for
- instance, can't jump, and have to rely on gates. The smaller ships
- the refugees would've been using would have had to get to their
- local gate, and then line up to go through it in small groups.
- Which means 85% of them would've been trapped there, ducks in a
- shooting gallery.
- * _Did the Minbari telepaths need line of sight to affect the Shadow
- ships?_
- Actually, we never showed what the Minbari telepaths were looking
- at; for all you could tell, there could've been viewers or other
- ports above their beds.
- * _We couldn't hear the characters speak at the end of the battle.
- Audio problem?_
- No, we just figured we'd let the music take it.
- * "When I saw "A Late Arrival at Avalon," Marcus's line asking "Who
- is Morgana La Fey" got me to begin speculating that Anna Sheridan
- was alive and that she was working for the Shadows. My question is
- whether or not Marcus's line was intended that way--i.e. as
- foreshadowing that a significant female figure not presently on
- the scene (Anna?) would arrive at B5 to play Morgana to Delenn's
- Lady of the Lake?"
- yup.
- * No, Sheridan isn't the man in the middle...the man in the middle
- is the one out there who sent Anna. As Ivanova says, his opposite
- number.
- * _Why did Kosh send those dream images?_
- Well, certainly Kosh was accessing that which he could, in part to
- prove he knew what he knew, in part to set things up. Although who
- knows, there may be more to it...that that's what they came up
- with doesn't necessarily mean that is the full extent of it.
- * The snow globe was shown as a flash-forward in "WWE-2," and we did
- see that image of Sheridan in Psi Cop uniform in "All Alone."
- * With "Shadow" my hope is really to erase most (though obviously
- not all) suspicions or predictions on how the last one will go. If
- we already had our big EFX battle, it won't be that...Anna's here,
- so it can't be that...it can't ever be a return to tabula rasa, an
- empty slate, but by doing what's normally done in the season
- closer one episode prior to that, it may help ease the way for a
- different tonality to come in.
- And thanks again...you definitely won't be disappointed.
- * _Was "Commander Ivanova is on channel 4" a reference to the UK
- network? And what could possibly come next?_
- Yeah, the channel 4 reference was a nod to the UK. Wondered if
- it'd get noticed....
- Good point, when you do a battle like that...what do you do next
- that won't seem anticlimatic? Usually you save something like that
- for your last episode of the season, not your next-to-last, or
- you've blown your big EFX show 1 show early. It makes for a real
- challenge...what do you do to follow THAT up?
- I think we figured it out....
- * _Why not show more of Sheridan getting ready to sleep, with Delenn
- watching over him?_
- Basically...we've got 44 or so minutes...we could've shown the
- whole battle as shown, or shown Sheridan trying to sleep. One
- would have to go to make room to include the other.
- * _Why did the White Star make its own jump point when there was a
- jumpgate nearby?_
- And then, there are just times you do it 'cause it feels more
- dramatic that way....
- * _Do people on Earth hear about events like this battle?_
- They've heard rumors, usually the ones furthest away from Clark's
- confining influence....
- * _Why the change in actresses playing Anna?_
- There was a combination of reasons, including production
- schedules, for the decision.
- * _Why were station personnel seemingly surprised to see Anna? And
- why did Melissa Gilbert come last in the list of guest stars?_
- The script said the extras shouldn't make a big deal about seeing
- her. The director did that on the set. That's not what I had in
- mind, but it isn't that big a deal...I figure she's a striking
- looking woman, maybe that's a good justification.
- The ordering of credits was done to de-emphasize and hide (as much
- as possible) the appearance of Melissa.
- * Under SAG rules, you must put guest stars of a certain calibre in
- the opening credits; also, for Melissa to take back-billing would
- have been a break in her work to date elsewhere. We had no choice
- in this, it's all stuff regulated by the guilds.
- * _Were the Vorlons absent from the battle because of the death of
- Kosh, or for some other reason?_
- There are other reasons, which yes, will be addressed soon....
- * _Why didn't they call in the Walkers from Sigma 957 ([26]"Voices
- of Authority?")_
- Simple....you don't bring in the big guns like that until you're
- ready for the final assault. You don't whistle 'em up when
- convenient. You can probably go to the well just once with these
- guys, and you want to do so only when you're ready for D-Day.
- * _Was the bit about true faces taken from an existing religion on
- Earth?_
- As far as I *know*, at least, that bit about seeing your true face
- revealed as you sleep is something I came up with on my own.
- There's just something I like about it, and if you've ever watched
- someone's face while they're sleeping, you understand.
- Though one person did comment, "So a man's true face is all mushed
- up against the pillow and drooling?"
- We don't talk anymore.
- * "I gritted my teeth tighter when the dialogue launched into some
- anti-male paranoia about "What if the male demands the female stay
- a second night?", and the various "vengeances" she could take for
- a custom that is, after all, steeply in her favor. I could accept
- all that in an anthropological sense: "Look what anti-male customs
- the Minbari have. Isn't that fascinating, if you put the moral
- judgements aside?". But then... Yeesh!"
- The "vengeances" she cites, should the male insist she stay
- another night, are "she can leave once he falls asleep, complain
- to the elders, even cut off his access to her family." These
- hardly sound like anti-male rhetoric, but rather precautions taken
- to deal reasonably *should* someone get out of line. It doesn't
- state that all men do this, but sets in place what to do should
- *some* men do this.
- This is not a problem of context. It is a problem of perception.
- It has nothing to do with the scene, and everything to do with how
- you perceive the role of males in society.
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